Incredible. I absolutely loved your take on what happens to wizards after they die. Isn't it a bit like being a ghost, though? I've enjoyed this very much and I'm looking forward to reading other works by you. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you for the positive feedback! I guess it is a bit like being a ghost, except they cannot communicate with the living like ghosts, and the living cannot see them either.
I loved it! Quite comforting really...made me cry...but in a happy way :'). Hope to read some more of your stories in the future!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I really appreciate hearing from you!
It was a really nice read. I liked the idea to look at that scene from a very different point of view.
There were some spelling mistakes (and one missing word, I think), but that didn't bothered me too much. The transitions were a bit of problem, but I think otherwise it was a very good fic.
You have definitely captured Cedric's spirit and I liked your fic, and that comes from a HP fan who doesn't really like Cedric.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! It's good to hear what people think of my story, for I am a first time writer and I want to know how my stories are(from reader's point of view). Keep on reading (and writing of course!)
it was a really nice story to read, specially from a spirit's point of view. Defenetly a Cedric fan must read!
I absoloutely love your story! I think it is a very lovely way to fill in the gap of where Cedric "was" during that whole scene. I really love it. I really liked how you included Frank in this, and I love the thought of Lily and James watching over Harry during the tasks, and just generally. It's a very nice story. 10/10, and going on my favorites list! weasley_wanna_be
hey this is gloria great story heehee its good far better than i could write seeing as i dont try but anyways very good story and good writingya haave a happy day