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Reviewer: ginny96
Date: 07/21/12 20:56
Chapter: The One With the Yelling

awww we feel sorry for james

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 07/19/09 20:10
Chapter: The One With the Yelling

I really like this one shot. It's cute.

Reviewer: Seer_Witch
Date: 06/27/08 12:50
Chapter: The One With the Yelling

Haha. But you WISH it'd be, right? And I loved the first like of your author's note! Sorry, random fact :P Brilliant writing, really!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 06/12/08 18:22
Chapter: The One With the Yelling

P.S. I've read a couple of reviews and some people are disappointed with the ending, but I thought it was excellent, it shows the point of change, Lily realising that James actually cares and isn't just after her because she refused him so much. And James finally understanding that being yourself and being patient pays off. It rounds off quite nicely in my opinion.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 06/12/08 18:15
Chapter: The One With the Yelling

Perfect, just perfect, even the authors note at the end. I figured Cecilia was a slytherin prefect, but maybe i'm wrong. I loved Slughorn's considering altering his bet with Dumbledore, makes you think all the teachers are in on it, even without you saying it specifically. And the interjections from the marauders were very much appreciated too. Thanks you made me laugh alot.

Reviewer: RowenaHeart
Date: 03/02/08 11:48
Chapter: The One With the Yelling

nice. i just don't like the ending.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 02/21/08 20:44
Chapter: The One With the Yelling

that was good!! i just wish they kissed!

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 08/03/07 6:45
Chapter: The One With the Yelling

That was great! I was laughing the whole time.

Reviewer: Prongs92
Date: 07/11/07 11:11
Chapter: The One With the Yelling

Hey I really liked that. You could have improved on te ending a bit, but it was really funny! I loved it

Reviewer: lilyseyes
Date: 06/24/07 0:44
Chapter: The One With the Yelling

you've got lily perfectly.
i loved it.
except the ending...

it was too abrupt for me.
but i really loved your character's, they're wonderful.

Reviewer: jjenkh
Date: 04/26/07 16:49
Chapter: The One With the Yelling

Love this story!!!!

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 01/10/07 0:58
Chapter: The One With the Yelling

I hate Amos too!

He's such a jerk. Cedric wasn't as bad, but I didn't like him too much.

Reviewer: A House Elf
Date: 01/06/07 21:34
Chapter: The One With the Yelling

Ha. I liked that. I was afraid that after seeing how she still vehemently hated him, you'd still make them end up snogging or something with no transition. This was nice. Why is there an HBP spoiler warning?

Reviewer: xpenguin_freakx
Date: 11/08/06 10:15
Chapter: The One With the Yelling

I love this so much. I just can't keep myself from reading it over and over again. Great job, love. =]

Reviewer: carrot topper
Date: 10/13/06 16:11
Chapter: The One With the Yelling

sooooooo good!

Reviewer: Crazy Rat
Date: 10/11/06 13:47
Chapter: The One With the Yelling

Very cute. I like Lily's personality (less of a goody two-shoes) and James'. (not so annoying) good job

Reviewer: potions_perfection
Date: 08/26/06 22:05
Chapter: The One With the Yelling

I liked the ending. =P And, yeah, the Diggorys are all pretty much jerks. I agree. =D

Reviewer: Phoenixed_
Date: 07/27/06 15:19
Chapter: The One With the Yelling

OMG! Loved it! ^^ Just a perfect L/J story, I don't have to say more.

Reviewer: digtal_princess23
Date: 07/23/06 13:07
Chapter: The One With the Yelling

I liked the ending! This was pretty good!

Reviewer: digtal_princess23
Date: 07/23/06 13:06
Chapter: The One With the Yelling

I liked the ending! This was pretty good!

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