oh this was wonderful. So... simple in idea, but a different take on their relationship makes it something special. I haven't read anything like this on here yet. It has this underlying sweet current, but it's not rushed love. Sorry, this is my first review... I don't know what to say...
Awww... that is sweet. I loved it!
What an interesting take on James and Lily! Lily is lonely, and James is always there to help her. Lily's desperation to be loved is touching! I love it.
Author's Response: Oh, Hermione! Thank you very much for the lovely review! I'm glad you liked my little story.
Such a beautiful story. *cries* WAAAAA!!! Want another chapter!!! Am definately reading more of your stories!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Unfortunately, I'm not planning more chapters for this story, but you can read my other stories instead. ;-)
I get to review first! *cheers* You did such a good job! Oh, and sorry about PMing you the same thing twice (dumb computer). Anyway, awesome job. Something that I noticed this time around while reading it is that near the end, Dumbledore called Sirius by his first name. This is just some advice, but I think changing that to 'Mr. Black' might be better. Sorry I didn't notice it before!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I think that signals the change of their relationship. That he considers them now as his confindente and soon-to-be fellow members of the Order, that's why I left it there. And thanks again so much for betaing.