Great job. All the characters were done so well! Absolutly awsome.
Author's Response: Haha, thanks :)
Nice job! This was an enjoyable read! I liked the part when Lavender was eating the apple. Maybe you could've put in some more Parvati/Apple time. Also, I think Ginny would've just said "...Harry" and not "...Harry Potter." Otherwise, great job!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.