I read your other story so I decided to read this one too. It was really good just like the other one!(:
nice little oneshot to keep is happy!
How simply so sweet! :)
Good fic, though i didn't get why Luna was crying ....
Aww, such fluff is good for the soul =)
cute love this pairing
so cute! i've always thought luna had a thing for either harry or ron. i like the end, just like a Hogwarts couple!
r u gonna continue or what? im dying here! would you want to be responsible for killing me? i dont think so, so please write on!
this was quite good overall. I thought you had a nice way of describing things and you made this story convincing and believable. My only suggestions would be to use words besides "said" because you use that a lot. Also, maybe some more dialogue would be good. Don't get me wrong, I love the story, but some more dialogue might be a bit more interesting. You show a lot of internal feelings and a lot of describing the situation and things, though, which is very good.
An excellent read. I actually enjoyed it. Ok i will review it like this for you what i liked- your general story plotline etc was good. Did not believe harry and luna was possible till i read your fic what i did not like- your sentence formation and construction. It needs to be worked upon but still it was a worthwile read. Keep up the good work!
cute! really cute! i loved it!
This was a very interesting read - the first Harry/Luna I've taken a peek at, in fact.I thought that some of the sentiments were nice, but I think this could really use some work. A lot of the sentences were choppy and scattered in their construction. The ideas seemed to just be jammed together, and were inccongruous at times. I think you have set a very good tone, and overall, it was a pleasant read.
I LOVE HARRY/LUNA!!! THIS IS AN ADORABLE STORY. i wish there were more. and i wish harry would get over ginny for luna. this is a cute story.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!
Thats a really cute story!! Luna and Harry...a weird couple, but interesting and cutre none the less.....:)