Haha. Nice. I like how you have James and Lily on friendly terms, though I expect something's going to happen to cause the kerfuffle at the lakeside. Oh dear. This is goign to be interesting. Hehe
Author's Response: you guessed it! i'm trying to stay slightly canon, so the episode at the lake will happen! ^_^ oh, how i love being mischievous! thanks for reading (and reviewing, cause you always review! hehe. okay. i'll go now. bye :)
I like it how you make mcgonagall out to be young, instead of old. It is a different way to express things. Very unique! I love it!
Author's Response: thanks, i'm glad you liked it! i figured mcgonagall should be young cause otherwise she'd be like 100 in harry's time, lol! thanks for reading (and reviewing!)
umm, im not so sure about this chapter. it was alright but was it just a filler or is it important to the plot?
Author's Response: it's not important at all, just kind of showing that even people in hufflepuff can have prejudiced ideas about muggleborns. thanks for reading, the next chapter will be more exciting, i promise!
Gah! That song. (In the last review, I forgot to mention it. haha) My mom signs that every once in a while. But just aht first verse. She dowloaded it a while ago so that we could hear it. Good chapter. I liked the bit about Sirius being a hair off with eye rolling. haha. Good.
this is a very good, cute story so far. i do hope it'll become more serious, but the beginning is really good! you portray the marauders and lily just the way i imgaine they were, and jackie is a fun oc. it's also good how peter isn't a complete ***, cause if he had been, then the other marauders wouldn't ever have been friends with him in the first place
Author's Response: thanks! i'm glad you liked it, and it will get more serious soon, though it will stay fluffy, too.
VERY GOOD I OVE IT BRING ON MORE I LOVE YOU FOR THIS STORY ITS LIKE NONE I'VE EVER READ. KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: wow. that was a very nice review! thanks, i'm very glad you liked it! chapter five should be up soon!
Pretty good chapter. Poor Lily. I couldn't imagine a head ache like that. Oh dear. Keep writing, and keep updating. :-)
Author's Response: thanks, i'm happy you liked it! i've started chapter five and it should be submitted by this weekend! thanks for reviewing!
I love lily's 'cold mask'. The Marauders (aside from Remus , of course) are so scare of her, and its so funny! '...Peter say to James "But I thought she was mad at us!"..' lovely story, now update, dahling, and dont take too long about it, see? 10/10.
Author's Response: yeah, i like that scene in the infirmary where they're all (except remus) scared of her! i try to make my story funny but i don't consider myself humorous, so there's likely to be more sarcasm than actualy humor in here. glad you enjoyed it though, i'll try to update soon dahling! ;D
Well, that's a different way to portray Lily! I've only thought of her a couple of times like that. But it was good!
Author's Response: well, the reason i portrayed her like that was cause i was getting a bit tired of the usual lily/james stories that all have the same basic scenes, and i had realy and liked a few stories where lily and james were friends, so i decided to have a go at it myself! i'm glad you liked it, though! thanks for reading (and reviewing!)
Author's Response: ahh, i feel stupid, i made a typo on my response: instead of "and i had realy and liked a few stroies..." i mean "and i had read and liked a few stories..." sorry! ^_^
adorable story!....please dont tell me Lily is gonna say 'i dont like more than a friend' to James.....coz she should sctually say 'I LOVE YOU' to him......update soooooooooon
Author's Response: of course lily's not going to say that, she relaly does love him, she's just got to figure that out for herself! lol, i will update soon...hopefully...
Very Nice...... I love the whole thing with Lily not hating James and the fact that James is shy..... that is sooooo cute!
Author's Response: thanks! i think it's kinda cute too! ;D
I love this story! I like it how Lily doesn't hate James! It makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside! :)))) 343259875798/10! Kudos to you!
Author's Response: thank you! i know this story's a little au, but i got tired of all the same old same old lily/james stories, so i decided to do something different, cause there aren't as many stories when they're friends. anyway, i'm happy you liked it! thanks for reading and reviewing.
Author's Response: glad you liked it!
how could dumbledore have done that?
Author's Response: see chapter four :)
she never brushes her teeth?:/
Author's Response: well, i suppose that's an exaggeration; she brushes her teeth once a day, really, but the point is, her teeth are really nice, and even if she doesn't brush her teeth she doesn't get cavities or anything.
Nice update! I like the way all of the friends are very natural with eachother, and how you gave an explanation for why Lily's headache was so intense. Good job!
Author's Response: thanks, i was kind of proud of the explanation i came up with for lily's headache, given that i hadn't thought of it when i gave lily the headache! lol, anyway, glad you liked it! thanks for reviewing.
I love jackie. she seems cool. this story too by the way :P i love lily james stories!! keep it up
Author's Response: thanks! i think jackie's awesome too! (and this story! lol) next chappie should be submitted soon! thanks for reviewing.
Yay! sarcasm i love it . ( no really .)
Any way good chapter hurry and update.
Author's Response: hahaha, i like your penname, i love sarcasm too. i'm glad you liked the chapter, i did too! thanks for reading (and reviewing)!
this is so good!!! totally AU, but really good. update soon!
You really need to update soon. I really like this story.