I wouldn't be able to LIVE if I hadn't eaten for more than 12 hours, even. Wow! I have a new respect for Lily! Whoa...
“Ah, but does Lily Evans have any ammunition to use once she gets out of the shower?” You have some really funny quotes in here! Jax is my favorite character! Love your story, and onto chapter 5!!!
'That’s interesting. I’ve never fainted before.' Kind of a weird thought when you're about to pass out!!!
I like Jax. I think she's going to lead Lily in 'the right direction'. And Lily can deny it all she wants, but we all know that she and James end up together. Anyway, onto chapter 3!!!
look i meant to leave a review here and it went into chapter one but seriously this is an amazing story you have here and i am in desparete need for new chapters pleeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssseee!!!!!
Author's Response: oh wow! thank you so much!!!! your reviews are great, i'm so glad you like my story! and no, i'm not giving up on it and i WILL eventually update...i guess it's just that i'm busy, but i promise you that i will submit the sixth chapter this weekend! thanks for giving me that extra push to write the next chappie! -sara
I Love your story to death and i know it pretty much hopeless cause by the look of it you havent updated in ages but you are a great writer and i think this story is amazing and you really should updte it because it is just not fair for you to start something this amazing and then leave us hanging with a great begining, but no ending or middle or climax
no lily and james actually together
you have such a great style and i was really looking foreward to seeing how you wrote whith them together
just please consider updating you have too good of a thing going to end it when the story is just begining
::hearts::
Sarah
i like jackei she's cool and i like that lily and james are really good freinds and dont hate each other
Mcgonall is only HOW old?!!!! Only 5 years older than Lily, aka 21? For real? (nice chapter, btw)
Author's Response: ya, i know, i'm thinking about changing minnie's age...thanks for reading, glad you liked it! -sara
oo i like it, update soon, i need a new chapter!
I loved this. i like your idea that lily was friends with the marauders. this is very well done. no time now but ill read the rest of it later. lots of love, maya or uknowho
Author's Response: thanks, i'm glad you liked it. or what you've read anyway. hope you enjoy the other chappies too! -sara
heyy
omg...poor lils!!
she shouldnt have gotten detention!!
lurrrveeeeee
Mina
Author's Response: i know, i just love being evil! thanks for reviewing! -sara
heyy
awww...how sweet!!
i luv Jackie!!
I hope she and Sirius get together!!
lurrrrvvveee
Mina
Author's Response: i'm not saying anything about jackie and sirius...~_~ thanks for reviewing! -sara
Good chapter. I love the image of the "faces falling comically", as well as the description of the looks on everyone's faces. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: thanks, i'm glad you liked it! sorry though, i'm submitting a one-shot before the next chappie...i hope you'll like it though! thanks for reviewing! -sara
Good chapter. I love the image of the "faces falling comically", as well as the description of the looks on everyone's faces. Can't wait for the next chapter!
heyyyy.... why wasn't there any origami in this chapter? this is a fun stor, and i really enjoyed reading it. but now, we need a little action between lily and james. i hope mcgonagall gets to have some fun too!!!!
Author's Response: i hadn't even noticed that i had origami in the last few chapters...i'll try to include some next chappie! :) thanks for reviewing! -sara
