Reviews For Puzzled Silence
Reviewer: Ebony14
Date: 05/31/12 18:06
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

UN-believably amazing! i don't think my review would be this overwhelmed if it weren't for the last paragraph. i wanted to quote a line here to let you know which part i liked best from this paragraph, but each kept getting better from the other. so...i hope you get my point!
it's fics like this that got me into non-cannon ships :D

Reviewer: fred_ron_weasley
Date: 02/24/11 11:23
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

TOO SHORT! I want to know what happens next!!

Reviewer: thesmart1
Date: 11/21/10 1:56
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

Definitely an excellent start, but why on earth didn't you finish it? It seems to me that Hermione and Draco's story has just started.

Reviewer: readergirl166
Date: 07/10/10 17:50
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

I have never read something so amazing. It was like I stepped into Hermione's shoes.

Reviewer: saturnindian
Date: 02/17/10 13:08
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

Good one!

Reviewer: k7r8c9
Date: 08/03/09 15:25
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

I thought it was a little too out of character for my tastes, but I appreciate your effort.

Reviewer: DramioneLuver23
Date: 07/23/09 19:35
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

I liked it! Hermione was perfect! Draco moved a little fast and fell too quickly in love with her but it wuz still good. :)

Reviewer: padfoot_returns
Date: 06/24/09 20:53
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

Hello again!

I reviewed this story once a LONG time ago but it was a one-liner and this story needs more than that =]

I would like to start off by saying how I simply loved the fact that you were able to pull off such a wonderful one-shot with no dialogue whatsoever. It’s not something seen often and gave the story a special effect. Very original idea. Really liked it ;)

The one-shot itself was very short and sweet. I really liked the flow and the progression of the whole thing. I liked how at the beginning, they were forced together, like most Dramione stories start out, but by the end they stay together by their own choice.

The characterisation of Draco and Hermione was also very good. In a lot of Dramiones, you just see them both, all of a sudden, in love with each other but the pace of this was gradual and done very subtly.

I enjoyed the ending so much, especially the part where Hermione gave in into not knowing the answer to every single in life. Nice ending touch.

The only thing I could say about this one-shot is that my eye caught a few mistakes here and there. For example, here:

“…As the kiss grew deeper she didn’t analyzed what was happening to her…”

That should be anaylze. If you get a beta to quickly look over it. Other than that, great one-shot. You really illustrated Dramione nicely. =D

Reviewer: mymuggle
Date: 02/19/09 4:27
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

I think you describe the conflict of Draco and Hermione really well.
Even though I know that a D/H paring would never happen in 'real life' Harry Potter, it's still one of my favorite parings and I think you caught on to what the stages in their relationship would have been like. I'd love to see this one shot elaborated on,

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 08/26/08 20:06
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

It was a nice story. Different from others i've read. Very well written.

Reviewer: Twilight0Potter
Date: 08/18/08 16:19
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

haha i just looked @ ur profile and there is a sequil... wow i feel stupid.
ill go read it now

Reviewer: Twilight0Potter
Date: 08/18/08 16:16
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

Aw. i like it!
its kind of different but its pretty awesome
a sequil would be nice... not neccisary but nice... :)

Reviewer: Brookylan
Date: 06/17/08 19:57
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

I thought it was awesome.I enjoyed every word of it!

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem
Date: 05/01/08 19:31
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

Classic, silent, but moving. Wonderful job.

Reviewer: groteskq_fatality
Date: 04/21/08 23:33
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

OHHHH DAMNN.
haha.loved it.
great one shot too. :D

im content with it.
no need to elaborate.haha.

Reviewer: deadly_muggle
Date: 03/26/08 21:00
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

You know what? I really liked it. A lot.
It was a very nice idea, and I think you've done it full justice. Great job. I really didn't think I would ever like a HG/DM fic (this is the first I've read) and I acutally liked it.

Kiwi

Reviewer: Love_Hope_Freedom
Date: 03/26/08 18:39
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

love it!!!
add the next chap super soon!!!
ahh.

mona

Reviewer: maya potter
Date: 03/19/08 6:52
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

it is fantastic i liked it

Reviewer: Nivelini
Date: 03/09/08 6:47
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

weird but some how okay

Reviewer: lilypotter76
Date: 01/25/08 21:44
Chapter: Puzzled Silence

very nice

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