Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 11/29/06 14:40
Chapter: Act One

Haha that made me laugh. It was very good, nicely written with the script format and the talking directly to the audience. Will read on.

Reviewer: Purplemage
Date: 11/26/06 13:55
Chapter: Act Two

Hey Anna!! I must say that I just died laughing while reading this. It is completely hilarious!!!! I’m a huge fan of random humor and this was just it at it’s best, and who doesn’t like a good fic that makes fun of Mary-Sues? You took too long to update though!

Infinity is a lot of fun to read. She’s such an airhead! My favorite lines were “They don’t have tanning salons at Hogwarts? Oh no! The angst!” That one killed me, “Totally! Evil sucks.” LOL that should be an avi right there! “Then I saw that I’d forgotten to straighten my hair! It was horrific!” That one was totally awesome too.

I love how you portray the canon characters, they’re totally clichéd, but they are in a weird OOC in character. Do I make any sense? No, I didn’t think so. Anyway, Dumbledore’s crazy ninja beard is one of the craziest things I’ve ever read, at first I was like Wha??? But then I started laughing madly when I remembered the scene in Kill Bill and I imagined Dumbledore doing the same, but with his beard.

I loved the Hermione/Ron moment. “Like what? Buy the author a book on character development?” I think that was probably my favorite line from the whole chapter. That one and the one where Hermione explains where Mary-Sues come from made me laugh madly. I think it is so funny that they would actually have a lesson in DADA about the evil Mary-Sues. LOL

Well, in case you didn’t notice before, I really liked this. You have a unique sense of humor that I love. I hope that the next chapter doesn’t take too long to come out.

Take care!

Reviewer: GinnyPotter808
Date: 11/22/06 14:59
Chapter: Act Two

Good, actually, great! Man I need a different way to review! To the library! And to the Hair Straighteners!
-Susan

Reviewer: GinnyPotter808
Date: 11/22/06 14:51
Chapter: Act One

Yay rebellious!! Good, well great actually, first chapter!
-Susan

Reviewer: funkylizard3
Date: 11/11/06 17:40
Chapter: Act Two

darn. i'm one of those shippers! AND OMG SHE'S THALIA'S SISTER!!! (don't ask, it's another book....lol...) yeah! woo! i love this story! great job!

Reviewer: sweeterthanhunny
Date: 11/09/06 5:02
Chapter: Act Two

Who writes this crap?


*checks notes* according to my information a certain person under the mugglenet pen name, or pseudonym, ....Air Elemantal.


Nice chapter. Wcaky crazy random weird and funny. Thats what I like.

Reviewer: some_kinda_superstar
Date: 11/08/06 2:36
Chapter: Act Two

Very funny! It took a while, but it was worth the wait! I love the last line, it was so funny. 'Who writes this crap?' I was chortling the whole way through. Great chapter, please update soon!

Reviewer: HPwizzzard
Date: 11/04/06 11:41
Chapter: Act One

Oooooh, a rebellious Sue. Nice. I love the Narrator (is that you?) and the lemur.

Author's Response: Nope, I'm the evil author who underpays them *cackles*

Reviewer: HPwizzzard
Date: 11/04/06 11:37
Chapter: Act One

Oooooh, a rebellious Sue. Nice. I love the Narrator (is that you?) and the lemur.

Reviewer: Seeker_Girl
Date: 11/04/06 10:49
Chapter: Act Two

*clutches side and doubles over* that was hilarious!! *stands up* bravo and brava.

Reviewer: Maraurderinchief
Date: 11/04/06 7:08
Chapter: Act Two

you do

Reviewer: Maraurderinchief
Date: 11/04/06 7:02
Chapter: Act Two

you do

Reviewer: _Ivy_
Date: 11/03/06 16:47
Chapter: Act Two

oh yeah i forgot to say... hilarious an i hope ur pills come soon!

Reviewer: _Ivy_
Date: 11/03/06 16:46
Chapter: Act Two

hey shes a mary sue, shes supposed to be lovd by everyone... rite? *cricket, cricket* hmph...

Reviewer: NickiGrint
Date: 11/03/06 16:39
Chapter: Act Two

Omigosh so funny!! 10/10

Reviewer: just_the_contrary
Date: 11/03/06 16:11
Chapter: Act Two

This is hilarious. I read the first act a while ago and wondered if it was an abandoned fic. Then I saw Act Two in the 'recent' sidebar and read it. It's just as funny as the first chapter. I love the little 'author' inserts and the random things like 'I forgot to straighten my hair! It was horrific!' Very humourous. *claps*

Reviewer: izandluc
Date: 10/21/06 21:08
Chapter: Act One

I'm a little confused, maybe you went a little to fast, but it was still really funny.

Reviewer: some_kinda_superstar
Date: 09/07/06 3:04
Chapter: Act One

Heehee. Loved it. Well done!

Reviewer: nysuperstarz
Date: 09/06/06 23:09
Chapter: Act One

I loved it! It was awesomw and it had most of the charcterictics of a sue. Update soon.

Reviewer: Crazy Inferi
Date: 07/27/06 15:58
Chapter: Act One

lol omg thats HILARIOUS!!! U HAVE TO UPDATE!!

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