awww we feel sorry for james
I really like this one shot. It's cute.
Haha. But you WISH it'd be, right? And I loved the first like of your author's note! Sorry, random fact :P Brilliant writing, really!
P.S. I've read a couple of reviews and some people are disappointed with the ending, but I thought it was excellent, it shows the point of change, Lily realising that James actually cares and isn't just after her because she refused him so much. And James finally understanding that being yourself and being patient pays off. It rounds off quite nicely in my opinion.
Perfect, just perfect, even the authors note at the end. I figured Cecilia was a slytherin prefect, but maybe i'm wrong. I loved Slughorn's considering altering his bet with Dumbledore, makes you think all the teachers are in on it, even without you saying it specifically. And the interjections from the marauders were very much appreciated too. Thanks you made me laugh alot.
nice. i just don't like the ending.
that was good!! i just wish they kissed!
That was great! I was laughing the whole time.
Hey I really liked that. You could have improved on te ending a bit, but it was really funny! I loved it
you've got lily perfectly.
i loved it.
except the ending...
it was too abrupt for me.
but i really loved your character's, they're wonderful.
I hate Amos too!
He's such a jerk. Cedric wasn't as bad, but I didn't like him too much.
Ha. I liked that. I was afraid that after seeing how she still vehemently hated him, you'd still make them end up snogging or something with no transition. This was nice. Why is there an HBP spoiler warning?
I love this so much. I just can't keep myself from reading it over and over again. Great job, love. =]
Very cute. I like Lily's personality (less of a goody two-shoes) and James'. (not so annoying) good job
I liked the ending. =P And, yeah, the Diggorys are all pretty much jerks. I agree. =D
OMG! Loved it! ^^ Just a perfect L/J story, I don't have to say more.
I liked the ending! This was pretty good!
I liked the ending! This was pretty good!