Reviewer: Great Beirniny
Date: 06/22/07 15:32
Chapter: War

I love it! I wish that I could write like that.

Reviewer: potions_perfection
Date: 04/30/07 14:50
Chapter: War

Short but yet it captures so much.

~PP

Reviewer: ravenclawhero
Date: 01/24/07 18:09
Chapter: War

woah...AWESOME!!!

Reviewer: Her_mi_o_ne 16
Date: 01/11/07 0:51
Chapter: War

The last line is amazing.
I love it.
I love that you put not where is the hope, but what is hope.
Brilliant.
And completely agree.

Reviewer: LovelyxLena
Date: 12/11/06 13:29
Chapter: War

Ooooooh, an ominous feeling.

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/16/06 20:46
Chapter: War

Oh... Very emotional piece - so few words, but such a large meaning. Great work!

~Juli

Reviewer: Wise Owl
Date: 09/06/06 1:06
Chapter: War

well aren't you just a little ray of sunshine ;) I get it (the poem) the idea of a battle to end all battles is controdictory in and of itself so it doesn't leave you feeling hopeless...i liked it!

Reviewer: MidnightzStorm
Date: 08/24/06 0:29
Chapter: War

Beautiful!

Reviewer: Pruvnhtmn
Date: 08/07/06 18:17
Chapter: War

hmm i did not really like it

Reviewer: Commando Inferno
Date: 07/12/06 2:44
Chapter: War

Beautifully written. I absolutely love it! It is so true, and the technique to get that thought across is amazing.

Reviewer: Shamane
Date: 07/02/06 10:37
Chapter: War

Good poem! Keep writing! You have a good instinct for prose and poesy! ;-) Hope to read ou again soon, Shamane.

Reviewer: rache
Date: 06/30/06 15:21
Chapter: War

It was very profound and thought-provoking. You caught my interest. thanks for the read ;)

Reviewer: badkarma
Date: 06/26/06 0:05
Chapter: War

Gotta love it

Reviewer: HermyRox12
Date: 01/21/06 23:06
Chapter: War

Describes Wizarding war very good. I agree you could add more.

Author's Response: thanks! ive tried to write more but it never sounds quite right so they always so in the bin!! so i'll try and make it a bit longer!

Reviewer: midnight_me
Date: 01/07/06 22:06
Chapter: War

Short but good. Next time you could add a little more, but it wasn't bad. 7/10

Author's Response: thanks so much! :D

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