I love it! I wish that I could write like that.
Short but yet it captures so much.
The last line is amazing.
I love it.
I love that you put not where is the hope, but what is hope.
And completely agree.
Ooooooh, an ominous feeling.
Oh... Very emotional piece - so few words, but such a large meaning. Great work!
well aren't you just a little ray of sunshine ;) I get it (the poem) the idea of a battle to end all battles is controdictory in and of itself so it doesn't leave you feeling hopeless...i liked it!
hmm i did not really like it
Beautifully written. I absolutely love it! It is so true, and the technique to get that thought across is amazing.
Good poem! Keep writing! You have a good instinct for prose and poesy! ;-) Hope to read ou again soon, Shamane.
It was very profound and thought-provoking. You caught my interest. thanks for the read ;)
Gotta love it
Describes Wizarding war very good. I agree you could add more.
Author's Response: thanks! ive tried to write more but it never sounds quite right so they always so in the bin!! so i'll try and make it a bit longer!
Short but good. Next time you could add a little more, but it wasn't bad. 7/10
Author's Response: thanks so much! :D