Reviews For Always and Forever
Reviewer: ValorOrgulloso
Date: 04/29/06 19:58
Chapter: Secrets Revealed

This is a GREAT story! Add more chapters! I definitely wanna see how this one ends!

Author's Response: Thank you! I am so happy you like it! I have a lot of different ideas on how it should end so even I'm not exactly sure how it's going to end! =) I have the next chapter done. I just need to get done by my beta and I'll post it.

Reviewer: Phenioxsong22
Date: 04/19/06 21:12
Chapter: Secrets Revealed

I loved it! You portray Lily and James so well! I can't wait to find out what happens next! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! Ahh there is so much craziness in Chapter 6 that even I'm having trouble figuring out where to put what. I'll try to update soon!

Reviewer: AngelicaBlack
Date: 04/19/06 16:44
Chapter: Secrets Revealed

I loved it all and i didnt find it one bit confussin g untill the end but that was a good thing. I love the twist with Julie being evil. (wua ha ha) and i understand why you took so long but try to write the next chapter faster please. :9

Author's Response: Aww, sorry I confused you! Ooh, sorry about that; I'll have the next chapter up really quickly! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: HPdiva
Date: 04/18/06 13:18
Chapter: Secrets Revealed

What??? this is going to be a 'short story'..urg, i was getting so into it! anyways- please please please please update soon cause i love the story!

Author's Response: Well, it's going to be a relatively short story. I don't think it will have much more than 20 chapters or so. Ooh, I am still working on chapter 6!! Sorry about that! It's almost done though! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: HPdiva
Date: 04/18/06 12:50
Chapter: Moving On

I know this chapter has been up for a while probably, but I just started reading your story today...and YES I do want to hug James~xoxo

Author's Response: Yay! Another new reviewer!! =) Aww, poor James! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 04/16/06 22:55
Chapter: Secrets Revealed

THAT LITTLE!?!? GGRRRRR to Julie! I love the plot though, highly exciting! 1000/10!

Author's Response: Hehe, sorry about that. Thanks, I'll update soon!

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 04/16/06 22:46
Chapter: Attack of the Killer Julie

ooooooooh, love is powerful towards the mind, don't you agree??? I love the story, keep up the great wprk. 1000000/10 for all the emotions!

Author's Response: *Sigh* Sure is! =) Thanks so much! I'm so flattered!

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 04/16/06 22:36
Chapter: Moving On

ohhh, poor James!! if i could i would jhump through the scren, into the story and give him the biggest hug. And then i would give my look-a-like (I also have red, curly hair, green eyes and am short) some advice- bloody just tell him!!!!! But I loved the story anyway. 10/10

Author's Response: Aww, poor James. He and Lily will be together soon enough.... well kinda. =) Haha, your look-a-like! =) Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 04/16/06 22:24
Chapter: A Plan in the Making

oooh, and the plot thickens!! I really like this story so make sure you update often for me! 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm really glad you like it!

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 04/16/06 22:12
Chapter: The Beginning

oooh, I like it. Exactly how I pictured the characters. well done. 10/10

Author's Response: Yay! I have a new reviewer! =) Thanks so much!

Reviewer: MrsRuebeusHagridDursley
Date: 04/11/06 18:09
Chapter: Secrets Revealed

Excellent Chapter. Your characters seem so real!

Author's Response: Really? Thanks so much!! =)

Reviewer: kaammini_the_kreacher
Date: 04/11/06 17:48
Chapter: Secrets Revealed

That was a great chapter! The fighting between Lily and James was really well done and Julie *shudders*! Write more soon :)

Author's Response: Thank you! Haha, there is more Julie to come. I'll try to update soon!

Reviewer: Quiditch fan
Date: 04/09/06 18:51
Chapter: Secrets Revealed

wow, that was good. i really just want to see james and lily hook up....NOW. and i ...don't like julie. she is BAD! this was a great chapter. you know, i was kinda hoping that he would just kiss her during all the yelling, but that is okay, it will just have to happen in the next chapter. anyway, update soon!

Author's Response: Hehe, hi! Ooh, I'm sorry, you're going to have to wait a while until that happens... And soon, you will see just how bad Julie is. Aww, sorry! Don't worry; they will eventually! I'll try to update as soon as possible! =)

Reviewer: kaammini_the_kreacher
Date: 02/21/06 17:17
Chapter: The Beginning

I reviewed the third chapter not knowing that the fourth was written already! I got so excited when I saw it but as it was the middle of the night here I had to go to bed! I really like this chapter, it has something JKRowlinf-esque to it. Mystery person??!! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Wow, *smiles proudly* thank you so much!! I love mystery stories but whenever I try to write them they turn out... weird. Chapter five has been in queue since *checks date* the 16th. Thanks again for the awesome review!

Author's Response: Wow, I read my response and it sounded very odd. What I meant was that I love reaing mystery stories and that always makes me want to put that type of stuff in my stories. But whenever I try to, my stories turn out boring and predictable. So if there is anything in my story that is even slightly mysterious, it is probably completely by accident. =D. Anyway, hope I didn't confuse you to much...

Reviewer: kaammini_the_kreacher
Date: 02/19/06 18:37
Chapter: Moving On

That was so sweet! I like the way it all connects. eg. when you explain why lupin is teaching peter how to transform the quill!! Continue soon please :)

Author's Response: Thanks. =D

Reviewer: i cried
Date: 02/18/06 14:03
Chapter: Attack of the Killer Julie

you are officially my favorite author ever!- except for jk rowling- not only bc u are a great writer but bc u respond to ur reviews- i hope to read chap 5 soon

Author's Response: thank you so much! you really made my day! chapter five should, hopefully, be up soon.

Reviewer: ThePhoenixLament
Date: 02/16/06 10:33
Chapter: Attack of the Killer Julie

DOWN WITH JULIE!! James is mine! I mean, uh....Lily's. I don't want to bother you to update soon, because that's probably annoying.....but I can't wait!! Great story/chapter.

Author's Response: thanks for the review... well reviews! =) I'm sending chapter five in today.

Reviewer: ThePhoenixLament
Date: 02/16/06 10:23
Chapter: Moving On

So can I have James? Honestly, who wouldn't love him? Come on Lily, just tell him! Anyway, great story! Keep it up!

Author's Response: haha, James is so awesome! thanks.

Reviewer: Quiditch fan
Date: 02/16/06 7:48
Chapter: Attack of the Killer Julie

that was awsome, and i love the title of your is very sweet/romantic/cute...yeah. anyway, lily just needs to go tell james,and i was so sad when james was crying, it just made me so sad...and now james is getting back at her and it is sad cause now she will be upset...and oh my, it is just a circle of bad stuff. anyway, update soon, and yeah.

Author's Response: aw, thanks. I'm sorry to tell you that Lily's not going to tell James for a while... but she makes it really obvious a couple of times. But definetly not anytime soon. I'm about to send chapter five in. Just a few more tweaks! =P

Reviewer: MrsRuebeusHagridDursley
Date: 02/12/06 21:12
Chapter: Attack of the Killer Julie

Weeeeeeeeeeee! That was a great chapter! I loooooooove your story. It ROCKS! Update fast!

Author's Response: thanks so much! chapter five is almost done!!

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