Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/05/09 17:06
Chapter: Everything and the Moon

Poor Remus--drowning his sorrows in the bottle. I know things are bad when that happens. I didn't know Remus lost his job that afternoon. I'd like to kick Evan's pureblooded arse--in public, screaming obscenities. It would be a verbal trouncing. The Prophet would cover it. Death Eaters would be frightened and cross to the other side of the street when they saw me coming. Well, that was kind of fun for a while. Excellent one-shot. My heart goes out to Remus. Thank goodness Tonks came back and knew just the right words.

Author's Response: When you hit the bottle, romance has hit the skids! :D Evan's punishment is Prissy, but your verbal trouncing would be fun to listen to!

Reviewer: Seer_Witch
Date: 04/15/09 18:18
Chapter: Everything and the Moon

Remus and Tonks love each other so much.....I love seeing them together.

Author's Response: Love is the only thing that could keep them together through adversity and his insecurities!

Reviewer: belladonna1986
Date: 03/25/08 15:11
Chapter: Everything and the Moon

Oh I love outtakes! Getting to know what Remus thinks is very refreshing and lovely, but the fact that Rosier made Remus lose his job is infuriating and the remark about Remus, not allowed to show anger but to stay calm and reserved, is down right clever. I never viewed it this way, but maybe Remus would have never been such a calm person, if not for the lycantrophy.

Great outtake!

PS, created an account here, so I can better review this series :D

Author's Response:

Wherever you choose to R&R is abso-bloody-lutely fabulous to me! :)

 Remus was molded into who he is by what he is, poor sweetie!

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 04/29/07 20:51
Chapter: Everything and the Moon

I love your stories! they are so great! call me your number one fan!

Author's Response: Thank you so much Noel...or Lindsay...(a rose by any other name...) ^_^

Reviewer: moony101
Date: 04/23/07 8:09
Chapter: Everything and the Moon

Ok they are both just mental I guess that's just what love does to people and it is entertaining to read

Author's Response: Love without internal or external conflict wouldn't be entertaining. They work together to find a missing girl in the next story. I think you'd enjoy it, but thanks for reading this. Your review has me humming a Beyonce song that could work for Remus and Tonks. :D

Got me looking so crazy right now (your love)

Got me looking so crazy right now, your touch

Got me looking so crazy right now (your touch)

Got me hoping you'll page me right now, your kiss

Got me hoping you'll save me right now

Looking so crazy in love's

Got me looking, got me looking so crazy in love!

Reviewer: LoneWolfLoverGirl
Date: 09/09/06 15:10
Chapter: Everything and the Moon

Awesome! I just read both...and love 'em!
Only problem is my usual one with Remus/Tonks...jealousy. And the better the writing, the more jealous I you will be pleased to know that the fact I now feel VERY jealous of Tonks (yes, I am sad, I am jealous of a fictional character...) means both this and "Moon" were VERY good!

Author's Response: Thanks! But when you read, you are her, so you're actually jealous of yourself! LOL

Reviewer: Augusta Wilfry
Date: 08/22/06 18:16
Chapter: Everything and the Moon

goodym another remus lupin pov!

Author's Response: Remus is too hard to resist- every once in awhile, I have to write his pov! :D

Reviewer: Augrey
Date: 08/15/06 9:27
Chapter: Everything and the Moon

I think that this isa very good story and I really enjoyed it.

But I think that it would easier to read if you spaced out the paragraphs

Author's Response: Oh NO! O_O The paragraphs aren't spaced?!!! I'll go fix that at once. Bless you for reading...your poor eyes must be killing you! Thanks for telling me, and for reviewing. ^_^

Reviewer: 2727cat
Date: 06/15/06 9:10
Chapter: Everything and the Moon

That's so sweet! I love it, all of it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! ^_^

Reviewer: rivers of gold
Date: 03/13/06 12:41
Chapter: Everything and the Moon

Ah, nice; very nice. I liked Remus' POV. Though it wasn't a loose end, it was satisfying to have that little bit tied together, and find out Remus' thoughts for the short time that they were separated. :D

Author's Response: That's the only thing I miss about single character pov stories- getting the guy's thoughts! Good thing there are one shots to write! :D Thanks for the very nice review!

Reviewer: KoolGirl
Date: 02/10/06 6:43
Chapter: Everything and the Moon

yes that was quite a good story. i enjoyed it. YAY!

Author's Response: Yay for you enjoying it! Makes my day warmer, since it's currently cold as a witch'! :D

Reviewer: rita_skeeter
Date: 02/04/06 9:56
Chapter: Everything and the Moon

I really enjoyed this fic - you've conveyed Lupin and Tonks' emotions very well, making it an excellent read. I found it a little hard to follow in places, but overall the flow of the story was good. Well done!

Author's Response: Hey, I'm so glad you enjoyed the fic! ^_^ If you can think of any specific places where you lost the story thread, I'd love to know. I believe in editing to make a story better! Thanks!

Reviewer: Antipodean Opaleye
Date: 01/14/06 2:24
Chapter: Everything and the Moon

Hello again! This is great. It's always interesting seeing the other characters' pov's. I liked the bit about the Patils too. I also like your charactarisation of Sirius, you have a knack for that! It's different but still the same, seeing him as a friend (and drinking partner!) rather than a godfather! That was great. But I'm getting siriusly sick of that pun! Hehe. I can't think of anything to improve on! 10 again! I'm off to read the sequel, you're lucky I waited long enough to write this review, lol ;)

Author's Response: I feel very fortunate, both for your review, and me getting into town to find internet. I'll get it soon, but I miss it so...the Biblical phrase "weeping and gnashing of teeth" comes to mind, lol. Thanks!

Reviewer: Jenn_Weasley
Date: 01/06/06 14:07
Chapter: Everything and the Moon

I liked this extra fix of Remus. It hasn't been that long since I read the last chapter of Once in a Blue Moon, but I missed it anyway. I'm very happy that you've started a sequel. I liked seeing some of the Patil family - very clever how you fit that in. Now I'm off to read the sequel - Yay!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the Patils...they'll be in the sequel. ^_^ Yay for being missed, the feeling was mutual!

Reviewer: Lady Wolfine
Date: 01/05/06 19:43
Chapter: Everything and the Moon

I agree with water sprite. You can write. Well. Really well. Really, really--I'll shut up now. I also devoured Once in a Blue Moon, and enjoyed it immensly. I had to beg my mother to let me continue reading. Kind of pathetic really. I am not--by any means--humble by nature. I have to work at it, but as my mother was fixing dinner, it was only "One more chapter?" and "It's a cliff-hanger!" But, when it came to a close, as all good things do, I visited your author page, then I really got an earful when my mother realised that I had read much more than a single chapter. Thanks muchly for the wonderful stories, and please, please, keep writing!

Author's Response: *Grins* Thanks so much! (for reading more than a page, risking motherly wrath, lol, and the encouraging words!) Hope you enjoy the sequel just as much! ^_^

Reviewer: NoxSomnium
Date: 01/05/06 15:35
Chapter: Everything and the Moon

Aw. I'm running out of things to tell you. It seems like I've said it all at least three times. I like it. It's really good. Continue. I'm looking forward to the sequel. I didn't get the name joke. I don't know what that word means, so it doesn't make sense. If you could try to somehow insert and explanation there it would be good. :)

Author's Response: If you've said it all at least three times, I'll have to say thank you, thank you, thank you! ^_^ I tried to set it up so you would know that Samy's name meant "Enough", but I'll read through again to see if I could've worded it better. I'm always happy to edit! :D

Reviewer: water sprite
Date: 01/04/06 19:24
Chapter: Everything and the Moon

...*blush* didn't check my spelling mistakes, hehehe, sorry, hope you can read it!

Author's Response: What spelling mistakes? ^_~ I only care about content, lol, which makes me have to double and triple check chaps before submitting, hehheh, but I had no problems reading. Thanks! ^_^

Reviewer: water sprite
Date: 01/04/06 19:21
Chapter: Everything and the Moon

my god my friend, can you write! I am so impressed, i absolutly devoured your once in a blue moon series, it was amazing! Just like i had imagined the characters to be! The only problem is that now when i read teh otehr remus?tonks stories, i have such high expectations that i can't help but feel a bit disappointed when i read them. Keep writing about these two lover, PLEASE!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, amiga! Do you review on I've got fond memories of a reviewer with that name. :D. Even if you're not the same person, I salute your amazing good taste in pen names and stories, lol. I'll keep writing, so I hope you'll keep reading! ^_^

Reviewer: petiteloupegarou
Date: 01/04/06 15:37
Chapter: Everything and the Moon

yay! awesome ending to the story. I am siriusly looking forward to the sequel! Haha.

Author's Response: I heart your punny humour. Siriusly, heh. Our lovable dog gets to have lots of fun in the sequel, so I hope you enjoy reading as much as I've enjoyed writing! :D

Reviewer: urmyonlyone_073
Date: 01/04/06 12:34
Chapter: Everything and the Moon

I loved this chapter in Once in a Blue Moon and I love this one-shot it seems exactly like Remus. I also liked knowing his thoughts as to leaving Tonks until she realized she loved him. In all I just loved it :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for saying so! In a story built around Tonks' pov, One shots provide the outlet for Remus to have his say and let him know he's loved too, lol. ^_^

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