Ooohhh!!! Aww! I Loved that SOO much! You're such a fantastic writer!!!
i loved the story and the song went perfectly with it!
aaawww!!! that was SO cute!!! i love how u did different perspectives!
aww. that was such an interesting way to look at lily and james getting together and i think it was great!
ps- the song goes perfect with it!
it was a very very good story .. although it all happened quite fast in my opinion .. because at first they werent talking and barely saw each other .. then they suddenly started flirting with each other .. it was all sort of mixed up
and i didnt get the part bout the invisibility cloak .. whyd he get it :S
but i think that the good plot and well woven story didnt make those (in my opinion) flaws show very much so well done and i hope i can read more of your stories
Cute story but the song doesn't really go with it.
Cute story but the song doesn't really go with it.
Brilliant!The song went perfectly with the story.The only thing I could suggest was, well nothing!
Good story, but it could use a bit more revision. Consider a beta next time.
I loved this! I thought the way you switched perspectives was very effective. Great job!
That was really good. I liked how you put in bits of the song, it all fitted together really nicely.
Awwe, that was so sweet!!! I liked it a lot!!
I liked it!! i wish it was longer though! you should make it through out the whole year! i would totally read it!
you chose the perfect song! and james was great, not to mention incredibly adorable as always...
but i dont think lily's really like that to tell you the truth, its not really how i pictured her, not really the giggly type....
it was really cute. well done.
Hey!! I loved it!! 'Everywhere' is my favortie song, and your fic made me like it even more!! lol!!
okay, so I take back my other review... I've already read your other story... and now I'm wondering if this one shot is where you want that one to lead? You're a wonderful writter! I hope to hear more from you....
