Reviewer: Ebony14
Date: 07/26/07 2:26
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

cool! i really liked ur fic. nice details;-)

Reviewer: hmrpotter
Date: 06/25/07 13:52
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

From one new author to another, I think your story was very well-written, and very sweet. Keep it up!

Reviewer: Potter_Pirates_Love
Date: 06/06/07 15:17
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

Beautiful.

Reviewer: sugarhigh
Date: 05/08/07 18:54
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

love it

Reviewer: hanna_Weasley
Date: 04/25/07 0:47
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

it is good a little rushed but awsome other wise!! i love the part when he gets the courage and tells her whats what lol good job buddy!!

Reviewer: BeachBabe
Date: 03/13/07 17:15
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

That was very good! I liked how they just sort of fell together.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 03/09/07 20:47
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

you've donebrilliantly now i'm going to go look for that harry/ginny story you mentioned.

Reviewer: notevil
Date: 03/06/07 9:40
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

awe, that was lovely.

Reviewer: goGinny_84
Date: 02/26/07 2:54
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

I really liked this story. I could just picture Hermione with her head on the table, talking in a mumble. Good job. But, I think it would bebetter isyou put it in past tense, instead of, "Moonlight spills through the window..." it could be"Moonlight spilled throught the window...". I think that would make it easier to read.

Reviewer: hollyberries
Date: 02/25/07 13:30
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

i really liked the first half, but after ron kissed her it got a little out of character for me. i think it was good though :).

Reviewer: hollyberries
Date: 02/25/07 13:30
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

i really liked the first half, but after ron kissed her it got a little out of character for me. i think it was good though :).

Reviewer: aks_jeraj
Date: 02/14/07 12:07
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

I'll be honest to you i liked it but i didn't get the end and i was hoping it would be longer. But as you have said you are making a sequel for it i'm hoping it will continue from where it left off. As it was your first i would say it was pretty good for a beginner. 8/10

Reviewer: frakkerific
Date: 01/28/07 15:30
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

okay, my only prob is the fact it isn't in the proper tense. it can't be present, it is annoying, took me out of the story. i like the whole idea, but as i read it i was mentally changin the tense, ie

"He doesn’t know what to say to that so he just lets her carry on."

i read it in my head as this:
"He didn't know what to say to that so he just let her carry on."

trust me, it works much better. other than that, keep writing, but work on writing in the proper tense.

Reviewer: ciscomom
Date: 01/23/07 14:04
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

This was a sweet story - my only confusion was near the end where Hermione takes a step toward Ron - they had been sitting down at the table. A little thing, yes, but one that can distract the reader from the story as it plays out. Makes one wonder "when did they stand up - what did I miss"?

Reviewer: BeachBabe
Date: 01/15/07 13:27
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

That was really good. I always have thought that Hermione and Ron went together nicely!

Reviewer: piperweasley
Date: 01/14/07 21:35
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

I love this story and would love to read a sequel including Ginny and Harry. I think that this would be wonderful.

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/25/06 12:53
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

Awww. It starts out all uncomfortable and shy and scared. Hermione just has all these feelings that are bottled up and Ron sort of just takes it. But then they both say what they really want to; and it's just so sweet! I know I would like a squel.

One question, weren't they sitting at the table? I don't rememebr them standing up. Myabe I just missed it...

Reviewer: RonandMioneForever
Date: 12/10/06 19:00
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

Wow, I'm your 100th comment! Haha well verry cute story :)

Reviewer: amsies360
Date: 12/09/06 19:42
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

oh i really loved this story. I also really liked Harry's part at the end.... I'll read that story next... great job!

Reviewer: sunshinefairy
Date: 12/02/06 10:36
Chapter: 3 A. M. Confessions

Oh, that was soooo sweet! I loved it. Please write more!!!!!!!!!!!

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