Yay! I really liked this. It was romantic and sweet and a little smutty but not too much. You've done a great job with making the relationship between all the Marauders believable. I really believed that they were close friends and they seemed in character for the most part. Remus and Sirius' relationship was nicely done. It was obvious they had feelings for each other and I loved how Sirius wrote him that note in the end and asked him to come meet him. That was very sweet and romantic. I don't read a lot of slash, but I really liked this and found myself rooting for them to get together. Nicely done! : )
I love Lauras smut. It's actually the best. x
That was brilliant! I loved that even though I don't ship Remus/Sirius or read any other slash except Harry/Draco. That was extremely well written and I think this is the only fanfiction by you that really does justice to your vast vocabulary. You wrote your characters well and I adore the way you wrote Remus when he was tipsy. That was so cute and I think is my favourite part of the fanfiction over-all. I loved the references to Shakespeare and the way you had Sirius use the lead female roles in the plays to describe Remus is just so adorable! However, the best line in my opinion is the one where Sirius says "My Remus?" That was brilliant! Hoping to read more of your fanfictions soon...
Wow, i really liked your story it was very heart filled, very sweet and even though I'm not a Shakespeare fan I really liked all the references. The scene with the alcohol was very funny, it remembered me to my first experience drinking. Keep up the good work.