that was a good chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Hogwarts gives a writer so many great settings for romance, I couldn't resist using as many as possible! :D
haha... spike (i always did think he was the hottest one)
awww and its so sad to think of heath now....
He was, definitely!
I watched 'A Knight's Tale' afterwards, and couldn't help wishing he'd changed his stars like his character, Will!
so im reading this story for a second time and i forgot how much i LOVED it! lol
Author's Response: Aw, I love you for that! *hugs*
lvoe it, love it, love it!! well done for a) weaving such a complex and lengthy story , b) for making it work and c) for all those quotes! woo! (if you ever need a beta...)
Author's Response: I worked with two different betas, editing this from the original rough draft on another site. If only I'd known a third was available.... :D Thank you, and I may take you up on it one day!
Seelie...wow... i recently read a book about the war between the Seelie and Unseelie fae... kinda creepy that i find it in your story... im rereading it and i just noticed... the book was called dark fever thoguh i wouldnt recommend readnig it if u dont read about pg 13 level
Author's Response: That's an interesting coincidence! Sometimes I skip the racy bits if a story's good, :D, but I'd rather sex be implied than have nothing left to the imagination. :)
Woopee!!! I'm more than half way through the story - my it's long!
My favourite thing about this chapter? I absolutely love it, and am thinking about what a FABULOUS idea it was while i'm writting this. so simple yet so BRILLIANT. Shall i tell you? Okay! Well, when, at the very end, Draco and Ginny find themselves alone in the entrance and he says to her "All alone, Red...what are you going to do now?" AHHHHHHHH!!!! HOW COULD YOU THINK OF SOMETHING SO COOL?
Keep up the fantrabulous work, and the Draco/Ginny alone thing at the end - AMAZING!
Author's Response: Huzzah for Hi-5's and you being more than half way through! It's the longest story I've ever written....or will ever write, LOL. I have a handful of other stories over 100K but this is the only epic. D/G are inspiring! :D Thank you for liking the lines and using fab words like fantrabulous! *hugs*
it just keeps getting better and better! :]]
Author's Response: I hope you'll continue to say that through every chapter!
haha love it!
May your love grow! :D
I've read this before, but rereading it is just as hilarious and fun! Props to you. :D
Author's Response: You rereading makes my day! Thank you, muchas gracias, merci beaucoup, etc, etc, etc, to infinity and beyond! ^_^
I like "Me like your undress".
I also like the detentions where characters have to swallow potions - secrets and feelings are always resolved. I love truth potions.
And isn't Draco becoming quite the romantic...me likeey!
Indeed, Finally Tarzan and Jane are back together - i'm glad to see the old Blaise back.
I can't do angst in large doses. People are too resilient. We find a way to overcome! :D
Most men like 'undress', don't they? Women, of course, are so much less shallow.....
*sniggers softly to self*
Author's Response: Muchas gracias1 :)
The last chapter was SUPER long. This one - not so long. Everything is going HAYWHYER! What ever will they do. I don't like that Blaise cryed, but perhaps that's what happens when you're in love.
If you think THAT chapter was long, just wait, LOL. Chapter length definitely varies according to the action happening.
Yeah, you cry when you think your boyfriend is breaking up...when life's unfair...when you're trying to do the right thing for others and get treated badly for your troubles. In the next chapters you'll see you can pity yourself and try to cope in negative ways, too. ;)
WOOPEE!!! So they have finally kissed, and i am happy. I'm not sure if i liked how it happened though: With Wesley saying "Hello. It's new years eve. Prepared to kissed". But i'm still very happy with outcome. I'm also starting to not like Harry as much. I'm finding him a really boring bland charcater, not because you're leaving him out or anything like that, but because i feel that is his personality in thsi story. Keep it up!
Have you never seen the classic Rob Reiner film 'The Princess Bride'? Wesley Roberts was inspired by Cary Elwes' portrayal of Westley, the farmboy who becomes the Dread Pirate Roberts and wins the fair Buttercup back from her pig fiance Prince Humperdink. :D
As for Harry, he's definitely a secondary character whose personality isn't seen in the best light. Draco has no sympathy, LOL.
Everytime someone uses the "unmemorable Potion" or whatever it is called, i can't help but feel that it won't work and someone will see them. And Blaise should control her sexual urges around Terry's family.
Bet that's part of the fun of being Unmemorable, the risk. :D As for Blaise, she was thinking 'I'll show you'! ;)
"I look good from all sides". Lovely.
Author's Response: Oh, yeah! ;)
A good chapter. All the characters have a good singing voice somehow. WHY CAN'T I BE LIKE THAT! Dangit!
Author's Response: Fiction is life the way it ought to be. :D
It was an okay chapter - not one of my favourites as nothing really happened. However, i understand it was a chapter THAT must be written as they can't be at school then home in two seconds.
Romance happened! :D
I liked what happened in potions. I am also falling in love with Wesley - he is so darn cool!
Author's Response: Have you ever seen the film The Princess Bride? It's a classic, and the Dread Pirate Roberts, formerly known as the farmboy Westley, will make you love Wesley even more. ;)
I like Wesley. I hope Harry likes Luna. I hope Wesley likes Luna. Then they can both fight over Luna. She's an absolutely wonderful character, i don't know why her quirkiness makes people NOT like her, because that's what makes her one of my favourite characters.
Another well done chapter.
Every school has those kids who make people look at them with wide eyes over how they dress or act....or both! :D Some don't appreciate individuality, but I'm glad you do!
Oh Creevey, that odd, funny perv. I shall never look at his character the same again :P I can't help but find him a little creepy now. :P
Author's Response: I did have a lot of fun making him a little devil with an angel's face rather than 'golly gee whiz' boy, lol.