Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 10/22/07 20:25
Chapter: The Long Goodbye Part Two: Blaise and Terry

wow what a great chapter. I am so glad blaise and her dad made up. And she is introducing him to terry as her husband. those are big steps. Anyway this chapterwas very sweet. Only one more to go. such a bitter sweet parting.

Author's Response: Oh yeah, a huge step...especially since Enrique didn't start yelling Spanish expletives as he beat the crap out of the wizard who ran off with his daughter! LOL I hate the thought of parting...can't you find another chapter fic of mine to read? :D

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 10/22/07 20:08
Chapter: The Long Goodbye Part One: The Scooby Gang

ok this is anoying my computer kleeps frezing so i keep having to re-write the reviews. Anyway the scooby gang is very cool. I can not belive the mystery ended that way. I am dying to find out who the ferret was it remindes me a lot of malfy but i know draco would never do that and luciouse is in jail so i gues i'll just have to keep on reading to find out. As for your last comment to my review it I agree with you tenage marrigaes are not encouraged by me but terry's and blaise's situation is diferent and they are fictional characters so yeah it's cool for them. I loved it when luna went up to wesley and was all like don't yu dare giv ethat book to any other girl but me. This is a very cool chapter. It is sad that the story is ending very sad indeed but at the same time exiting. anyway great job.

Author's Response: Barty Crouch Jr turned Draco into a ferret...why can't DE's be turned into ferrets to spy? It's a mystery DE, and like some mysteries in the books, never solved.

Reviewer: PorcelainRose
Date: 10/22/07 20:02
Chapter: The Long Goodbye Part Three: Draco and Ginny

I wish this could go on forever and ever!
Sadly it can't!
This has been a dream to read and I've had a marvy time reading and reviewing!
You really are talented and I hope you keep on writing fics like this for ever and ever!
I am so depressed that I've finnish this!
Thanks for writing this fic and taking me along this magical journey with you (hah)
I will leave you with on of my fave words and one I have used to review many of your chapters.
So well done, this fic truly is...
Fabby :)

Author's Response: Thank you for letting me relive the story through your reviews! It's meant a lot to me, and I hope you'll keep reading my other stories...that would be fabby! :)

Reviewer: PorcelainRose
Date: 10/22/07 19:22
Chapter: The Long Goodbye Part Two: Blaise and Terry

I love these characters! They are lovely!
And even though their relationship has been rocky it has been beautiful!
I salute you!
How depressing last chap!

Author's Response: When it's over, it isn't really over. There are a couple of one shots! ^_~

Reviewer: PorcelainRose
Date: 10/22/07 19:02
Chapter: The Long Goodbye Part One: The Scooby Gang

*sob* Goodbye Scooby Gang *sob*
It has been a joy to see your side of the charatrrs and the ones you have made up.
2 more chaps left!
Ah well, I can always re-read :)

Author's Response: And there's one shots...and other stories! Thank you so much for wanting to reread!

Reviewer: PorcelainRose
Date: 10/22/07 18:45
Chapter: Love is the Sweetest Thing

OMG MARRIED! CAN'T BELIEVE IT! I thought Blaise and Terry would be doing 'other' things... not that!
Oh, you do like to make us cringe with your Mr and Mrs Weasleys sex life innuendos!
First part of last chap *sob*
I'm going to miss this!
Wonderfull chap, just glorious! :)

Author's Response: It's love, twoo wuv. They have to get married. That way, parents can't say a darned thing, lol. Only B&T, though. Everyone else has to wait. :D

Reviewer: PorcelainRose
Date: 10/22/07 17:54
Chapter: Love and Madness

I love this fic so much!
It's coming to an end and I'm so sad!
Oh my gosh I LOVE it when Gred and Forge finnish each others sentences!
And 'Larry' would have been so much easier to say then Xenophilous LOL!
love it

Author's Response: He was too wacked for my taste, too! I'd rather have her dad be driven to out-sell the non-prophet! LOL Oh well, Lunatic Larry lives in one dimension of the Potterverse! :D

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 10/21/07 20:52
Chapter: Love is the Sweetest Thing

that was a very nice chapter. i had quitea laugh imagining draco with legolas-lenth hair. I can't belive terry and blaise got married. that is very cool they totally deserve it. this was a very cool chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope I stated clearly that I totally do not support or encourage teen marriage unless you're Blaise and Terry, fictional lovers who aren't the typical teenagers without money, maturity, or marketable skills! :D

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 10/21/07 0:15
Chapter: Love and Madness

i loved this chapter i really liked the different pov's. I totally sympathise with blaise. I'm really glad she left. man she is very brave. i wonder if the plan will work. I can't belive the raven was marisol. i really do hate he she is so cruel. anyway it's late and i guess i'll have to finish reading tomorrow.

Author's Response: Marisol is a crazy witch, no dobut about it!

Thank you for giving so much of your time to read. Anytime you finish is fab with me!

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 10/20/07 23:16
Chapter: Circle of Friends

crabbe was really sweet right there. I'm starting to get a bit worried about those threats. but the girl's day out was excellent and the quiddich match vs. girls dilema was fun to watch. the ball was fantastic. you did a superve job.

Author's Response: Thank you very, very, very much! :)

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 10/20/07 22:23
Chapter: Sitting, Waiting, Wishing

i loved this chapter. luna's dream was strange. and hands is defenetley creepy but the girl's day out sounds like a lot of fun. And when ginny starts day dreaming that was the best. Draco is very brave i wonder who the animagus is and what mr. weasley will do about the threat. and i wonder how the girls spend their day i defenetly look forward to reading that. and goyle was the best with his george the pet quote. great job.

Author's Response: Thank you! The books are from Harry's pov, so we don't get an unbiased look at Slytherins, so Goyle never is shown as more than 'muscle' but I like to think there's more to him than that!

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 10/20/07 21:25
Chapter: Something Wicked This Way Comes

i am really glad you gave luna that dance. she deserves it so much. and wesley is so perfect for her. Draco's and Ginny's outing was fantastic. I found it extreamly funny. The dances were great. I loved it when ron asked for that outfit in red. And then when blaise went to the party claiming to be invited by wesley and luna that was fantastic. I must confess this i had to read this chapter in five times i never found the time but i wanted to come back so much. anyway it's great i'll now go keep on reading.

Author's Response: That you re-read makes me so happy! (I'm getting all vaclempt!) *hugs*

Reviewer: PorcelainRose
Date: 10/20/07 20:06
Chapter: Circle of Friends

I loved your "Girly day out"
And I loved the bit when Ron snogs Hermione breathless infront of everyone.
Ron is such a sweetheart bless him!
I wish Pansy would shut up and get on with what ever shes doing instead of dropping hints.
But I'm sure she will in the next chapter :)
Fabby again!

Author's Response: I grinned when Hermione dropped everything and kissed him in DH. I thought he would do that to her! Pansy, though, I'm sooooo glad Jo left Draco's wife unidentified, because to me that means it wasn't Pansy. HA!

Reviewer: PorcelainRose
Date: 10/20/07 19:25
Chapter: Sitting, Waiting, Wishing

I laughed out loud at the "Blaise bent her head, as if shy, and then raised her eyes entreatingly" bit I can just imagen it HAHA

Author's Response: Princess Diana was famous for using that look to make people love her, but even non-royals can use it to win people over. :D

Reviewer: shadow123
Date: 10/20/07 18:52
Chapter: The Long Goodbye Part Three: Draco and Ginny

Oh my God.

I just want to say that I have been with you from the beginning. This is the most amazing story that I have ever read. Thank you. You made me laugh and cry and dream about feeling like this.

Thank you so much.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading the story! I know the word count probably puts off some readers. Yay for you thinking that's a good thing, and I hope you feel like that very soon!

Reviewer: PorcelainRose
Date: 10/20/07 18:48
Chapter: Something Wicked This Way Comes

Yes I am Glad
This chapter makes me want to sing!
Love lifts us up where we belong...
lol :)

Author's Response: I'll just hum it, singing it out loud would make me giggle. :D

Reviewer: PorcelainRose
Date: 10/20/07 16:14
Chapter: Actions and Reactions

YAY! Ron is so... Heroic!
Lol bless him :) Oh, and Draco too.
Another swell chapter!
Can't wait to read the next!

Author's Response: That's my reaction to him too....bless him! (When I'm not wanting to knock his head with Harry's like Snape did in the GoF film, heh)

Reviewer: PorcelainRose
Date: 10/20/07 9:45
Chapter: Wonderwall

I loved your R.E.M moment!
"It's the end of the world as we know it,"
"And I feel fine." When I read it i was like, 'What song is that?' so i sang it and realised R.E.M!
I love Wonderwall fabby song!
What a great chap for music!
And I loved your bit at the end, what scandle goes on at Hogwarts!
How fabby!

Author's Response: Loads of good lines in songs! Yay for you liking it...and scandal, heehee.

Reviewer: PorcelainRose
Date: 10/20/07 8:10
Chapter: When Dreams Do Show Me Thee

Yay Gred and Forge! haha
And In reply to your comment on my last review, I do hope JK feels guilty for killing Fred! He was the better looking twin ;) LOL
Nice scooby gang too :)
and an awesome chappy!

Author's Response: Alicia doesn't think so...scooby doobie do! :D

Reviewer: PorcelainRose
Date: 10/19/07 15:16
Chapter: Turn, Turn, Turn

Yay Gred and Forge!
Yet again... marvy! :D

Author's Response: I love Gred and Forge too. I hope Jo feels guilt for eternity for killing Gred off!

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