you are great at writing poems,
Whoa... this poem almost made me wish J. K. will have them end up together... almost... ;)
EXCELLENT description. Just fantastic. Very pretty.
That was so cute.I don't find it dumb or anything.I give it a 10.
Stella- not dumb at all, very nice indeed. 10 for poetry. absolutely beautiful.
Oh my gosh. That was very beautiful. I give it a 10 for sure!
So cute. And so much said in very few words, which IMO, a sign of talent. :)
This was a cute, fluffy little poem. I think it says quite a bit in quite a condensed amount of words. Maybe you should try and write another one from Ginny's perspective, seeing that I can't really tell you to add another chapter. :-)
Author's Response: Hm...that's actually not a bad idea. Maybe I will try a companion piece in Ginny's POV..