Please update quickly, as this is a doozy of a cliffhanger and I'm addicted to your story now. *helps self to a brownie* Mmm. Cybery...
Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you're hooked. =D Yup, you gotta love those e-brownies! =) Thanks for the review!
I forgot to add this to my review:
Whheeeeeee! FIRST REVIEW! *does a happy little first reviewy dance* hehe ^_^
Author's Response: Much love to the reviewers (especially the first ones)! =)
GAH! Please update again soon! Please OH please OH please! You left me hanging last time, and now I'm hanging on a thread after this chapter! It was incredible. I cannot wait to read the next chapter. I'm sure that it will be just as amazing as this one. I LOVED IT!
[[ vicky ]]
Author's Response: Yay! That made me smile. =D I'll update kinda sorta soon. I'm really hoping that I can post by this Sunday, but, with it being Tuesday today, that might be a little difficult. But, I promise I will try!! =) Thanks!
oh my god i do wanna hug him! that was so sweet!
Author's Response: =) Thanks, the new chapter should be sent in by this Saturday.
to James: hugshugshugshugshugshugshugshugshughugshugs!
Author's Response: Hug away! He needs the love! =P Thanks! =D
Wow! I couldn't stop to review until now b/c this story is SOOOO GOOD! Keep updating this one, it's amazing! I'll bake you some virtual sugar cookies for the great work. :)
Author's Response: Hehe, thanks so much! =)
Your fanfiction is really good but just try to clarify when there is a character switch. I got confused a couple times. Other then that it's really good!!!
Author's Response: Oops, sorry about that; I'll work on it! =) Thanks for the review, =).
Pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaassssseeeeeeeeeupdate soon! You're killing me with impatience!
Author's Response: Ooooh, don't worry, it'll be up soon! =)
OMG!!!!! update update updaaaaate!! please update soon and really fast. the story just keeps gettign more intriguing and captivating that I'm left craving for more. props to the fabulous author and much love. xoxo
Author's Response: It'll be up as soon as I can possibly get it going! (And I actually mean it this time!) =P I'm SO glad that you like it and took the time to review! =) Thank you! =D
Author's Response: =) Thanks
Good chapter! Thank you so much for making your chapters nice and long!!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: The long ones usually come after a lot of guilt for not updating! Hehe =P. I'll post another chapter up as soon as I can! =D
It was really eventful and an exciting chapter but I got pretty confused by it.. I cannot understand why there would be a pensieve just sitting around during a death eater attack. Just got knid of confused on this one. You still did a good job though!
Author's Response: Hehe, I actually had to go back and look up what you were talking about because I couldn't remember! =P The pensieve was there because somebody had placed it there for him since they wanted to distract him as long as possible before he figured out that Lily was gone. I hope that cleared it up for you! Thanks a bunch! =)
Good chapter, I got kind of confused about who was saying what when they were fighting though.
Author's Response: Sorry, I tried not to make it confusing but I realize that it kind of turned out that way. =P Thanks!
Wow! good chapter, your a really good writer! the pace has picked up a lot more now and I'm really enjoying it!
Author's Response: Thanks, this was a fun chapter to write. =) I'm glad you like it! =D
Really cute chapter! Yeah your totally right about wanting to hug James, poor guy.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yup, you gotta love James! =)
Good chapter, it's a little bit of a slow start, But you obviously have some really good writing skills!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! =)
WOW. That was one load of a chapter! It was brilliant!
I felt so bad for Arielle when Nicole yelled at her! I mean, it was wrong of Arielle to think that about Lily, of course, but Nicole didn't have to do that. She could have gone back inside and apologized.
OMG. The end? AMAZING. I really hope Lily gets out. And I really hope that James and Remus and Sirius don't die. That would be horrible. I want Peter to die. But I know that's not going to happen. *cries*
About your author's note, you can be sure that I will be reading this until the end. I'm too far into it to stop now! It's incredible; definitely not something I'm likely to stop reading anytime soon.
Keep on writing!
Author's Response: Yay a long review; my favorite kind! =) Hehe, I felt like making Arielle do that to show that they are still human because when I was writing this chapter they seemed way too boring. =P I'm so GLAD you like the end because that took me so, so long to think of. =) It's great to hear that people are still reading! I hope to give you guys another chapter really soon! =D
In answer to your question, yes I do. I have a thing for the idea that it was love at first sight for him. But maybe the crush was a bit abrupt on Lily's part. Maybe the crush and conflicting feelings should have come after the nice love confession and him trying to change. Just a thought.
Author's Response: Yeah, that would have been nicer but I wanted to get the story moving along quicker so I had to kind of rush the beginning a bit more than I guess I should have. =P
i'm still reading keep writing
Author's Response: Ahh, that's music to my ears! =) I'll get right on the next chapter!
Yes, I do just want to hug him. I think the way he gets nervous aroung Lily is adorible! Keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: Don't we all? =) Thanks and, I'm happy to say, you should be expecting a new chapter in the queue very, very soon. =D