Wow, I love this!
I don't find much poetry pertaining to Harry Potter that catches my attention, but this is definitely good stuff.
The repetition and the rhyme scheme... perfect.
I absolutely love it.
U have a real talent and I hope u'll use for the best.
Carry on writing ur amazing poems.
Draco has a heart, I know he does!! HE MUST!! (Because ferrets are cute.)
Nothing left to lose
But fifteen years of pain
Fifteen years of disappointment
Fifteen minutes of rain.
Oh wow. This really struck a chord with me - it's amazing. I love the structure, or un-structure, but it's so amazing. Really, I love how it keeps getting so that there's hardly any time left. It's so realistic and that's quite magnificent for a poem to do. Wow - keep writing poems! You're great at it.
I just have one thing to say...WOW! Your poetry is some of the best that I've ever read, fanfic-related or otherwise. The most thoughtprovoking one ever! I'm so glad that you're back. I've read all of your new fics, oneshot and full-length and you're right. It is better than Civility, although I love all of your work. True talent is what you have! 10/10
Wow...it was really good. I really liked it :D
That was good. I was pretty impressed - and it takes a lot to impress me. Better than most of the poetry I've read on this site.
oh I liked it! veru well written :) and I must say that when I read the first few lines I thought of the song, '30 minutes' by t.a.t.u, maybe you've heard it? ;) anyway, great job! :P
Wow, I really like this, it left me with the hair on the back of my neck standing on end, so well done, not a lot of things do that to me! Good Work and Keep Up With the Great Poetry