one-shot perfectly describes it.
but i think you could've gone deeper. but there's just one thing that bothered me; Hermione was slightly out of character. She doesn't analyze everything closely, she usually steps back and think. But besides that it was great.
Pretty cool. But WHY??
This story was interesting....you should make a sequel or two.
What happens when they break apart? Do they finish their project? How does Draco cope with being attracted to a "mudblood"? Does Hermione find her answers? When will someone notice that Hermione and Draco have been gone for a long time? Hoe will Harry and Ron react to Hermione-and-Draco? How did their projects go? Will this attraction linger and blossom? or shrivel and die back into a heated resentment?......you could do so much with this......
You could write a decently long and good book. Please continue this story.
That was really cute. Short and sweet, just like a good one-shot should be.
write another one it was good but u should make the stories a little longer, next time, cuz the stories sre good
oh. nevermind uve alredy made a sequil. i just now looked at your profile.... i feel stupis. lol that happends to me alot.... the feeling stupid thing
that wass amazing1 you sould definately somehow work this into a longer storyitd be interesting to seee how itd turn out...
anyways, i loved it!!
it is beautiful story!!!! Terrific work....honestly
Oh, that was cute. Lots of good adjectives, you used. I really liked the way you did this story.
I usually don't read Draco/Hermione stories, but I recently have gotten into them. I really liked yours however, and how you paired the two up. It was very mysterious how you left the readers guessing, kind of, what happens next.
I really like the Head Girl and Boy idea of Hermione and Draco, and the way that McGonagall's project brought them together. I guess, i could say, I really liked the whole thing. It'd be cool if this was a chaptered fic, I'd totally read it, to see what happens.
I really like your writing style, it's very detailed and descriptive, and me, the reader, knows what you're talking about. I only saw like two mistakes, like where a word should have been present tense, and it was past, but it was no biggie.
As the kiss grew deeper she didn’t analyzed what was happening to her,
It should be hadn't analyzed, or didn't analyze. Sorry, for my beta-ing thing, it happens.
Overall, this was a lovely story. It's going on my favorites list, and I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Thanks for the great read! And thanks for the Gorgeous banner!! ~Lindsey :)
Lovely, almost a dream-like quality. I like how Draco seemed more vulnerable when asleep and how this facinated Hermione. While the relationship is not canon, it was very well presented and believable.
I was actually interested by another fic of yours andit said it was the sequel to this so I decide to read this first. I like it especialyl how you ended it. Ok well off to check outt he sequel now...
Aw...thats so cute. its nice how that all happened by one look. great one-shot
very good. you should do more Draco and hermione stories.
Aww fantastic! In my favs!
WOW! i honestly have to say this is my fav one shot!!!!!!!!!! i read it like once a week or something like that (wierd i know) but i love this story so so so much!!!!!!!! you are really tallented!:)
that was amazing. Amazing. My heart just stopped. Your writing, is desirous.
I want your skill to pull the reader in, all in one chapter. Thank you.
Author's Response: My heart just dropped from this luvely review. Oh, I don't know how I pulled anyone into reading this story. Lol! Thank you for your kind words.
i like that cause he is a puzzle
Author's Response: Hehe, yes he is. That's why I lurves Malfoy, he's so complex. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
I think you need to write a second chapter!!!! Ahh!! That was really good! =] Hah! Ohh, i wanna know what happens next! It was vey well written and fun to read! Really good job!
Author's Response: Well, you acan tune in for updated chapters in the sequel. Glad you enjoyed my story. :)
your ending was weird
Author's Response: Hmm...