Reviews For Puzzled Silence
Reviewer: snaperocks
Date: 11/10/07 7:42
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

wow this is soooo cutee---omg aww i wish u wud continue on it lol its really magical wow!!!!
good work---smiles!!

Reviewer: harryxfanaticxpotter
Date: 11/09/07 16:17
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

wow. short but so cute.

Reviewer: big mamma210
Date: 09/09/07 0:13
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

aww ... thats soo cute i loved it

Reviewer: ronlover101
Date: 08/27/07 19:02
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

great story

Reviewer: green_as_a_toad
Date: 08/15/07 12:52
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

nice

Reviewer: Harrys_angels
Date: 08/10/07 22:34
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

really quick begining , straight into the action, well done u made it work real well :D

Reviewer: Ravenlily
Date: 08/09/07 13:52
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

good job!

Reviewer: feltonfav93
Date: 08/09/07 13:12
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

awwww. I finally read a cute story about them. thanx

Reviewer: cmedina2002
Date: 08/05/07 15:52
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

Nice.

Reviewer: faolan63
Date: 08/03/07 2:53
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

I like.
The tension buildup was especially nice :)

Reviewer: pedestriancow
Date: 07/24/07 1:11
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

very nice!

Reviewer: Siriuslyinluvwithharry
Date: 07/23/07 10:45
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

i think this is great. it's written very well and i like the idea behind the story.

Reviewer: hmsoctopus
Date: 07/11/07 20:42
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

That was really good. Quite fluffy, but good. kepp it up :)

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 06/26/07 18:49
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

awwwwwwwwwe! thats sweet! i like the way that you had no one talk and it was just silence between them! i really like it and i can't wait to read more Hermy/Draco fics!

Reviewer: dinolove453
Date: 06/24/07 14:36
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

Even though they aren't my fav ship, or I don't even support them that much- I just think they'd be cute- this is bloody brilliant.

Reviewer: SlytherinBlood
Date: 06/18/07 9:22
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

oh I loved it! you really have talent, I look forward to more coming from you!:)

Reviewer: steph malfoy
Date: 06/11/07 12:24
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

bullshit

Reviewer: mgle_teacher
Date: 06/03/07 22:44
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

Hi Caren!
I reviewed your story once, before I became your beta for Mind, Body, and Soul but it was a one-liner. Therefore, here I am again, giving you a good and proper review like this story deserves.

First, I particularly liked that in the entire one-shot you don't have either one of them talking at all. You use some dialog but only for Professor Sprout giving directions about the project, and for Malfoy sneering at Granger at the beginning. But the rest of the story flows pretty smoothly without the dialog.

It's quite impressing that you managed to write so much with so little, in my opinion.

Second, I was particularly fascinated how you explore both of their feelings of confusion towards each other by making an analogy to a puzzle. It's almost corny but they're puzzle pieces that fit each other. Lol.
The ending was the best part: And she was okay with not knowing all the answers. She was okay with not knowing the answers to Draco Malfoy.

*squee*

Third, your writing about them devouring each other with their eyesight is just splendid.

I did catch a couple of small mistakes here and there. And I hate that you left it hanging, but that's what makes it one of my favorites and just a pleasure to read over and over. XD

You did a great job showcasing Draco/Hermione. =]

~Ritta/mugglemathdork/mgle_teacher/your ol' beta.

Reviewer: Lifyndra
Date: 05/12/07 15:59
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

This story had a lot of great visuals; I love how in depth you went with such a simple meeting.

Reviewer: goGinny_84
Date: 05/01/07 23:26
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

I liked that you didn't have any dialouge in this. I think making it purley in Hr and D's thoughts worked well. Hmm. I don't usually read Hr/D, but this was almost believable. Almost- because it would never happen in cannon. Good job.

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