AMAZING CAN'T WAIT TILL NEXT CHAPTER
hey your stories are great! i like the stories bout how james and lily get together. adding drama and humor makes it more fun....please hutty up w/ always and forever cuz that is an awesome story!!!
good for nicole and arielle!
not your best chapter, but it was ok.
so, wait, no one is even looking for lily?! why is everyone treating this so lightly?!
oh my gosh!! lily was taken by the death eaters?!
julie is a death eater?! even more reason for james not to go out with her.
argh, james! the idiot is taking julie?! how awful...
aaww!! i wanna hug james! i cant believe he just said that! wow, lucky lily!
ok, its really cliche that lily's friends like the marauders, but like the story anyway.
I'm going to read more ASAP
This story is really great. Please add another chapter as soon as you can.
when will the next chap be up????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? I want to read it now!!!!!!!!!!!!
please?!?!
T_T T_T T_T T_T T_T
hi my name is Alex. You are AWESOME at writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :):):):)
i suck at it personally, but hey who cares???:P
this story is RADICAL, AWESOME, COOL, SWEETNESS, AND INSPIRING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE update!
I'm guessing, that after all this is over, they'll all carry enchanted mirrors. What I want to know is, whats wrong with all the teachers, and Dumbledore?! It's as if they've forgotten all these missing students exist! Did Snape memory charm them or something? And what on earth will they all do without wands? And is Peter helping or not? I can't wait to find out, but there are no more chapters, so please update soon. It's a shame nobody knows how to make a wand, I mean they're in a forest and there's always unicorn tail hair caught in bushes according to Hagrid, but I guess nothings ever that simple. Where's the invisibility cloak? And who fixed the marauders map not to work? And how stupid are the death eaters to leave prisoners unbound in holey cells? And when's full moon? Because Remus might transform before they get out and James and Sirius mightn't be able to transform into their animagi without wands! Sorry, getting over excited again, I just get so involved. Anyway, please update soon.
I adore Lily and James fics, marauders and all. In this chapter when James and Lily are arguing, the swearing didn't seem to fit in. I knew Julie was dodgey. And I loved Sirius' comment about being Hogwarts no.1 Hottie.
noooo why did she reject him again?????????? noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo its soosooooooo soooos oooosoooo sad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Argh Lily is driving me insane, she is being so paranoid! Update soon, I'll be looking forward to it!
“I < b> don’t to hear want about Julie!” Lily said. Her voice squeaked slightly as she said her name.
You put a space before the b... So it doesn't get bold. :) Great story, by the way!
“I < b> don’t to hear want about Julie!” Lily said. Her voice squeaked slightly as she said her name.
You put a space before the b... So it doesn't get bold. :) Good story, by the way!
