Reviewer: siriusrox26
Date: 02/06/08 12:20
Chapter: Surprises and Disappearances

oooooooooh Mystery!
Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: thanks! but unfortunatly i haven't had time to write in a very long time :(

Author's Response: thanks! but unfortunatly i haven't had time to write in a very long time :(

Reviewer: i_hart_wheezys
Date: 09/01/07 2:57
Chapter: Surprises and Disappearances

more cliff hangers. darn you writers and your cliff hangers! brilliant story i love it mucho!!! update soon i'm not good with cliff hangers they drive me crazy! excellent writing by the way i positively love it! :)

Author's Response: thanks :) I'm not sure when I"ll be able to update though. : ( I have been busy and i haven't even started writing the next chapter. I Know what's gonna happen though : P

Reviewer: Afifa
Date: 07/17/07 7:27
Chapter: Surprises and Disappearances

ah, that was a good job i must say!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: StodgePoopin
Date: 07/14/07 17:38
Chapter: Surprises and Disappearances

Sorry, but it's a bit tedious to say the least.

Author's Response: Hum? what do you mean?

Reviewer: Marauder_Luver2
Date: 07/14/07 14:04
Chapter: Surprises and Disappearances

Finally you updated i'm so glad you did. Update soon great chapter

Author's Response: I'm sorry it took forever. I've been busy.

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 07/14/07 10:13
Chapter: Surprises and Disappearances

Bravo! This is a review for all eight chapters. Lily seems a little OOC, I don't think she would have completely lost it like she did at the beginning. Also, double classes are an hour and a half.

Author's Response: Um.....they are? ^^;; Oh....Thanks though! I'm not trying to be mean, but how can Lily be a little OOC we hardly know what she was like when she was younger let alone in her first year.

Reviewer: Lily_rocks
Date: 07/13/07 16:08
Chapter: Surprises and Disappearances

Hmm. Wonder Wat's gonna happen. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Well you'll just have to wait and see!

Reviewer: Lily_rocks
Date: 06/03/07 13:45
Chapter: First Meeting

Well I think you write great. And it's okay I mean everyone is allowed to have a life. It would be great if you continued the story though. You know your story has kinda inspired me on what I should do in a fic. Don't worry I am not going to copy it or anything. Mine is very diff
It just gave me an idea.

Author's Response: wow, thanks again! I have a chapter almost done, but it's been so long I'm not sure my beta will read it anymore...I had a really good beta but she had to quit because of college. It's fine, I'll be sure to check it out when you get it up.... ; D

Reviewer: Lily_rocks
Date: 06/02/07 22:01
Chapter: First Meeting

OMG. I love your style of writing. It makes a lot of things seem so alive. I really can't wait for more. You know you could make series. First year then second afterwards third next fourth... you get my point don't you.
Please keep writing. You're awsome at it. Are you sure you're not J.K.R? ;-D *winks*
Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks, And I was....*prays hopefully still is, but is a VERY big procrastinator*, going to make a trilogy, have Lily/James at school, then Harry/Ginny, then maybe one of their children? Idk.... *Blushies* Thanks, and I'm quite sure, for more than one reason....1) I'm not....2) Live in the US never been to GB or anywhere else....3) I'm very lazy, not actually likely to get this done anytime soon....unlike JKR....

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/05/07 17:31
Chapter: The Birthday Party

her first outburst of magic is in james' face! mwah-ha-ha-ha-ha---okay, ill stop sorry im probably freaking u out but great story!

Author's Response: no your not thanks!

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/05/07 17:27
Chapter: The Second Day - Part Two

UPDATE!! It's really good! You cant stop now!

Author's Response: um....... I'll try? I am sooo into stuff right now .....hopefull i can do alot this summer

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/05/07 17:21
Chapter: The Second Day - Part one

It's good that lily is good at flying and has made friends with professor sprout i like your idea that she's a natural at flying and not terrible at it. good luck with the rest of the story!

Author's Response: james can't get all the credit....

Reviewer: jennifer_Gryffindor
Date: 12/20/06 17:55
Chapter: The Castle

i loved how the rest of the blacks were in shock that sirius made gryffindor!!

Author's Response: Thanks.......

Reviewer: jennifer_Gryffindor
Date: 12/20/06 17:24
Chapter: The Birthday Party

i love it do you plan for the story to go all the way to the seventh year or are you going to write them in sequels?

Author's Response: all the way through seventh year, then harry and ginny....*looks around* I'm thinking about having harry and ginny having a child, that falls in love too....but that's a long way off

Reviewer: jennifer_Gryffindor
Date: 12/20/06 17:01
Chapter: First Meeting

i like it it makes me want to read more but to think lily dosnt like james til the seventh year.. i cant wait!!!! i love long storys.

Author's Response: *smiles* thanks, i do too, i also like long chapters.....but i've heard not many people do, so i had to split mine........*sighs*

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 12/11/06 22:24
Chapter: The Second Day - Part Two

I liek this! Update soon!

Author's Response: thanks...

Reviewer: SecretSouthernGurl11
Date: 12/11/06 21:49
Chapter: The Second Day - Part Two

Keep writing!! And its a really good chapter! I love it!! LOL

Author's Response: thanks, i hope to update soon....i think... :-S

Reviewer: SecretSouthernGurl11
Date: 12/11/06 21:47
Chapter: The Second Day - Part Two

Keep writing!! And its a really good chapter! I love it!! LOL

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: Magical_Lily
Date: 12/11/06 14:31
Chapter: The Second Day - Part Two

That was wonderful
can wait for

Author's Response: you can wait for more? well then maybe I shouldn't update for months....*grins evilly* how's that? I'll update asap...untill then THANKS A BILLION!!

Reviewer: _Ivy_
Date: 12/09/06 15:50
Chapter: The Second Day - Part one

excellent! its good how you could make lily dislike james, without going too overboard and having her attempt to kill him already. i also LUVD how u made lily someone who actually liked sports and wasnt so obsessed with skewl work!. i mean, ppl make her such a boring... bore! honestly, i mean- oh im rambling sRY. gr8 job! cant wait for this to be updated!

Author's Response: thanks....*looks embarest (sp)* yeah...thanks...glad you like it

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