Reviews For Before They Died
Reviewer: pureblood_4489
Date: 08/23/07 2:08
Chapter: I Have Specific Orders From Dumbledore

1. chapter 3
2. Can I Just say goodbye then?
3. No
4. 9
5. Yes

Reviewer: pureblood_4489
Date: 08/23/07 2:07
Chapter: I Have Specific Orders From Dumbledore

1. chapter 3
2. Can I Just say goodbye then?
3. No
4. 9
5. Yes

Reviewer: DarkLordsApprentice
Date: 12/04/06 19:46
Chapter: I Have Specific Orders From Dumbledore

1. What was your favorite chapter? I would have to go with the second one, it was the darkest, and I especially liked the way you used the quotes from the books in it to make it really fit in with canon.
2. What was your favorite quote? She was intent on saving her son now. If she let Voldemort take Harry away from her too, without a fight, she knew that she would never forgive herself for it. It just really shows Lily's strength and personality, the way she won't give up even though it's hopeless.
3. Was there a part that made you cry? No, but I almost did, and it takes a lot to make me cry.
4. Out of 10, how would you rate this story? Nine, there's always room to improve, no matter how good you are.
5. Would you read anything else by me? Yeah.

I just thought this was a really good version of the night they died. I've read others, and this is one of the better ones. Your characterization was great, and I love the few OCs you threw in too.
The only thing I noticed was that you switched between tenses a few times, but not often.

The Order of Ravenclaw House Elves

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I always like finding a new review. The thing with the tense switching was because I originally wrote it in the present tense and then I tried to go through and fix it, and I knew I missed some. Good luck with the Order! ;)

Reviewer: Sirius_Rulezs
Date: 07/06/06 20:14
Chapter: I Have Specific Orders From Dumbledore

it was really good and i no dat id read another one of ur fics.

I Love Sirius Black, he's so hot and just so dreamy. when i say i luv him i mean the one my age. i wish he were my bf

Author's Response: Thanks so much, and I'd have to agree with you about Sirius. He's so yummy! :D It's like we're on the same Sirius-frequency. Oh, and I love your penname.

Reviewer: HPLOVEER
Date: 05/13/06 18:44
Chapter: I Have Specific Orders From Dumbledore

1. What was your favorite chapter?
2. What was your favorite quote?
3. Was there a part that made you cry?
4. Out of 10, how would you rate this story?
5. Would you read anything else by me?
answers:
1: i loved them ALL
2:'He knelt down, brushed away the rubble, and lifted a hand-held silver framed mirror off the ground. He looked at it with a sad smile and placed it in his robe pocket, remembering the days of the Marauders.

I think Ill give this to Harry when hes older. I think hed like that, he thought smiling inwardly.'
3. when sirius started crying
4. TEN

Reviewer: HPLOVEER
Date: 05/13/06 18:44
Chapter: I Have Specific Orders From Dumbledore

1. What was your favorite chapter?
2. What was your favorite quote?
3. Was there a part that made you cry?
4. Out of 10, how would you rate this story?
5. Would you read anything else by me?
answers:
1: i loved them ALL
2:'He knelt down, brushed away the rubble, and lifted a hand-held silver framed mirror off the ground. He looked at it with a sad smile and placed it in his robe pocket, remembering the days of the Marauders.

I think Ill give this to Harry when hes older. I think hed like that, he thought smiling inwardly.'
3. when sirius started crying
4. TEN

Reviewer: HPLOVEER
Date: 05/13/06 18:44
Chapter: I Have Specific Orders From Dumbledore

1. What was your favorite chapter?
2. What was your favorite quote?
3. Was there a part that made you cry?
4. Out of 10, how would you rate this story?
5. Would you read anything else by me?
answers:
1: i loved them ALL
2:'He knelt down, brushed away the rubble, and lifted a hand-held silver framed mirror off the ground. He looked at it with a sad smile and placed it in his robe pocket, remembering the days of the Marauders.

I think Ill give this to Harry when hes older. I think hed like that, he thought smiling inwardly.'
3. when sirius started crying
4. TEN

Reviewer: HPLOVEER
Date: 05/13/06 18:44
Chapter: I Have Specific Orders From Dumbledore

1. What was your favorite chapter?
2. What was your favorite quote?
3. Was there a part that made you cry?
4. Out of 10, how would you rate this story?
5. Would you read anything else by me?
answers:
1: i loved them ALL
2:'He knelt down, brushed away the rubble, and lifted a hand-held silver framed mirror off the ground. He looked at it with a sad smile and placed it in his robe pocket, remembering the days of the Marauders.

I think Ill give this to Harry when hes older. I think hed like that, he thought smiling inwardly.'
3. when sirius started crying
4. TEN

Reviewer: HPLOVEER
Date: 05/13/06 18:44
Chapter: I Have Specific Orders From Dumbledore

1. What was your favorite chapter?
2. What was your favorite quote?
3. Was there a part that made you cry?
4. Out of 10, how would you rate this story?
5. Would you read anything else by me?
answers:
1: i loved them ALL
2:'He knelt down, brushed away the rubble, and lifted a hand-held silver framed mirror off the ground. He looked at it with a sad smile and placed it in his robe pocket, remembering the days of the Marauders.

I think Ill give this to Harry when hes older. I think hed like that, he thought smiling inwardly.'
3. when sirius started crying
4. TEN

Reviewer: HPLOVEER
Date: 05/13/06 18:44
Chapter: I Have Specific Orders From Dumbledore

1. What was your favorite chapter?
2. What was your favorite quote?
3. Was there a part that made you cry?
4. Out of 10, how would you rate this story?
5. Would you read anything else by me?
answers:
1: i loved them ALL
2:'He knelt down, brushed away the rubble, and lifted a hand-held silver framed mirror off the ground. He looked at it with a sad smile and placed it in his robe pocket, remembering the days of the Marauders.

I think Ill give this to Harry when hes older. I think hed like that, he thought smiling inwardly.'
3. when sirius started crying
4. TEN

Reviewer: HPLOVEER
Date: 05/13/06 18:44
Chapter: I Have Specific Orders From Dumbledore

1. What was your favorite chapter?
2. What was your favorite quote?
3. Was there a part that made you cry?
4. Out of 10, how would you rate this story?
5. Would you read anything else by me?
answers:
1: i loved them ALL
2:'He knelt down, brushed away the rubble, and lifted a hand-held silver framed mirror off the ground. He looked at it with a sad smile and placed it in his robe pocket, remembering the days of the Marauders.

I think Ill give this to Harry when hes older. I think hed like that, he thought smiling inwardly.'
3. when sirius started crying
4. TEN

Reviewer: HPLOVEER
Date: 05/13/06 18:44
Chapter: I Have Specific Orders From Dumbledore

1. What was your favorite chapter?
2. What was your favorite quote?
3. Was there a part that made you cry?
4. Out of 10, how would you rate this story?
5. Would you read anything else by me?
answers:
1: i loved them ALL
2:'He knelt down, brushed away the rubble, and lifted a hand-held silver framed mirror off the ground. He looked at it with a sad smile and placed it in his robe pocket, remembering the days of the Marauders.

I think Ill give this to Harry when hes older. I think hed like that, he thought smiling inwardly.'
3. when sirius started crying
4. TEN

Reviewer: HPLOVEER
Date: 05/13/06 18:44
Chapter: I Have Specific Orders From Dumbledore

1. What was your favorite chapter?
2. What was your favorite quote?
3. Was there a part that made you cry?
4. Out of 10, how would you rate this story?
5. Would you read anything else by me?
answers:
1: i loved them ALL
2:'He knelt down, brushed away the rubble, and lifted a hand-held silver framed mirror off the ground. He looked at it with a sad smile and placed it in his robe pocket, remembering the days of the Marauders.

I think Ill give this to Harry when hes older. I think hed like that, he thought smiling inwardly.'
3. when sirius started crying
4. TEN

Reviewer: HPLOVEER
Date: 05/13/06 18:44
Chapter: I Have Specific Orders From Dumbledore

1. What was your favorite chapter?
2. What was your favorite quote?
3. Was there a part that made you cry?
4. Out of 10, how would you rate this story?
5. Would you read anything else by me?
answers:
1: i loved them ALL
2:'He knelt down, brushed away the rubble, and lifted a hand-held silver framed mirror off the ground. He looked at it with a sad smile and placed it in his robe pocket, remembering the days of the Marauders.

I think Ill give this to Harry when hes older. I think hed like that, he thought smiling inwardly.'
3. when sirius started crying
4. TEN

Reviewer: HPLOVEER
Date: 05/13/06 18:44
Chapter: I Have Specific Orders From Dumbledore

1. What was your favorite chapter?
2. What was your favorite quote?
3. Was there a part that made you cry?
4. Out of 10, how would you rate this story?
5. Would you read anything else by me?
answers:
1: i loved them ALL
2:'He knelt down, brushed away the rubble, and lifted a hand-held silver framed mirror off the ground. He looked at it with a sad smile and placed it in his robe pocket, remembering the days of the Marauders.

I think Ill give this to Harry when hes older. I think hed like that, he thought smiling inwardly.'
3. when sirius started crying
4. TEN


Author's Response: This is really weird. I have my account fixed so I get an email everytime a new review pops up. Imagine my surprise to find 27 emails, 19 of them concerning reviews for this story. The response is very generous. Thank you kindly. ~lily_writes ;)

Reviewer: HPLOVEER
Date: 05/13/06 18:43
Chapter: I Have Specific Orders From Dumbledore

1. What was your favorite chapter?
2. What was your favorite quote?
3. Was there a part that made you cry?
4. Out of 10, how would you rate this story?
5. Would you read anything else by me?
answers:
1: i loved them ALL
2:'He knelt down, brushed away the rubble, and lifted a hand-held silver framed mirror off the ground. He looked at it with a sad smile and placed it in his robe pocket, remembering the days of the Marauders.

I think Ill give this to Harry when hes older. I think hed like that, he thought smiling inwardly.'
3. when sirius started crying
4. TEN


Author's Response: Thank you so very much. Though, I find it overwhelming that you sent me 19 of the same review. It is touching all the same that you loved it so much.

Author's Response: Apparently, my math is as horrible as I think it is. ;)

Reviewer: DracosloveBunny
Date: 02/24/06 13:17
Chapter: I Have Specific Orders From Dumbledore

Brilliant, as usual. Even though I'm supposed to be doing research, just thought I'd stop by and drop a line. I really love the story. And I'm glad I could help beta the story.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm supposed to be doing my homework right now (it's study hall right now, and my Zinn book is open next to me). I'm happy you could beta my story too.

Reviewer: Sootyface
Date: 02/13/06 10:54
Chapter: Im Not Here For You, Im Here For Him

Hey. This is cool - I saw the summary and thought there would be much more build up, but it's been done well and I look forward to seeing what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks! I just got word today (2-22) that chapter 3 went up. Hope you like it! Oh, and don't forget to look for the one shot sequel, Pain Can Lead to Laughter.

Reviewer: lily_writes
Date: 01/30/06 14:19
Chapter: Actually I Am, On Both Counts

Oh crap. My bad grammar has resulted in chapter 3 getting deleted! *screams so loud my four reviewers can hear me* I will put it back in as soon as my new Beta can look it over. That may take a week or two. Sorry abou the hold up and I hope you understand. ~lily_writes P.S. Sirius is in it ;) *sighs dramatically* I love Sirius.

Author's Response: Yeah! Chapter 3 with all its sirius-ness (God, I use that word too much) is finally up. *jumps up and dances around the house, finally sits back down and continues typing*. Thank you soooooooo much to my reviewers and my Beta, dracoslovebunny. If anyone wants a good story to read try two of my favorite authors Secret Lily and Kelsid. I've also read some of the stuff written by my reviewers and they are pretty good writers. So if you are reading this right now, you should go read the stuff written by the two mentioned above and the reviewers. love always ~lily_writes

Reviewer: DracosloveBunny
Date: 01/27/06 8:38
Chapter: Im Not Here For You, Im Here For Him

Hey chica!! I am loving this story so far. Keep writing or I may have to kill you, adopt your identity, and write the story myself. However, my good friend, I must say that despite editing, you still have some past-tense vs. future-tense errors. If you want, I can beta for you and take out the errors I find, because I edit for my sister too. Not too many errors I saw, but a few I can fix for you. Sorry I had to comment about the errors, but I'm OCD about grammatical errors. Anyway, we can only hope chapter 3 gets through soon. I can't wait to read what happens next!

Author's Response: You can Beta me, that would be awesome, I'll just send them to you as I type them. I can't believe my bad grammar is still attacking my stories! AAARRGH! *breathes calmly* I submitted chapter 3 earlier, and I'm waiting to hear about it.

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