I think that was a very good first chapter. Everyone was well in character. I liked Aunt Petunia's new attitude as well.. I don't know if she'd have her sister's photos though.. anyhow, great job! I'm gonna read the next chapter now.
great story, waiting for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, hopefully you won't have to wait long, it should be validated in the next day or two. Hope you enjoy the next chapter and do let me know how I'm doing.
*sigh* once again I've found a wonderful story that's only at the very BEGINNING!!! Argh! I love it Steve, very well written, and I shall watch this space with eager anticipation of Chapters 3 and beyond!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, HogwartsHoney, I'm glad you liked it. Chapter 3 is in queue and should be up soon. Hope you enjoy it and do let me know how I'm doing.
Awesome beginning! You've got a really great writing style. I can't wait for the next chapters!
Author's Response: Thank you, BackInBlack, I'm glad you liked it. My third chapter is in queue so please do read it once its validated. Its a pretty interesting chapter so I'd love to hear what you thought of it.
I'm the first to review! Well, what hav I got to say? Brilliant!! I never knew Aunt Petunia would come out all like that! Lol. I'll keep reading so keep updating ok?
Thanks for the review. I didn't originally mean for Aunt Petunia to come out like that but the idea suddenly popped into my head and I put it down.
I will update soon and please do keep reviewing. I'd love to know how you like the story any ideas you may have as well.
Chow for now.