Reviews For An Apple A Day
Reviewer: xXxTrexCoolxXx
Date: 01/03/06 11:27
Chapter: An Apple A Day

Great job. All the characters were done so well! Absolutly awsome.

Author's Response: Haha, thanks :)

Reviewer: atkarid
Date: 01/03/06 5:44
Chapter: An Apple A Day

Nice job! This was an enjoyable read! I liked the part when Lavender was eating the apple. Maybe you could've put in some more Parvati/Apple time. Also, I think Ginny would've just said "...Harry" and not "...Harry Potter." Otherwise, great job!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

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