Reviews For Always and Forever
Reviewer: whippy_pen17
Date: 11/19/06 13:52
Chapter: The Beginning

I really like the way you write, but I think James needs to turn his arrogance down a notch. Good luck!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! :) Yeah, he is a bit too cocky but he gets better later on, don't worry!

Reviewer: jandl
Date: 11/18/06 18:46
Chapter: Terrors of Traitors

awesome! send another chapter soon!

Author's Response: I'm actually making progress here! I stopped writing for a really LONG time beause of all of the other stuff I had to do. But I have finally gotten a break from all of that and I'm going to finish the chapter in just a few more sentences. =)

Reviewer: RavenClawHufflePuff
Date: 09/13/06 20:15
Chapter: The Beginning

I liked it. I hope you right more chapters.

Author's Response: Thanks, I've been having a difficult time getting motivated.. =P. =D

Reviewer: Quiditch fan
Date: 09/10/06 11:10
Chapter: Terrors of Traitors

great chapter...although the veritasierum was a bit random. where did she get it? this was great...and i am stoked they got the truth out of peter, that little "rat" anyway great chapter, please update soon!

Author's Response: Hmm... I have no clue. I guess I just needed someway for her to find out the truth. =P. Thanks for the review. I'm working on it! =)

Reviewer: hopelesslydevoted
Date: 08/30/06 13:40
Chapter: Attack of the Killer Julie

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Author's Response: Here's to hoping that's a good 'oooo'! =). Thanks for reviewing! =D

Reviewer: hopelesslydevoted
Date: 08/30/06 13:31
Chapter: Moving On

i reviewd! donde esta mi chocolate brownie! ive always wanted to hug james!! just bc his name is so amazing

Author's Response: [] [] []. I have always loved those... my favorite! =) Hehe. Yes, it is amazing. Have you hugged your James today? =P.

Reviewer: hopelesslydevoted
Date: 08/30/06 11:35
Chapter: A Plan in the Making

i like brownies...
and this story so far...

Author's Response: Good to hear... especially the brownie part! Some people just don't realize the hard work I put into those things. =P.

Reviewer: HPdiva
Date: 08/28/06 12:24
Chapter: Terrors of Traitors

I love how you put the feelings and emotions of the other 'dark' characters into this chapter. BUt it makes me wonder if your going to kill off Nicole and Arielle because they now now that Peter is a traitor and if they tell James, Sirius and Remus, the future would change. Please update soon because I really want to know how the others are doing, especially Lily. And please dont kill off her friends :(

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! =) Nicole and Arielle have an... interesting future in store for them. I've been trying to decided whether or not to kill them off or not but you'll just have to wait to see what I've come up with. =) I'm sorry about the HUGE gaps between the chapters. Just so you know, I hate them too. =P. =)

Reviewer: horntail123
Date: 08/13/06 19:36
Chapter: Prisoners Of War

i luv ur stories, but i hate your bloody cliffhangers!!!!!!!! ahhhhhh!!!!

Author's Response: Hehe, apparently, everyone does! =) Thanks, and I *hope* the next chappie will be up soon!! =P

Reviewer: Quiditch fan
Date: 08/08/06 21:50
Chapter: Prisoners Of War

oh my, what an intense chapter...update sooner, got it? okay, got it...hmpf. this was amazing, and i love the part when sirius is all, if i don't get out of this, tell arille i love her, and then remus is all, same to nicole. so cute. great cliffie ending, grrr. UPDATE!


Author's Response: I hope the next chapter will be up soon. I have to fix a few things, send it in, and hope it gets accepted the second time around... Yeah, I liked that part too. =) Thanks! And I'll really try to get it up soon.

Reviewer: darkangelx02
Date: 08/03/06 0:34
Chapter: The Beginning

a bit fluffy but all in all it was definately a good start. keep updating!


Author's Response: Thank you! =)

Reviewer: Mischief_managed01
Date: 08/02/06 11:02
Chapter: Moving On

to the question in the end note


YYYYYYEEEEEEEESSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh so much


M.M

Author's Response: Yeah, poor James, huh? Thanks. =D =)

Reviewer: Midnight109
Date: 07/31/06 20:20
Chapter: Prisoners Of War

Did you have to leave a cliffhanger as soon as I started reading? :P

I can't wait till you continue! I love the Character Arielle and how you portray Lily, Sirius, and Remus! It's just amazing- one of the best...no, THE BEST Lily/James fic I ever read! I'm going to add this to my favourites RIGHT NOW!

P.S. You'd better update soon or next chapter review I'll scold you for it!

Author's Response: Yup, pretty much every chapter. Hehe. =D I'm almost done with the next chapter, so I hope it will be up soon. Yeah, I'm fond of Arielle too! =D. I'm really glad you like the characters. Wow, that is such a sweet review and a great compliment. Thank you so much! It should be up soon!

Reviewer: AlayaRiddle
Date: 07/31/06 17:16
Chapter: Prisoners Of War

OMG!!!!!!!!! This is such a great story... i can't believe i haven't read it till now...
You r a totally awesome author... u really captured the characters.

Author's Response: Wow, such a great compliment! Thank you! *Blushes* =P. =)

Reviewer: hpfan518
Date: 07/31/06 12:42
Chapter: Prisoners Of War

omg cliffhanger awsome i totally cant wait for the next chapter


Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I'm almost done with the next chapter but I don't really know when it will be up next. Thanks. =D

Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie
Date: 07/31/06 12:20
Chapter: Prisoners Of War

“Okay, I won’t let you down Prongs,” Peter said, with no intention of keeping their secret. *sing song voice* I don't like Peter, I dont' like Peter! GAHHH!!! "...leaving a confused Peter behind, wondering if he did the right thing." Well of course you didn't fo the right thing you twit! YOU did set that up nicely though- i like how you made Peter act. Very nice. *finishes* Gasp! Why have all the chaps I've read today ended like this?!?! GAH!!! I dont' like it when author's take advantage of the "We're authors, so we get to use cliffhangers!" rule. GRRrr. Great chap though. I liked the "Tell Arielle/ Nicole i love her" bits. That was sweet.


Author's Response: Yeah, I don't like Peter either. So I get to make him seem as stupid as I want to! =P =). Hehe, sorry about the cliffy... I would say that I will update soon but I have no clue whether my chapter is going to be rejected *again*. =P. I'll try though. Thanks for reviewing. By the way, I love your story! =)

Reviewer: MrsRuebeusHagridDursley
Date: 07/30/06 20:31
Chapter: Prisoners Of War

You don't like the end? I do! Keep up the excellent work.

Author's Response: Well, I am glad you like it... I just thought the way that it was written was odd. =P Thanks a bunch. =D

Reviewer: hp8401
Date: 07/25/06 17:26
Chapter: Prisoners Of War

oooo i cant wait to read it!!!! its okay if its late. im just glad to i can read it now!
horay first review!

Author's Response: Thanks... again. =P. It'll be up soon... I hope.

Reviewer: hp8401
Date: 07/25/06 16:52
Chapter: Prisoners Of War

oooo i cant wait to read it!!!! its okay if its late. im just glad to i can read it now!
horay first review!

Author's Response: And I can't wait for you to read it! I had fun writing that chapter, hence the length. =P. I'm glad it's okay if it's late because it really is! =) Thanks.

Reviewer: California
Date: 07/16/06 12:08
Chapter: Moving On

aww so sad

Author's Response: Yeah, poor James =P. Thanks.

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