Reviews For Never Ever
Reviewer: ginny96
Date: 07/03/12 15:45
Chapter: I am so close!

james is stupid, as is sirius.
other than that this is really well written and i love the plot line so far. please write more, please.

Reviewer: R_U_LDS_2
Date: 11/10/07 20:58
Chapter: I am so close!

update please! im sorry, but i have to know what happens next. keep writng.. lily is gonna be p.o.ed for a while, isn't she? lol

Reviewer: peacock_girl15
Date: 07/30/06 22:19
Chapter: He is never going to grow up...

ooo ooo! please reveiw! this fic was what got me loving lily/james fics! I really hope there's more in the new future! You are such a good writer! don't give up or get writers block yet! Well, hope there's gonna be more soon and keep up the great work!


xoxo
Kristen

Reviewer: BrighterThanSunshine
Date: 06/24/06 22:01
Chapter: He is never going to grow up...

PLEASE UPDATE SOON... i can't waittttttttttttt...!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: HPdiva
Date: 05/26/06 16:34
Chapter: I am so close!

Oh crap!! I can't beleive he gave in...poor Lily, please update soon!

Reviewer: james_fever
Date: 03/07/06 20:30
Chapter: He is never going to grow up...

That was a wonderful story. Very interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter. When is it coming???

Author's Response: Fear not, the next chapter it being worked on (actually, it is already written, it is being edited) I currently have something in the que right now, but I do plan on updating soon!

Reviewer: ilovetom
Date: 03/07/06 17:57
Chapter: I am so close!

that was nifty. I liked it. Good job!

Reviewer: peacock_girl15
Date: 02/12/06 21:45
Chapter: I am so close!

oh the suspense! I wonder what James will do next? Can't wait to read more! Oh yea, I'm loving the names of the girls in the story, but it makes me wonder becuase well my name just happens to be Kristen ( oh yea, I love Sirius! lol!) and I know ppl with the other names. Well anyways, this was the first story I chose to read in this section so feel honored! jk, but it was pretty awesome! Can't wit for more! xoxo PG15

Author's Response: Your name is Kristen? lol how ironic! I picked the names of the girls in my story just by pure luck. Kristen and Olivia are just names I like, and Melanie is close to my name (it's Melissa, if u were wondering) and Ashlee is my best friend. Other names are probably just thought of spontaniously.

Reviewer: RupertsPheonix
Date: 02/12/06 7:11
Chapter: I am so close!

Good fic so far! What's James going to do now?!? I totally understand him caving, I probably would have too.....But poor Lily! I loved her reaction...stomping into the bathroom and slamming the door...great job! 10/10! =)

Reviewer: fairiesandcream
Date: 02/08/06 0:24
Chapter: I am so close!

Oh my God! Shit! What's James going to do now? That was really mean of Sirius, although it was rather weak of James to give into him. Please update soon.

Author's Response: well, we all know how it is...your friend is giving u a hard time and just NOT backing down...so u cave just to get them to stop. :)

Reviewer: Megan Radcliffe
Date: 01/26/06 1:30
Chapter: I am so close!

omg! that was awesome! poor james! sirius is so cruel!! lol

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 01/25/06 16:06
Chapter: I am so close!

Sirius can be such a jerk at times! It was a great chapter, and I love Lily's reaction! Update soon!

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 01/17/06 19:57
Chapter: He is never going to grow up...

Great chapter! Yeah, I thought his eyes were hazel, but I have no idea. I really like how Lily is already starting to see him differently, even if it is only b/c of his eyes. Sometimes so early it doesn't work, but for yours, it definitely does. Update soon!

Reviewer: ginnyweasly186
Date: 01/12/06 3:20
Chapter: He is never going to grow up...

Awesome first chapter! Can't wait for the next one, keep 'em coming.

Reviewer: cas2319
Date: 01/08/06 0:25
Chapter: He is never going to grow up...

good start...i like how lily is so determined... anyways..arent james' eyes hazel?

Author's Response: Hmmm....I thought they were brown....I'll look into it. THanks for bringing it to my attention

Reviewer: fairiesandcream
Date: 01/07/06 22:22
Chapter: He is never going to grow up...

Oooo I hope you update soon! I love it when Lily starts to see the good things about James (I mean honestly who could resist him?) I think that this story has started off really well and I'm looking forward to reading the rest!

Reviewer: Sirius Krummy Fan
Date: 01/07/06 19:37
Chapter: He is never going to grow up...

First comment!!! Yayuhh. Well I think your story is great. The "brown eyes" thing with James hasn't been done before, at least I don't think it has. It's awesome and update soon!

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