Reviewer: wendelin the wierd
Date: 06/27/06 6:16
Chapter: Act One

Normally I don't read many cliche humour fics (I mean poking fun at cliches fics) but this and cliche nation are exceptions.

First of all, the name was hilarious. Infinity........babe. And the decription. Though kaleidoscope and having a pet lemur aren't exactly Mary-Sueish. Now a tiger would play the part well.(Or something exotic.)

I love the narrator. She or he gives exactly the right clues.

So basically, an awesome job. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: dobbys_mojo_619
Date: 06/06/06 12:17
Chapter: Act One

OMG. This story is ridiculously hysterical. Love the whole thing with Ernie and the machine gun. I laughed my head is now rolling down the hall...:-D Good work!

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 06/03/06 10:25
Chapter: Act One


Reviewer: sweeterthanhunny
Date: 05/25/06 8:20
Chapter: Act One

omg. ridiculous.tee hee.

Reviewer: LTPerson
Date: 05/20/06 17:23
Chapter: Act One

Congratulations Air Elemental! You have made me laugh so hard that I fell out of my chair. -gives you a fish-

Anyway, thank you very much for this amusing story! It has been added into my favorites and I hope to see much more of this in the NEAR future. ^_^

Author's Response: Yay! A fish! *takes the fish* Thank You!

Reviewer: Fly to Dawn
Date: 05/14/06 8:11
Chapter: Act One

*rolls on the floor with laughter*
The thing that got me were Justion and Susan's lines. I think you captured the Mary Sue problems well!!!
Laughter is always so good for you...

Reviewer: just_the_contrary
Date: 05/13/06 20:50
Chapter: Act One

That was hilarious! I am actually laughing so hard right now. It's so smart and funny, I love the play form. Good job! Keep the acts coming! I look forward to them. You have a gift with humour.

Reviewer: nenya
Date: 05/09/06 5:30
Chapter: Act One

Absolutly fantastic, one of the best parodies I have read on this site. I am really looking forward to an update, and I really liked that you did it as a scpritfic. 10/10

Reviewer: stareyed_in_LA
Date: 04/27/06 19:33
Chapter: Act One

This story is so funny, I was rolling with laughter on the floor. LOL. This is wicked awsome. It reminds me of those Not another Teen Movie and Scary Movie flicks. Hope you post more chapters.

Reviewer: Purplemage
Date: 02/26/06 12:22
Chapter: Act One

Great job Air Elemental!!!! I was laughing so laud during the whole thing. I especially liked the physical description of her and she also has hypnotic powers. Great job!

Reviewer: rache
Date: 02/24/06 11:18
Chapter: Act One

THIS I soOO Funny!!! There should be more fanfiction like this! Oh please update!! Infinity Babe is the the mary-sue of all time!!

Reviewer: littleWoNdErFuL
Date: 02/17/06 18:18
Chapter: Act One

I love you! Mary-Sue parodies=teh shiz ^^. In fact, I'm writing one about an alien transfer student right now that's posted at (there is no way it would get up here, seeing as I haven't identified it as a phony. My goal is to get her on Pottersue of the Day). But I lovelove this! It really made me laugh, especially when the audience HORRAYED for her "death." So funny. Great job, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks! Good Luck with your fic!

Reviewer: Cherry and Phoenix Feather
Date: 02/05/06 11:03
Chapter: Act One

*dies of laughter* That is too funny!! WE MUST ALL WAGE WAR AGAINST THE EVIL OF MARY-SUES!!! And humor is the deadliest weapon. Quick! Write another chapter, or the Mary-Sues will win!!

Reviewer: Ivona Queens
Date: 02/02/06 13:53
Chapter: Act One

Wow, this is hilarious! Keep up the great work, and please write more chapters! 10/10!

Reviewer: Vindictus Viridian
Date: 02/02/06 12:41
Chapter: Act One

Amazing where you end up by being curious after a "flames" thread... This looked interesting, I clicked, and -- Nice one! I like your melted Sorting Hat, and this particular bit of dialogue:

Justin: Hey! How come I didnít get any lines?

Susan: Donít look at me; I only got to say ĎNoí.

I'm always fond of self-referential humour and thought you did it well. And I'd love to see more of your narrator. You aren't really stopping here, are you?

Author's Response: No, I'm not! This little beauty's gonna be a five parter! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Deedyipotterfan13
Date: 01/14/06 11:18
Chapter: Act One

By FAR the best fanfic I have ever read.I don't remember ever laughing so hard. I'm not a big fan of Mary-Sue fanfics so it's just the thing for me.Hurry up with the next chapter.

Reviewer: Deedyipotterfan13
Date: 01/14/06 11:16
Chapter: Act One

By FAR the best fanfic I have ever read.I don't remember ever laughing so hard. I'm not a big fan of Mary-Sue fanfics so it's just the thing for me.Hurry up with the next chapter.

Reviewer: Alexarama
Date: 01/03/06 23:07
Chapter: Act One

Ahhh, how I love reading about Mary-Sue's lives. I htink I'm goign to go write a Pleasantville in HP fic ow. Thanks for inspiring me! 10/10. w00t w00t. Oh, um, what should I call it?

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the reviews, guys! I'm in shock! :-)

Reviewer: rache
Date: 01/03/06 20:22
Chapter: Act One

hahaahaa!!!I laughed so hard when the hat melted!! and then when Infinity sobbed "I'm so misunderstood"

Reviewer: forgotten_poems
Date: 01/03/06 14:43
Chapter: Act One

Loving the parody! Those are my favorite kinds of humor fics, and MNFF doesn't have many, unfortunately. Great job!

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