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Reviews For Puzzled Silence

Name: francine_dremn (Signed) · Date: 04/24/07 22:10 · For: Puzzled Silence
one-shot perfectly describes it.
but i think you could've gone deeper. but there's just one thing that bothered me; Hermione was slightly out of character. She doesn't analyze everything closely, she usually steps back and think. But besides that it was great.

Name: All_things_fiction (Signed) · Date: 04/01/07 13:23 · For: Puzzled Silence
Pretty cool. But WHY??

Name: hypnotist (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 12:43 · For: Puzzled Silence
This story was interesting....you should make a sequel or two.

What happens when they break apart? Do they finish their project? How does Draco cope with being attracted to a "mudblood"? Does Hermione find her answers? When will someone notice that Hermione and Draco have been gone for a long time? Hoe will Harry and Ron react to Hermione-and-Draco? How did their projects go? Will this attraction linger and blossom? or shrivel and die back into a heated resentment?......you could do so much with this......

You could write a decently long and good book. Please continue this story.

Name: slayer_girl45 (Signed) · Date: 02/13/07 1:01 · For: Puzzled Silence
That was really cute. Short and sweet, just like a good one-shot should be.

Name: loves_4_harry (Signed) · Date: 02/10/07 13:53 · For: Puzzled Silence
write another one it was good but u should make the stories a little longer, next time, cuz the stories sre good

Name: padfooyroxmysoccks (Signed) · Date: 02/05/07 18:59 · For: Puzzled Silence
oh. nevermind uve alredy made a sequil. i just now looked at your profile.... i feel stupis. lol that happends to me alot.... the feeling stupid thing

Name: padfooyroxmysoccks (Signed) · Date: 02/05/07 18:56 · For: Puzzled Silence

that wass amazing1 you sould definately somehow work this into a longer storyitd be interesting to seee how itd turn out...

anyways, i loved it!!

Name: Tom_girl (Signed) · Date: 12/22/06 9:07 · For: Puzzled Silence
it is beautiful story!!!! Terrific work....honestly

Name: Ron x Hermione (Signed) · Date: 12/22/06 8:48 · For: Puzzled Silence
Oh, that was cute. Lots of good adjectives, you used. I really liked the way you did this story.

I usually don't read Draco/Hermione stories, but I recently have gotten into them. I really liked yours however, and how you paired the two up. It was very mysterious how you left the readers guessing, kind of, what happens next.

I really like the Head Girl and Boy idea of Hermione and Draco, and the way that McGonagall's project brought them together. I guess, i could say, I really liked the whole thing. It'd be cool if this was a chaptered fic, I'd totally read it, to see what happens.

I really like your writing style, it's very detailed and descriptive, and me, the reader, knows what you're talking about. I only saw like two mistakes, like where a word should have been present tense, and it was past, but it was no biggie.

As the kiss grew deeper she didnít analyzed what was happening to her,

It should be hadn't analyzed, or didn't analyze. Sorry, for my beta-ing thing, it happens.

Overall, this was a lovely story. It's going on my favorites list, and I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Thanks for the great read! And thanks for the Gorgeous banner!! ~Lindsey :)

Name: Snapes_secret (Anonymous) · Date: 12/11/06 9:15 · For: Puzzled Silence
Lovely, almost a dream-like quality. I like how Draco seemed more vulnerable when asleep and how this facinated Hermione. While the relationship is not canon, it was very well presented and believable.

Snape's Talon/Snapes_secret

Name: darkeyes_tasnia (Signed) · Date: 12/09/06 16:26 · For: Puzzled Silence
I was actually interested by another fic of yours andit said it was the sequel to this so I decide to read this first. I like it especialyl how you ended it. Ok well off to check outt he sequel now...


Name: padfoot_returns (Signed) · Date: 12/05/06 15:35 · For: Puzzled Silence
Aw...thats so cute. its nice how that all happened by one look. great one-shot

Name: MADMANDZ (Signed) · Date: 11/24/06 3:38 · For: Puzzled Silence
very good. you should do more Draco and hermione stories.

Name: HermioneHarryShipper (Signed) · Date: 11/22/06 20:01 · For: Puzzled Silence

Name: Krissa (Signed) · Date: 10/20/06 16:40 · For: Puzzled Silence
Aww fantastic! In my favs!

Name: Nauf_dude (Signed) · Date: 10/18/06 18:32 · For: Puzzled Silence
WOW! i honestly have to say this is my fav one shot!!!!!!!!!! i read it like once a week or something like that (wierd i know) but i love this story so so so much!!!!!!!! you are really tallented!:)

Name: Ktbug (Signed) · Date: 08/19/06 13:17 · For: Puzzled Silence
that was amazing. Amazing. My heart just stopped. Your writing, is desirous.
I want your skill to pull the reader in, all in one chapter. Thank you.

Author's Response: My heart just dropped from this luvely review. Oh, I don't know how I pulled anyone into reading this story. Lol! Thank you for your kind words.

Name: HermoineGMalfoy (Signed) · Date: 08/17/06 10:54 · For: Puzzled Silence
i like that cause he is a puzzle

Author's Response: Hehe, yes he is. That's why I lurves Malfoy, he's so complex. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Name: HunnieBuns88 (Signed) · Date: 08/06/06 1:55 · For: Puzzled Silence
I think you need to write a second chapter!!!! Ahh!! That was really good! =] Hah! Ohh, i wanna know what happens next! It was vey well written and fun to read! Really good job!

Author's Response: Well, you acan tune in for updated chapters in the sequel. Glad you enjoyed my story. :)

Name: ThemrsRemnisLupin (Signed) · Date: 07/24/06 15:12 · For: Puzzled Silence
your ending was weird

Author's Response: Hmm...

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