great twist. you have a really advanced yet easy-to-follow writing style. loved it!
Great story, I loved the ending. You write really good Fred and George fics. 10/10!
wow i had already read this story .. its really good ...
Author's Response: Hope it was just as good if not better second time around.
Very creative, and for a humor fic, you really kept Fred, George, and Mr. Weasley in character. Great job!
Author's Response: Since they are so funny in canon, I can't figure why so many have to change them so much to get a laugh. Thanks for the feedback.
Um, what to say? It was well worth the read, yet I think the abstract used to describe it could include a little more detail to bring in the right audience. It's a nice little window into the developing maturity of Fred and George, but I don't really think it's really a 'humor fic' per se. Like I said, worth a read. :)
Author's Response: You are right, I am not very good at writing abstracts, but I did think it was funny :)
great story really funny 9/10
Author's Response: Only 9/10? Damn. :)
Ahhh, Litlle Gred and Forge are all grown up. I hope their buisness goes well. 10/10. Poor muggles. Glad I'm not one. Somewhere in this story Arthur said "Molly and me..." It should be "Molly and I..." I forgot where, but I just remember reading that. Good job!
Author's Response: Dialog mistakes can be forgiven, since thats how people talk, but good catch anyway. (I'll probably change it)