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Name: harry potter lovee (Signed) · Date: 01/07/11 15:43 · For: Chapter Five
great! keep it up!

Name: Queen_Lily (Signed) · Date: 05/24/07 18:30 · For: Chapter Five
I wouldn't be able to LIVE if I hadn't eaten for more than 12 hours, even. Wow! I have a new respect for Lily! Whoa...

Name: Queen_Lily (Signed) · Date: 05/24/07 18:19 · For: Chapter Four
ďAh, but does Lily Evans have any ammunition to use once she gets out of the shower?Ē You have some really funny quotes in here! Jax is my favorite character! Love your story, and onto chapter 5!!!

Name: Queen_Lily (Signed) · Date: 05/24/07 18:12 · For: Chapter Three
'Thatís interesting. Iíve never fainted before.' Kind of a weird thought when you're about to pass out!!!

Name: Queen_Lily (Signed) · Date: 05/24/07 18:05 · For: Chapter Two
I like Jax. I think she's going to lead Lily in 'the right direction'. And Lily can deny it all she wants, but we all know that she and James end up together. Anyway, onto chapter 3!!!

Name: sfc823 (Signed) · Date: 04/15/07 23:48 · For: Chapter Five
look i meant to leave a review here and it went into chapter one but seriously this is an amazing story you have here and i am in desparete need for new chapters pleeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssseee!!!!!

Author's Response: oh wow! thank you so much!!!! your reviews are great, i'm so glad you like my story! and no, i'm not giving up on it and i WILL eventually update...i guess it's just that i'm busy, but i promise you that i will submit the sixth chapter this weekend! thanks for giving me that extra push to write the next chappie! -sara

Name: sfc823 (Signed) · Date: 04/15/07 23:44 · For: Chapter One
I Love your story to death and i know it pretty much hopeless cause by the look of it you havent updated in ages but you are a great writer and i think this story is amazing and you really should updte it because it is just not fair for you to start something this amazing and then leave us hanging with a great begining, but no ending or middle or climax
no lily and james actually together
you have such a great style and i was really looking foreward to seeing how you wrote whith them together

just please consider updating you have too good of a thing going to end it when the story is just begining


Name: sfc823 (Signed) · Date: 04/15/07 23:30 · For: Chapter Four

Name: sfc823 (Signed) · Date: 04/15/07 23:23 · For: Chapter Three

Name: sfc823 (Signed) · Date: 04/15/07 23:00 · For: Chapter One
i like jackei she's cool and i like that lily and james are really good freinds and dont hate each other

Name: mugglespy11 (Signed) · Date: 02/18/07 22:09 · For: Chapter Five
great story

Name: Amanda_Potter (Signed) · Date: 08/25/06 14:32 · For: Chapter Five
bloody brilante update soon

Name: sweeterthanhunny (Signed) · Date: 07/28/06 8:45 · For: Chapter Five
Mcgonall is only HOW old?!!!! Only 5 years older than Lily, aka 21? For real? (nice chapter, btw)

Author's Response: ya, i know, i'm thinking about changing minnie's age...thanks for reading, glad you liked it! -sara

Name: Iwishiwern Tamuggle (Signed) · Date: 07/17/06 19:55 · For: Chapter Five
oo i like it, update soon, i need a new chapter!

Name: uknowho (Signed) · Date: 07/16/06 7:35 · For: Chapter One
I loved this. i like your idea that lily was friends with the marauders. this is very well done. no time now but ill read the rest of it later. lots of love, maya or uknowho

Author's Response: thanks, i'm glad you liked it. or what you've read anyway. hope you enjoy the other chappies too! -sara

Name: SiriuslyPadfoot101 (Signed) · Date: 07/14/06 10:43 · For: Chapter Five
omg...poor lils!!
she shouldnt have gotten detention!!

Author's Response: i know, i just love being evil! thanks for reviewing! -sara

Name: SiriuslyPadfoot101 (Signed) · Date: 07/14/06 10:23 · For: Chapter One
awww...how sweet!!
i luv Jackie!!
I hope she and Sirius get together!!

Author's Response: i'm not saying anything about jackie and sirius...~_~ thanks for reviewing! -sara

Name: Valentinia (Signed) · Date: 07/13/06 21:35 · For: Chapter Five
Good chapter. I love the image of the "faces falling comically", as well as the description of the looks on everyone's faces. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: thanks, i'm glad you liked it! sorry though, i'm submitting a one-shot before the next chappie...i hope you'll like it though! thanks for reviewing! -sara

Name: Valentinia (Signed) · Date: 07/13/06 21:34 · For: Chapter Five
Good chapter. I love the image of the "faces falling comically", as well as the description of the looks on everyone's faces. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Name: bookworm247 (Anonymous) · Date: 07/11/06 4:38 · For: Chapter Five
heyyyy.... why wasn't there any origami in this chapter? this is a fun stor, and i really enjoyed reading it. but now, we need a little action between lily and james. i hope mcgonagall gets to have some fun too!!!!

Author's Response: i hadn't even noticed that i had origami in the last few chapters...i'll try to include some next chappie! :) thanks for reviewing! -sara

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