Reviewer: ginevra715
Date: 05/24/07 22:16
Chapter: Chapter 1

great twist. you have a really advanced yet easy-to-follow writing style. loved it!

Reviewer: goddess of light
Date: 03/07/07 10:45
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great story, I loved the ending. You write really good Fred and George fics. 10/10!

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 11/12/06 9:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow i had already read this story .. its really good ...

Author's Response: Hope it was just as good if not better second time around.

Reviewer: Unickuta
Date: 06/25/06 20:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very creative, and for a humor fic, you really kept Fred, George, and Mr. Weasley in character. Great job!

Author's Response: Since they are so funny in canon, I can't figure why so many have to change them so much to get a laugh. Thanks for the feedback.

Reviewer: ecocd
Date: 06/07/06 23:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

Um, what to say? It was well worth the read, yet I think the abstract used to describe it could include a little more detail to bring in the right audience. It's a nice little window into the developing maturity of Fred and George, but I don't really think it's really a 'humor fic' per se. Like I said, worth a read. :)

Author's Response: You are right, I am not very good at writing abstracts, but I did think it was funny :)

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 01/14/06 10:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

great story really funny 9/10

Author's Response: Only 9/10? Damn. :)

Reviewer: HermyRox12
Date: 01/10/06 20:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ahhh, Litlle Gred and Forge are all grown up. I hope their buisness goes well. 10/10. Poor muggles. Glad I'm not one. Somewhere in this story Arthur said "Molly and me..." It should be "Molly and I..." I forgot where, but I just remember reading that. Good job!

Author's Response: Dialog mistakes can be forgiven, since thats how people talk, but good catch anyway. (I'll probably change it)

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