Reviewer: flynhghr
Date: 11/04/13 2:34
Chapter: The Brothers Grim

I don't think that at this juncture of the storyline you realize what you are doing to Harry. His whole life, up until he began adolescence he was told his existence doesn't matter. That nothing he could do in his life could possibly effect another human being magical or naught. His raising was based on the fact that his life did NOT matter to general consensus. Throughout puberty he gradually learned that EVERYTHING he did or thought had HUGE consequences in wizarding, and -even muggle- realities. In effect, you are forcing him to take actions that not only influence magical life, but also muggle life, without regard to his emotional being. He cannot consider his actions as just impacting his love Ginny or her family, he has to consider the impact on the world. He loves the Weasley family and what that family means to him, which is why he cannot fathom bringing the first female born in several generations into a situation of danger. No more than he could consider ending his own life to force the responsibility onto someone else not prepared, or at least less educated in the necessary path. Harry realizes at this point what his decisions mean to human existance, not just to the family that adopted him with open hearts. Yet you are forcing him to accept the unfathomable (possibly life or death) decision over the life of the most important Weasley in several generations.

Reviewer: bibliophileballetbaby17
Date: 06/13/11 13:39
Chapter: Occlumency

oh ron

 

Reviewer: bibliophileballetbaby17
Date: 06/13/11 9:26
Chapter: In Like a Lion, Out Like a Lamb

omg funniest chapter eva

 

Reviewer: bibliophileballetbaby17
Date: 06/12/11 16:21
Chapter: The New Order

the dunes don't go out 20 miles from the lake and it doesn't resemble Mongolia at all more like large hills of dirt it definitely doesn't cover buildings. The terrain 20 miles from lake Michigan is suburban. I know I live there. :) just a helpful tidbit to make ur story more factual. :D

 

Reviewer: cskohl
Date: 10/28/09 9:34
Chapter: The Other

I just wanted to say the story line was very good. The only thing that I thought was not appropriate and too much information was the intimacy between the two couples. But overall, the whole story was very well planned and thought out. Please continue to generate more fan fiction. Thanks.

Reviewer: cskohl
Date: 10/22/09 14:54
Chapter: The Storm Before the Calm

I did not think about this myself about how confused it must have been for them all. The fact is that they had alot of emotions brewing between them such as being teenagers, confilct of war happenings and the love they had for each other. You did very well in telling what could have happened between Ron and Hermoine, Harry and Ginny. A job well done.

Reviewer: cskohl
Date: 10/19/09 14:24
Chapter: The Brothers Grim

As I am reading this, I feel that this could have happened. This was very good. Thank you for your efforts and continue doing a good job.

Reviewer: sparktruwizard
Date: 10/24/07 18:13
Chapter: The Other

one of the best i have read and i have read a whole lot!

Reviewer: Frankie Nicholas
Date: 07/19/07 20:40
Chapter: The Other

A most enjoyable and enlightening read. I particularly liked some of your characterisations of existing characters, and noticed one or two great culture references (The Dark Lord having a servant called Baldric... lol).

Reviewer: albvs
Date: 06/02/07 17:52
Chapter: Mind and Soul

i just realized something missing and am wondering if u every mentioned hedwig all?

Author's Response: A bit here and there. S.

Reviewer: ginny75
Date: 05/26/07 18:42
Chapter: The Other

that was a very good one. I cant wait for you to write more you are a good story teller.

Author's Response: Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. S.

Reviewer: kingscross54
Date: 05/19/07 23:44
Chapter: Despair and Hope

Couldn't stop reading. Read every chapter in one night and starting the "sequel" tonight. Excellent job.

Reviewer: moppy
Date: 05/04/07 11:27
Chapter: The Other

I must say since this is only the 2nd HP story I've read (written about Harry's final year at Hogwarts and the end of the prophecy with Voldemort) is was in Ron's words "Bloody brillant!!!"

Not the same style as JK Rowling (not that you seemed to try to do) but it had a great style and had me on the edge of my seat waiting and wanting to know what happens next.

10/10 for a great story! :D

Author's Response: Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. S.

Reviewer: ginny_potter72
Date: 04/18/07 15:16
Chapter: The Other

luv the story!!! another excellent one...now im going to go read the sequel

~GinnyP72

Reviewer: heyjude
Date: 03/14/07 21:08
Chapter: The Other

you are an amazing author. i put off everything else i was doing (wisely? eh...) and read your story form start to finish over two days. Your form is as "spell-binding" (pardon the pun) as Ms. Rowling's herself! Although legally impossible, you should have this story published. keep up the PHOENOMENAL work!

~Jude

Reviewer: molly_irwin
Date: 02/27/07 22:07
Chapter: The Other

awesome story i loved it. i would take a good guess and say that you are an american. well thanks for the aweaome story again.

Reviewer: molly_irwin
Date: 02/25/07 15:47
Chapter: A Distraction

ooooooooooooooooooohhhhh

Reviewer: molly_irwin
Date: 02/25/07 14:33
Chapter: Martin Morley-Mauer

oh my god is right you are an awesome writer you and the rest of the writes on this site should actually become writes later in life.

Author's Response: Thanks for the generous comment... maybe someday! S.

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/27/07 6:23
Chapter: The Other

I don't really like the part where you said convicted Death Eater's children were not allowed in Hogwarts, etc. Sort of discrimination..other than that, it was a good ending

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/27/07 4:23
Chapter: The Calm Before the Storm

wow all these short parts of everyone's life is really building up the suspension!!!

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