Normally I don't read many cliche humour fics (I mean poking fun at cliches fics) but this and cliche nation are exceptions.
First of all, the name was hilarious. Infinity........babe. And the decription. Though kaleidoscope and having a pet lemur aren't exactly Mary-Sueish. Now a tiger would play the part well.(Or something exotic.)
I love the narrator. She or he gives exactly the right clues.
So basically, an awesome job. Keep up the good work!
OMG. This story is ridiculously hysterical. Love the whole thing with Ernie and the machine gun. I laughed my head off...it is now rolling down the hall...:-D Good work!
Congratulations Air Elemental! You have made me laugh so hard that I fell out of my chair. -gives you a fish-
Anyway, thank you very much for this amusing story! It has been added into my favorites and I hope to see much more of this in the NEAR future. ^_^
Author's Response: Yay! A fish! *takes the fish* Thank You!
*rolls on the floor with laughter*
The thing that got me were Justion and Susan's lines. I think you captured the Mary Sue problems well!!!
*laughes*
Laughter is always so good for you...
That was hilarious! I am actually laughing so hard right now. It's so smart and funny, I love the play form. Good job! Keep the acts coming! I look forward to them. You have a gift with humour.
Absolutly fantastic, one of the best parodies I have read on this site. I am really looking forward to an update, and I really liked that you did it as a scpritfic. 10/10
This story is so funny, I was rolling with laughter on the floor. LOL. This is wicked awsome. It reminds me of those Not another Teen Movie and Scary Movie flicks. Hope you post more chapters.
Great job Air Elemental!!!! I was laughing so laud during the whole thing. I especially liked the physical description of her and she also has hypnotic powers. Great job!
THIS I soOO Funny!!! There should be more fanfiction like this! Oh please update!! Infinity Babe is the the mary-sue of all time!!
I love you! Mary-Sue parodies=teh shiz ^^. In fact, I'm writing one about an alien transfer student right now that's posted at FF.net (there is no way it would get up here, seeing as I haven't identified it as a phony. My goal is to get her on Pottersue of the Day). But I lovelove this! It really made me laugh, especially when the audience HORRAYED for her "death." So funny. Great job, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks! Good Luck with your fic!
*dies of laughter* That is too funny!! WE MUST ALL WAGE WAR AGAINST THE EVIL OF MARY-SUES!!! And humor is the deadliest weapon. Quick! Write another chapter, or the Mary-Sues will win!!
Wow, this is hilarious! Keep up the great work, and please write more chapters! 10/10!
Amazing where you end up by being curious after a "flames" thread... This looked interesting, I clicked, and -- Nice one! I like your melted Sorting Hat, and this particular bit of dialogue:
Justin: Hey! How come I didn’t get any lines?
Susan: Don’t look at me; I only got to say ‘No’.
I'm always fond of self-referential humour and thought you did it well. And I'd love to see more of your narrator. You aren't really stopping here, are you?
Author's Response: No, I'm not! This little beauty's gonna be a five parter! I'm glad you liked it!
By FAR the best fanfic I have ever read.I don't remember ever laughing so hard. I'm not a big fan of Mary-Sue fanfics so it's just the thing for me.Hurry up with the next chapter.
By FAR the best fanfic I have ever read.I don't remember ever laughing so hard. I'm not a big fan of Mary-Sue fanfics so it's just the thing for me.Hurry up with the next chapter.
Ahhh, how I love reading about Mary-Sue's lives. I htink I'm goign to go write a Pleasantville in HP fic ow. Thanks for inspiring me! 10/10. w00t w00t. Oh, um, what should I call it?
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the reviews, guys! I'm in shock! :-)
hahaahaa!!!I laughed so hard when the hat melted!! and then when Infinity sobbed "I'm so misunderstood"
Loving the parody! Those are my favorite kinds of humor fics, and MNFF doesn't have many, unfortunately. Great job!