Haha! Pantomancy! Really liked that idea, but not the imagery, I guess. Dumbledore wearing Snape's pants? Ughh...
Anyways, good chapter, with some hilarious ideas and lines. I have to tell that I quite liked the idea of Dumbledore's of imposing membership fee. Clever! And the sentence: "The reader is now to be spared any snivelling answer given by James Potter because it is at this point that Albus Dumbledore, with no thought for the already strained nerves of Lily Potter and the likelihood of her reaction to a sudden intrusion being both swift and brutal, apparates inside their godforsaken hovel." is simply hilarious!
Author's Response: Thanking ye! Yes, it is a rather nasty idea...
This is shockingly well-written, and not above using a good dose of bathroom humour. I don't know why I read this, I never think underpants are funny (except like two years ago when I used to read Captain Underpants, but I was only in sixth grade!) and I am less than fond of Snape, but I just ADORED this story! Though I prefer not to think of Dumbledore wearing Snape's pants. *Vomits* I am going to give this a ten, although I was preparing to give it a five before I read the fic.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Ooh I feel motivated all of a sudden...I feel another chapter coming on!
hehehe..... totally hilarious. by the way, since you put 'no cockerels were harmed' at the end of the first chapter, don't you need to put 'no underpants were harmed' at the end of the second? just a vague idea. the poor underpants get soaked, and worn by Snape AND Dumbledore! so they deserve pity ;) luna_eyes x3
Author's Response: The said underpants are currently in therapy and are alas unavailable for comment. Thanks for reviewing!
Hi, fellow Ravenclaw! I think this story was pretty entertaining, although I don't read many humour fanfics (because they lack humour and then it doesn't make sense, you see), but you made me laugh. Best lines for me: Snape remembered his old headmaster’s devotion to these garments and allowed himself a vindictive leer. Socks. Oh, Dumbledore! *tears* The pants, however, had been the worst. Simple line, but that was where I have laughed the best. and was heard to mutter a word that made the infant Hermione, many miles away, say “Ron!” in a reproving voice. It was the beginning of a lifelong habit. Terrific! All in all a very good start and Snape isn't that OOC.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Well I had to say it was OOC because there are lots of warnings about it dotted around the site and I didn't want to be killed, be it by hard-core Snape fans or by anybody else! Yay Ravenclaw, and thanks for revieving x
Yes!! An awesome story, toilet humor and all! Underpants, Shakespeare, Firewhisky, and Severus "Greaseball" Snape... lol! Write more, this was excellent!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! There is a new chapter, not as good as the first because it is more of a linking chapter (containing the Potters) but Snape shall be back in Chapter 3! Hurrah!
In most humour stories, the jokes, what are meant to be funny, usually fall flat. But I have to say, despite teh toilet humour, this is a really good piece of work! You managed to make it funny, and yet, made it seem so ... I won't say In-Character, because Voldemort telling Snape to go without pants certainly isn't (Your statement about how Voldy asks Wormtail to robe him makes a whole lot of sense ... makes you think. Hmmm ...), but it seems ... natural, I suppose. =) And now I'm rambling. Good job!
Author's Response: Ha! I think I should start a Voldy Wears No Pants cult...hmm...
The best story I have ever read. Think now I will have to die! Please keep writing........Loup_garou I love your work!
Author's Response: Cheers!
Yay!! first to review!! lol pretty good! lol keep writing...
Author's Response: *Gasps* My first ever review! Thanks a million!