Reviews For Sleep Like a Child
Reviewer: Scuterbug
Date: 05/21/12 21:02
Chapter: Fate cannot be escaped..

That was so good! It was sad, but really good! I went to look for the sequal and sadly, it is taken down. Have you thought about reposting it at all? I would really love to read it! If not, maybe you could post it somewhere else and send me the link? I am dying here!

Reviewer: Scuterbug
Date: 05/21/12 21:02
Chapter: Fate cannot be escaped..

That was so good! It was sad, but really good! I went to look for the sequal and sadly, it is taken down. Have you thought about reposting it at all? I would really love to read it! If not, maybe you could post it somewhere else and send me the link? I am dying here!

Reviewer: Pottergurlie
Date: 09/11/08 15:31
Chapter: Fate cannot be escaped..

erm...i think its a bit to short for me...but good nonetheless

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 08/23/07 8:58
Chapter: Fate cannot be escaped..

That was soooo sad! Really god but really sad!

Reviewer: lucky girl
Date: 01/14/07 23:39
Chapter: Fate cannot be escaped..

OMG way to make me cry geez that's so sad but really written well but Harry can't die i hope that he comes back he has to or else i'll be in depression 4 the rest of my life
~Lucky Girl

Reviewer: Marsprincess
Date: 08/23/06 18:27
Chapter: Fate cannot be escaped..

wow very touching, i actually cried while reading it!! Loved it!!

Reviewer: sair_bears
Date: 06/28/06 8:57
Chapter: Fate cannot be escaped..

i have to say not the best written fanfic , but good for a first try. Great idea quite a bit of heart ache , i had a little tear.

Reviewer: amy4rupert
Date: 05/15/06 13:38
Chapter: Fate cannot be escaped..

add on to previous comment

I dont really bother with songfics but i love to write them!I love the way you have chosen the right song,how it fits the mood and how dangerously sad it is.But really the highlight of the story to me is how you never actually say Harry is dead.Not because i dont believe himdead,i do.But beause it leaves a beautiful effect because although you never said he was dead,we know he is dead.Its a beautiful story!Im such a cry baby i cry at everything!

Author's Response: Do i really never say Harry's dead? Wow, didn't notice that at!

Reviewer: amy4rupert
Date: 05/15/06 13:35
Chapter: Fate cannot be escaped..

Ive read this after i read the sequel.If you've already read my review i put i almost cried for it.Tears were welling up but they never left.Mine was the one about love and loathe.This one REALLY made me cry.I doubt ive ever read a fanfic or in fact any story at all(except maybe OOTP)that has made me cry as much as this one has.I was also expecting the promis me one thing bit to turn out as the promise "Call the baby James!Make sure he knows about me!"Great story best ive ever read,favs list here u cum!

Author's Response: Oh i didn't cry in OOtP, because somebody *casts a side glance at friend who is looknig sheepish* gave away who was going to die! I did feel incredibly angry though...i wish I'd had an office to trash without having to tidy it up...

Reviewer: NeoGirl1704
Date: 04/21/06 21:14
Chapter: Fate cannot be escaped..

Wow, that was really beautiful how you twisted Joss Stone's song into the story. How emotional and downright sad!
Two thumbs up.

Author's Response: oOooooOOO two thumbs up! Whoopeee!!

Reviewer: NikkiJo
Date: 04/17/06 17:04
Chapter: Fate cannot be escaped..

I love this fic. It is very emotional, and very touching. Keep it up, and let me know when you write another one.

Author's Response: I have so many ideas for fan fics,they all whizz around my head constantly and I have actually began one but it's not making much progress because of my original story, which I want to finish this summer. Anyway, i will alert you when I update or actually write another fic when I get off my break (Mugglenet deleted my fancy little letter i wrote...I think I might had been a tad hostile...)

Reviewer: SPEWsupporter518
Date: 01/20/06 12:11
Chapter: Fate cannot be escaped..

Sad yet wonderful! I was kinda glad you had Harry die; I'm sort of like how Ginny is in that fic, I don't want Harry to die but I know he probably will in book 7. It was good to see someone write that ending for a change. One thing though . . . did Harry know Ginny was pregnent? I can't wait to read your next one!

Author's Response: YAY! You think my story is wonderful! I can't thankyou enough for your kind words, and I'm glad I pleased you with Harry's death. It is sad, but, like you said, it is likely he will die. And also *GASP* I DIDN'T MENTION IF HARRY KNEW! Well, it would be interesting, but he does know Ginny is pregnant. The next story is....UP! Its in the Ron/ Hermione AND Harry/Ginny section and its called, 'Clouds on the Horizon' I'm going to post the second chapter after I've written this response, and it makes it perfectly clear in that chpater if Harry knew or not. :) THANKS AGAIN!!!

Reviewer: honeydukeschoclate
Date: 01/15/06 14:52
Chapter: Fate cannot be escaped..

Wow! What a great story! I'm relived someone had the nerve to kill the great Harry Potter. Most people don't attempt it. I don't want him to die but I accept that is most likely going to happen. I really like Harry's last words to Ginny to live on her life. I do want to read the sequel, so start it up soon! Thanx!

Author's Response: Thanks!!! Well, I'm going to make a confession...writing this....DIDN'T MAKE ME CRY! *harry/Ginny shippers gasp* I think its because I've got myself to believe thats he is going to die whether I or anyone likes it or not, so unlike Ginny, I have come to accept it *shrugs* I don't know, perhaps its because I've become sued to killnig characters off. Anyway! Harry's last words. Yes they will be VERY IMPORTANT in the sequel, which had deleted itself for some reason. *ponders* Ginny's reaction to this comment (or to remind you, "mmmm") tells us a clue of how she will go about with his last words. I'll try to send it again, since either mugglenet deleted it without telling me or I deleted it by accident or somehting like that.

Reviewer: GWeaz
Date: 01/11/06 14:58
Chapter: Fate cannot be escaped..

This was great, but sooo sad. I definitely liked it a lot, and it was an awesome job on your first fic too. I'm in the process of my first fic too, and I know how good a review can make you feel, so here you go.

Author's Response: *gasp* thats amazing, two reviews with a space of ten minutes in between! I think I did a decent job on this, I'm glad you liked it, I was slightly worried since this place is swarming with H/G shippers. (I'm one too *shrugs*) Anyway, since you gave me such a nice review, when you've finaished your first fic I'll read it and return the favor :) Theres a sequel to this with CHAPTERS! Its being written at the moment, when I've done a couple chapters I'll post it on here!

Reviewer: harryandginny4ever
Date: 01/11/06 14:17
Chapter: Fate cannot be escaped..

Great one-shot! The song you chose definitely fit the mood. By the way, I'm reading Knife Edge at the moment! Wasn't the first one so sad?!

Author's Response: Thankyou for your lovely review, it did make me smile :) I've loved this song for a long time and when the idea of creating a fan fiction to it came, the story just kinda popped into my head! And also, yay! A Malorie Blackman fan! I love the noughts and crosses series. The first one is so incredibly sad. In the second one, every time Callum's name was mentioned I would burst into tears! Well anyway. Thanks again and a sequel is coming up! I'm in the middle of writing it (and it has chapters! eekkk!)

Reviewer: Hot48cricket
Date: 01/10/06 15:59
Chapter: Fate cannot be escaped..

Very well done - but so sad! (and I don't like Song Fics!) I hate that everyone thinks that Harry's going to die when he defeats Voldemort!

Author's Response: To be honest, i hardly ever read song fics, BUT I can see why people write them. It helps to describe the mood of the story...if it is impossible to explain sometimes. Personally, I do HOPE harry isn't going to die but I just have this awful nagging feeling that he will. I can actually see how J.K will end it (not like mine I don't think) and I can see where the word 'scar will go at the end (J.k says this will be the last word of the series) But the real truth is, we won't know until we read that very last word in about two years time. Sequel to this is coming, if you thought this was sad...*hides from fellow H/G shippers...just in case*

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