Reviews For Always and Forever
Reviewer: Pixie Flite
Date: 06/25/07 19:27
Chapter: A Plan in the Making

Hihi. Erm. Sirius really was dumb. I mean, really. So... that was a great chapter, but I like long and lengthy. but,... yeah. So, great job. Can i have my brownie now? :D

Author's Response: Yeah, Sirius is rather slow at times. But that's why he has James. =D Thanks for the review, here are your e-brownies : [] [] [] Haha.

Reviewer: Lily_rocks
Date: 06/16/07 18:47
Chapter: Escape

This story is getting good, plz update soon !

Author's Response: I actually mean it this time, since I have kept saying that I am nearly done and not actually being nearly done, I am posting the 12th chapter up today... but it might be a few days before it gets to everybody.

Reviewer: Lily_rocks
Date: 06/16/07 16:02
Chapter: Moving On

interesting. it was kinda funny when you put their thoughts in and .. here is my favorite quote, ' "No, but I was asking you a bunch of questions and you just nodded or shook your head to whatever I said… and then I asked you if wanted to snog Snape and you just nodded your head,” ' =D

Author's Response: Thanks. Hehe, yes I do like having a frazzled Lily. =]

Reviewer: Lily_rocks
Date: 06/16/07 16:00
Chapter: A Plan in the Making

That was rather inetresting. i liked the last part

Author's Response: Thanks. You'll soon be seeing what happens next.

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/02/07 23:28
Chapter: Escape

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm posting it up today, I promise!!

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/02/07 23:19
Chapter: Alone

i hope she gets out soon! everybody else too!

Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see. ;D

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/02/07 22:42
Chapter: Terrors of Traitors

I hope lily and james get back safe--and soon!

Author's Response: I'm updating today!

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/02/07 17:59
Chapter: Prisoners Of War

Oh my gosh! This is going very badly! Oh, does it get happy? I couldn't bear to read the rest of the story if something happened! *starts crying uncontrollably*

Author's Response: ... bad stuff happens, but there's some happy mixed in there too!

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/02/07 1:35
Chapter: Confusion

OMGOSH! what happens????!!!!! so sad!

Author's Response: Dun, dun, dun! *cue suspensful music*

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/02/07 1:27
Chapter: The Trip to Hogsmede

Where did Lily go? Oh no!

Author's Response: Don't worry, you'll see her again!

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/02/07 1:05
Chapter: Moving On

yeah, i really want to just hug james and tell him that lily really loves him and everything is going to be all right but it's a stupid computer! what can i do?! i can't hug a computer!

Author's Response: Aww, that's okay. I'll give him a hug from you! =D

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/01/07 18:48
Chapter: The Beginning

i like it, but why does james have 2 b so full of himself? all the stories do that o well i guess thats jsut the way he is

Author's Response: I showed him like that in the beginning to show how he gradually changes in his behavior.

Reviewer: Freebird1965
Date: 04/02/07 20:31
Chapter: Secrets Revealed

Really good story !

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: zonkoslover
Date: 03/15/07 20:41
Chapter: Escape

OMG! i really like where this is going............

Author's Response: =) Thank you! Ooh, I'm overwhelmed with guilt! I haven't written anything for the longest time! I really should... I've been so busy. =/ Enough with the excuses. Thanks for reviewing anyway. =D

Reviewer: liveonluna
Date: 02/17/07 13:46
Chapter: Escape

WOW! Great chapter, I can't wait to see what is happening. Is the cave and the room Lily is in near eachother or are they at different locations. Why does Voldemort want Lily but hasn't talked to her? AHH. I can't wait until my questions are answered. PLEASE,PLEASE update soooon.

Author's Response: The cave and the room are in separate locations but they are somewhat near each other. Uh, I can't really answer the Voldie question yet, but I'll make sure to answer that in the next chapter. =) I have this week off so I'll be writing a lot, I promise. =D Thanks.

Reviewer: Nutters4Potter
Date: 02/11/07 23:16
Chapter: Escape

Escape! Help Lily! Thanks for writing.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. =P =D

Reviewer: Quiditch fan
Date: 02/11/07 14:50
Chapter: Escape

well, this was definitley an interesting chapter. lots of escape and anger and yeah. i liked you should update soon! good plan, i know.

Author's Response: =) Thanks.

Reviewer: stefi9
Date: 02/07/07 20:08
Chapter: Escape

aahhhh! cliffhanger! the whole spoon/hole thing is a little cliche dont you think?8/10

Author's Response: =)

Reviewer: jenny b
Date: 02/06/07 4:37
Chapter: Escape

ooooohhh!!! nice chappie! i don't think I've reviewed this story before, but it's really good. But the whole James/Lily, Sirius/Arielle and Remus/Nicole thing was a bit cliquey. It was so obvious. I still like your story though, I'm a sucker for romance fics, especially Lily/James ones. All in all, I love it!

Author's Response: When I first started this story, I didn't really know where I was going with it so I just started some things going to get the story moving along. That's pretty much the only reason for the Sirius/Arielle and Remus/Nicole thing; sorry about that. =P Anywho, I'm just happy you liked it! Thanks for reviewing. :-)

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE
Date: 02/05/07 21:20
Chapter: Escape

WOW! that was great! I'm begging you, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update emmediately!!!!!!!!!!!! honestly it's been so long since your last update that i kinda forgot about the story! so please please up date soon!

Author's Response: Ahh, I don't want you to forget what's happening! I'll be sure to update quicker just for that. =) Thanks.

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