That was really good.. I saw your advertisment.. so I came on over. And I really enjoyed it. Thanks for being so creative with the story line. J/L fics do seem to be all the same. But I really liked Lily's reaction at the end.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I did try to make it original, but believable all the same. Poor Lily, she really was quite upset.
Hey. I'm from the mugglecast forums. You linked to it, so I decided to read it. After all, us mugglecasters need to stick together *blush*. Moving on, definately a good start, I liked it a lot. and I mean a LOT. I'm not just saying that to compliment, if I don't like something, I'll probably just say it. I'm honest. HONEST!! Anyway, I liked the OCs, but I think you should balance Sarah and Violet, or people are gonna get tired of Sarah. Anyway, a 10. Great job. Love it.
Author's Response: Mugglecasters for life! *mugglecast confetti* =) Anyway, thanks so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I guess the reason I had so much Sarah in this chapter was because I already have her whole backstory in my mind and she will be the most relevant to the plot later on. I'm still working on where I want to go with Violet. I will definitely take what you said into consideration, though. You're right, I will need to balance them out more.
Hey. I really love this. It's really original and I'm glad someone finally took a new approach on the Lily/James situation. This is definitely one of the best I've read. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I should have the next chapter up fairly soon, glad that you're excited =).
Hey! excellent new approach to the Lily/James thing! I'm always up for something new and fresh to read, not to mention write lol Oh wait, that sounded as if I plan to copy yours lol no I would never do that, I just meant I am not a fan of cliches either! hehe I'm going to give this a ten because It was very well written, and it wasn't like most of the other fanfictions about them!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad that you like my approach, don't worry I never thought you meant you would copy it! Cliches are really annoying, aren't they? =)