very good-intriguing. however, i'd like more...:)
wow...mysterious...quite good! And quite convincing, seeing that I really dont believe ships not mentioned in the books...kewl!
Author's Response: Well, thank you very much. I personally don't believe in this ship either, that's why I strive to make this couple appear as plausible as I can. Thank you for reading my story.
terrible!! j/k loved it!!
Author's Response: OMG! You scared me at first. I'm glad you enjoyed my little piece.
I saw your sequel, but wanted to read this first. I like, it as cannon as you can get it with a Hermione/Draco ship. You display the obivious hatred for one another very well. I like how their potential feelings for each other start as curiosity & exploring the unknown.
Author's Response: Lol. Thank you hun. I'm glad you're enjoy it.
That was really excellent. I started your sequel, but I’m here to read this before I finish the other. As a stand-alone, it’s terrific. It’s a fascinating picture of lust and need without being a mess of smut. It’s really incredible.
Couple of grammar things:
To their chagrin, Hermione and Draco were paired off by Professor Sprout because of their Head positions this year and it was a hard task in convincing the two to even take a glance at one another without arguing.
You’ve joined two ideas here, that Hermione and Draco were paired off because they’re Heads, and that they can’t work together. When they’re run together, it gets confusing. It needs some more punctuation. You could try:
“To their chagrin, Hermione and Draco were paired off by Professor Sprout. It was a hard task to make them even glance at each other without arguing.”
I took out the part about being Heads because it’s really difficult to work in and it does not actually have bearing on the main plot. You can put it back, but it works fine without.
Mainly the boys, they didn’t quite like the idea of running about in the sodding grass collecting bloody flowers like little girls.
Nice. I think you might want to change the first comma here:
“Mainly the boys; they didn’t quite like the idea…”
He couldn’t careless about some flower scent.
For this usage, it should be two words, “care less.”
Really really good. I’m going to go finish and review your other story now. I love this start. 10/10!
I thought that this one shot was Excellent! I loved how you really tried to get the hate love stuation thing together, i am about to read your newest fic so i am very excited! Keep going!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I hope you enjoy the next story as well.
Wow. That was one of the greatest one-shots ever! It has so much... depth and feeling.
Author's Response: Whoa, I didn't know people were still reading this old thing. Well, thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it. *read the sequel*
For such a short piece this was incredibly well written. It screams for more. And it certainly was not at all cliche. The reason for their being together was realistic; the class project. And the lead up to the kiss was spot on. (In fact this was my favorite part...the way you described the moment they awoke). I could see this happening...it read like a romance novel, even though it was short. You have a way with description and I found myself wanting the chapter to continue. There was nothing akward, boring, or completely out of character in this ficlet. Good job, and I hope there is more to this sometime soon. :)
Author's Response: Wow, you are truly kind. Thank you very much and I'm glad you enjoyed this small piece. Luckily for you, the sequel to this has finally been validated. So, I hope you enjoy the second part to this as well.
O...there is a sequal comming...lol, maybe I should read the other reviews before adding my own..lol
Author's Response: Lol. Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece, and I hope you enjoy the sequel, whenever it get's out of queue.
I loved it!! The Draco/Hermione pairing is definitly my favorite and this fic just made me love it even more!!!! *10*...there should be a sequal....
yur'e welcome, ^^ I cant wait for a sequel as this story relly interested me, and its a good start for a story! Keep up the work, you're doing well.
Wow, I have to say this was a worthwhile read, except that it was a little short. This isn't supposed to sound harsh or anything!! I think you detailed and described their feelings well and I liked it when Hermione woke up 'snuggled' against draco. All in all this was good, but there was very little dialogue. oh well, it still deserves a 10, because your ideas and description are good. ^^
Author's Response: And I have to say that you have given me the nicest reviews so far and I feel sincerely grateful and honoured by it. This was only meant to be a little teaser before I submitted the sequel. Unfortunately, it's still in waiting.
I loved it! And, I'm not one for one-shots (okay, just because I write them, doesn't mean i like to read them... they're just easy to write!) Well, anyway, 10/10 :)
Author's Response: thanks! lol. i really don't like to do one-shots either, and I really don't read them but, i did this out of the blue one day.
i really like this story. there is something about it that is so fascinating. In the real book this would never happen in a million years but something about it just seems so real and all makes sense even though it's puzzling. I think it's great and can't wait to read the sequel!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment. I was puzzled myself after writing this. Lol. I still don't know how I came up with it.
I have to say that I'm not sure what to think of this story. It left me puzzled so I guess the title was well chosen.
Author's Response: Lol! Yes, if my sequel to this piece is approved then all will be explained.