Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 08/04/08 18:34
Chapter: -

Excellent!

Reviewer: threadbare
Date: 01/17/08 20:45
Chapter: -

oh this was wonderful. So... simple in idea, but a different take on their relationship makes it something special. I haven't read anything like this on here yet. It has this underlying sweet current, but it's not rushed love. Sorry, this is my first review... I don't know what to say...

Reviewer: BringPadfootBack
Date: 04/25/07 15:24
Chapter: -

Awww... that is sweet. I loved it!

Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 08/29/06 10:56
Chapter: -

very nice!

Reviewer: callmehermione
Date: 03/29/06 21:37
Chapter: -

What an interesting take on James and Lily! Lily is lonely, and James is always there to help her. Lily's desperation to be loved is touching! I love it.

Author's Response: Oh, Hermione! Thank you very much for the lovely review! I'm glad you liked my little story.

Reviewer: Ceddylover
Date: 01/28/06 10:17
Chapter: -

Such a beautiful story. *cries* WAAAAA!!! Want another chapter!!! Am definately reading more of your stories!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Unfortunately, I'm not planning more chapters for this story, but you can read my other stories instead. ;-)

Reviewer: Jules_411
Date: 01/10/06 18:39
Chapter: -

I get to review first! *cheers* You did such a good job! Oh, and sorry about PMing you the same thing twice (dumb computer). Anyway, awesome job. Something that I noticed this time around while reading it is that near the end, Dumbledore called Sirius by his first name. This is just some advice, but I think changing that to 'Mr. Black' might be better. Sorry I didn't notice it before!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I think that signals the change of their relationship. That he considers them now as his confindente and soon-to-be fellow members of the Order, that's why I left it there. And thanks again so much for betaing.

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