great story... i am adding it to my favs. update soon
I always enjoy Snape, Harry stories, please continue.
Oooh I love it!Snape worrying about Harry?Fresh!I'll add you to my fav page.Love the story!
OMG, this story rox...it has definite similarities to HPB, but its completely different @ the same time...hurry up & post the next chapter!!!!
i love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please update soon. 10/10
Very good. You really wrote the order meeting well. Great so far. Keep it up. ;)
I've already loved the first three chapters and now I loved this one, all I have to say is: MORE!
Great story! Up-date soon, when you find time!
Yet another excellent chapter, keep up the good work ol' chap. UPDATE soon, I check almost everyday...and wait, and wait, and you still haven't left the fourth chapter. I wonder if I'm just babling. Anywho, I'll check up on this story later.
Another excellent chapter...update very soon. I can see this story in my head, which only a few fanfics can do, and I have a very good imagination so it's bad for them. Anyway, update soon.
Awsome job, update soon. Can't wait till the second chapter.
Hmm Snape suddenly is concerned about Harry Potter, very interesting. I can't wait to see where this is going. Great chapter, update soon!
Great chapter! I think you're really getting somewhere with this plot and it's making readers think about what might happen (I know I am! :) ) 10/10 Keep it up!
Ooooh *shivers* the plot thickens!!! Nice chapter update soon!!! 10/10
Another great chapter! Just remember not to have to characters say bloody too much. It gets kind of annoying. Plus, I think it's a little ooc for Snape.
By the way, you were right about Susan Bones. I looked it up and it turns out she is a Hufflepuff. My mistake. ;) 9/10
great chapter!! awesome! update soon!
Another great chapter! Very nice job on this. It was well written, and you fixed the Susan/Ravenclaw thing!(Sorry I'm so picky on those knid of things.) I even thought the Ron/Hermione moment at the end was good, and I don't really like them together. Sorry I don't have any contructive Criticism because I'm really tired, and I couldn't think of anything. Great job, though! 10/10
Great story - really interesting idea to explore where Snape's loyalties truly lie. Keep it up!
That was really, really good! This is my first Dark/Angsty fic and, I must say, you made an excellent first impression! Please update! 10/10 ~~Anna de Boullans~~ *I looked at your wall/Saw that old passport photograph/I look like Iíve just jumped the Berlin Wall/Berlin, I love you/Iím starting to fade/Letís fade together/Letís fade forever* ĖďFade TogetherĒ by Franz Ferdinand
What a great first chapter. It had me hooked from the very first sentence. I'm adding this story to my favorites. Update soon!