Reviews For Unplanned
Reviewer: KatieMagic
Date: 06/04/06 20:00
Chapter: Unplanned

Very surprising as I thought this would be a Lily/James fluff story. Not too keen on Remus/James I'm sorry.
Cheers , Katie

Reviewer: KatieMagic
Date: 06/04/06 19:57
Chapter: Unplanned

Very surprising as I thought this would be a Lily/James fluff story. Not too keen on Remus/James I'm sorry.

Reviewer: mini_marauder
Date: 05/22/06 19:54
Chapter: Unplanned

eeeeew. that in a wierd sort of way but it was really good. 10/10

Reviewer: lillyz
Date: 05/20/06 16:07
Chapter: Unplanned

I definetely deserve being smacked on the head.I wrote just barely afew sentences of stupid stuff when I rewiewed this story the first time, in spite of that this storie is my absolutely favourite story ever.I liked it so much that I have now a mistletoe-background on my desktop even though it's not Christmas. And I hope that you will forgive me being so shallow and dolt.Anyway, I love this story and am a huge JPRL-shipper myself.Please write more stories like this(Preferably with said pairing)!

Reviewer: TohmaSakuma
Date: 05/18/06 17:17
Chapter: Unplanned

Aww, you should write some more, I found this one so amazing, Remus and Jmaes, FOR EFFIN LIFE

Reviewer: thisisfun
Date: 05/14/06 12:08
Chapter: Unplanned

Eww cool gross awsome funny spirted luve

Reviewer: harrysgrrl
Date: 05/05/06 18:29
Chapter: Unplanned

kinda weird but interesting

Reviewer: xMrsBeex
Date: 04/26/06 20:52
Chapter: Unplanned

Oh my gosh. So good! Very well written. I hope you write more like this!

Reviewer: HP fanatic1
Date: 03/29/06 14:14
Chapter: Unplanned

Oh, is that all? It barely lasted! But that is great! One of the best One-shot stories I'v ever read! I love those marauders! (And apparently, they love each other too!) Great story, loved every word of it! 100000000/10 Jess xXx

Reviewer: lillyz
Date: 03/11/06 17:18
Chapter: Unplanned

Hot, funny, romantic.That's exactly like a slash story should be.This ' I'm an idiot'-thing is great, I know people who wanted that on a T-shirt.

Reviewer: cyber_bunny
Date: 03/11/06 8:02
Chapter: Unplanned

Cool. I would not have thought of that the most obvious marauder pairing is Sirius/Remus... Very origional.(is that how you spell it? Well you know what I mean)

Reviewer: Voldie
Date: 02/14/06 15:55
Chapter: Unplanned

very very good story =] more?????? please?!?!?!

Reviewer: MumU
Date: 02/05/06 6:56
Chapter: Unplanned

Can't believe this's your first story.I really love it and pleaseeee!!! write the next chapter. ^V^

Reviewer: Wolf_Lover
Date: 02/03/06 12:10
Chapter: Unplanned

This is a wel gud story! PLEASE write a sequel! (sorry im being so commanding!) :P

Reviewer: Lilac
Date: 01/31/06 20:50
Chapter: Unplanned

Screw Lily! James and Remus all the way! he he, get on w/ the next chapter!

Reviewer: Purplemage
Date: 01/31/06 4:18
Chapter: Unplanned

This is the first Remus/James story I've read but it's really good. I loved the description you used to describe Remus feelings, they're very accuarate and makes you feel exactly like him i loved it!

Reviewer: Xx__statictdreams
Date: 01/23/06 19:15
Chapter: Unplanned

nice write, just one thing i picked up- yes, yes, you go get Lily, and Im go to the library and stay there for the rest of the day and do homework. but isn't it around midnight when remus leaves. I dont think the library would be opened at midnight. but besides that, it was nice write

Author's Response: I actually did that on purpose...I intended to make it seem like Remus was too nervous to be thinking right, so he just said the first thing on his mind. I guess I didn't make it obvious enough, though.

Reviewer: Riddle
Date: 01/22/06 10:29
Chapter: Unplanned

Wooow.. That was a fantastic story.. I really liked: Im an idiot. Im an idiot. Im an idiot. But he did it too, so hes an idiot too. Oh Christ, were all idiots.. Haha..

Reviewer: veil_walker
Date: 01/21/06 14:16
Chapter: Unplanned

aw this is the cutest/hottest/bestest one shot i've read!!! you're brilliant that was so cute and lucky lil remus gettin to be with james and *huhuhuh* you are good! please can i have more? 10/10

Reviewer: Mrs Felton
Date: 01/08/06 6:55
Chapter: Unplanned

I never thought about reading James/Remus fics before but it's good! I never even thought about them romantically, if you know what i mean, just as friends. But I think the story is good so far. I wanna find out what happens next! But like i said, it's a good chapter keep it up! lol! :) xx

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