Reviews For Hide and Seek
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/08/12 22:10
Chapter: Hide and Seek

I read your other story so I decided to read this one too. It was really good just like the other one!(:

Reviewer: dennisud
Date: 09/16/07 11:56
Chapter: Hide and Seek

nice little oneshot to keep is happy!

dennisud

Reviewer: Metropolitan
Date: 09/02/07 20:28
Chapter: Hide and Seek

How simply so sweet! :)

Reviewer: petites sorcieres
Date: 07/22/07 10:40
Chapter: Hide and Seek

Good fic, though i didn't get why Luna was crying ....

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/18/06 19:52
Chapter: Hide and Seek

Aww, such fluff is good for the soul =)

Reviewer: lovegood02
Date: 09/12/06 13:44
Chapter: Hide and Seek

cute love this pairing

Reviewer: siriusly_ginny
Date: 08/10/06 12:47
Chapter: Hide and Seek

awwwwwwwwwww

Reviewer: 4evahpluva17
Date: 06/18/06 11:15
Chapter: Hide and Seek

so cute! i've always thought luna had a thing for either harry or ron. i like the end, just like a Hogwarts couple!

Reviewer: jujume
Date: 06/08/06 12:42
Chapter: Hide and Seek

r u gonna continue or what? im dying here! would you want to be responsible for killing me? i dont think so, so please write on!

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 03/24/06 21:24
Chapter: Hide and Seek

awwww!! cute!!

Reviewer: little_kitty
Date: 02/11/06 17:03
Chapter: Hide and Seek

this was quite good overall. I thought you had a nice way of describing things and you made this story convincing and believable. My only suggestions would be to use words besides "said" because you use that a lot. Also, maybe some more dialogue would be good. Don't get me wrong, I love the story, but some more dialogue might be a bit more interesting. You show a lot of internal feelings and a lot of describing the situation and things, though, which is very good.

Reviewer: wendelin the wierd
Date: 02/11/06 9:11
Chapter: Hide and Seek

An excellent read. I actually enjoyed it. Ok i will review it like this for you what i liked- your general story plotline etc was good. Did not believe harry and luna was possible till i read your fic what i did not like- your sentence formation and construction. It needs to be worked upon but still it was a worthwile read. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: KoolGirl
Date: 02/09/06 20:33
Chapter: Hide and Seek

cute! really cute! i loved it!

Reviewer: electronicquillster
Date: 02/09/06 13:27
Chapter: Hide and Seek

This was a very interesting read - the first Harry/Luna I've taken a peek at, in fact.I thought that some of the sentiments were nice, but I think this could really use some work. A lot of the sentences were choppy and scattered in their construction. The ideas seemed to just be jammed together, and were inccongruous at times. I think you have set a very good tone, and overall, it was a pleasant read.

Reviewer: loony lovegoody
Date: 01/22/06 0:56
Chapter: Hide and Seek

I LOVE HARRY/LUNA!!! THIS IS AN ADORABLE STORY. i wish there were more. and i wish harry would get over ginny for luna. this is a cute story.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!

Reviewer: Tara_Q
Date: 01/15/06 12:51
Chapter: Hide and Seek

Thats a really cute story!! Luna and Harry...a weird couple, but interesting and cutre none the less.....:)

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