Reviewer: clovergirl
Date: 02/25/08 21:12
Chapter: Chapter 4

awww thats so sad!!! but HURRAY!! JAMES IS ALIVE!!!! sure, its just a story, but its an AWESOME story!! and yes, I use the caps lock a lot...:)

Reviewer: HedwigsChristie
Date: 06/16/07 5:20
Chapter: The Dam Breaks

Me again please update soon i need to know what hasppens, how will james take the news that his wife and bestfriends are dead, and how a manic killer is out to get harry and harry has battled him loads of times.
Please update please i NEED to knoww

Reviewer: HedwigsChristie
Date: 05/04/07 14:35
Chapter: Chapter 4

Just finished the chapter still a great story only problem was you wrots a paragraph twice which was wee bit confusing
Keep updating

Reviewer: TheTrioLivesOn
Date: 05/03/07 18:53
Chapter: Chapter 4

I can't wait for the update! This promisies to be a good story.

Reviewer: TheTrioLivesOn
Date: 05/03/07 18:53
Chapter: Chapter 4

I can't wait for the update! This promisies to be a good story.

Reviewer: EmmilineVance
Date: 04/16/07 22:19
Chapter: Return Home

hey i really like this story update soon!

Reviewer: HedwigsChristie
Date: 04/08/07 14:22
Chapter: The Dam Breaks

Please update soon i want to know what happens
It was brilliantly written and has a good story line (so far)
good idea and carry on :)

Reviewer: zonkoslover
Date: 04/06/07 17:42
Chapter: Return Home

Wow! i never ever thought of the possiblity of james being alive! wow i love this story! i hope u update soon!

Reviewer: Blossomlily
Date: 05/01/06 22:02
Chapter: James's Story

Oh, I enjoyed this chapter immensely. I know that most of what was described in it was terrible, but I did, strangely, enjoy it. It was beautifully written. That memory - the one of the Halloween night - was one of the best I have ever read in fanfiction. Harry and James playing hide the teddy bear? James could have just Accio-ed it, but he kept on in the middle of the night for his son's joy. Ohh..

Frankly, I didn't find anything to nit-pick in this chapter. I usually try to... The grammar was perfect and there were no mistakes to distract us from the storyline. I found the mood of the chapter exactly like the previous - nothing too dark, nothing too emotional. It was just right. You're a really talented writer. I can't wait to read more! Update soon, please!

Author's Response: Thank you, Blossomlily! There's nothing like a nice long review where people tell you how much they love your work. ;)

Reviewer: Blossomlily
Date: 04/03/06 23:53
Chapter: The Dam Breaks

I can't believe no one has reviewed this for I really liked it. I enjoyed it a lot, though it seems to be a sort of prologue, an introduction... It was really, really well-written. I liked this line from the story - "Well, maybe, but Adrian wished he knew what had been on the slate before it was wiped off." I loved your choice of words and particularly liked the part where he accidentally says the word 'Merlin'. I thought it was very fitting because you tend not to forget things like that even if you lose your memory because it's involuntary... But I do wonder how James came to lose his memory... Anyhow, I can't wait to read the next chapter.. update please! ~bL

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