Reviewer: YouMaySayNymphadora
Date: 01/07/08 17:24
Chapter: One-shot

I LOVE it!! A much better Christmas for Tonks & Remus than Jo gave them! Very sweet, loving, and well... just so very Tonks & Remus!

Sorry if I sound er, a bit over excited. Tonks & Remus are my favs and I devour the really good fan fics about them! I hope you write more, I like your style. It's well written, yet easy to read.

Til we meet again,

{I know it's a ridiculously long pen-name, but I HAD to have one with Nymphadora in it!}

Reviewer: Merlin the Weirdster
Date: 05/29/07 9:02
Chapter: One-shot

i loved it. sweet, and interesting. its a bit sad how lupin says he's sorry he doesnt have a better gift for tonks

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 04/15/07 17:54
Chapter: One-shot

I like it! It was very sweet. And that was a good gift for Lupin to give to Tonks. It would be the perfect way for her to remember him when she wasn't with him.

Reviewer: magicmuffin
Date: 08/26/06 16:56
Chapter: One-shot

I thought your fic was good, and if you still need a beta, I'm here for you.

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 08/22/06 0:01
Chapter: One-shot

Awww! So cute! A little rushed, but adorable! how do find out how many reads you got?

Reviewer: Fading
Date: 08/14/06 21:30
Chapter: One-shot

That was good! Yay for Lupin/Tonks! Good job! =)

Reviewer: FaunaCaritas
Date: 08/05/06 6:58
Chapter: One-shot

Hmmm, I liked parts of your story. I would advise you to keep writing and work on perfecting your style. On the whole this was too choppy, and the story, while promising, lacked depth. I feel bad giving a negative review, but you did beg for reviews at the end. However I hope speaking my mind doesn't discourage you from writing more.
You have promise!

Reviewer: I_Miss_Sirius
Date: 07/07/06 20:17
Chapter: One-shot

I like it! Keep up the good work! (Is it just me or did I just sound like a teacher giving a grade to a student?! lol.)

Reviewer: nobi_fawkes
Date: 06/06/06 7:22
Chapter: One-shot

yayy!!!!!!! I'm jumping up and down in my head!!!!! yessssssss!!!!!!!!!! I've been waiting for a fic like this. Thank you.

Reviewer: Seductive_Swan
Date: 06/03/06 23:55
Chapter: One-shot

I really love Remus/Tonks stories, and yours is one of the better ones. My only criticism is that the letter didn't sound very natural, what I mean is it didn't flow. Otherwise, the story was great; I do love happy endings!

Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil
Date: 05/21/06 12:47
Chapter: One-shot

I really like this one!

Author's Response: Thanks!!! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Wolfsbane werewolf 715
Date: 05/20/06 22:12
Chapter: One-shot

*sniff, sniff* taht was so touching........
great story! 10000000000000000000/10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: thanks!!! I'm glad you liked it even it made you cry ;)

Reviewer: cassandras_daughter
Date: 04/24/06 2:49
Chapter: One-shot

Very nice . . . the simplicity of it makes the story very unique . . . write more fics

Author's Response: Thanks!! I will as soon as I have a good idea and the time to write it.

Reviewer: ginnypotter04
Date: 04/12/06 22:33
Chapter: One-shot

awww that was a sweet story, well done!

Author's Response: Thanks!!! I'm happy you liked it

Reviewer: Lily Marie Evans Potter
Date: 04/11/06 21:41
Chapter: One-shot

sooooooooo sweet I love it but the ending is a little different

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!!

Reviewer: Jane Bilus
Date: 04/11/06 15:14
Chapter: One-shot

Aw it was so cute! i usually read the R/Hr ones but this one has made me think about reading more lupin/tonls ones. great job, keep up the good work! 9/10

Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it!! By all means keep reading Lupin/Tonks stories, there are many excellent ones.

Reviewer: ania potter
Date: 04/11/06 8:45
Chapter: One-shot

that was soo sweet that i wish it would happen to me...good job

Author's Response: Don't we all? :) thanks!

Reviewer: MartiOwlsten
Date: 04/10/06 2:18
Chapter: One-shot

Aw, very cute. I am such a sucker for Lupin/Tonks (in all honesty, I always was one, but I was really excited to have it supported by HP6). It was simple, and sweet - I thought that some of Tonk's thoughts on the matter were slightly juvenille for her, but overally it wasn't a bad thing - it worked well for your one-shot. You had Lupin down perfectly. Excellent work, lovely one-shot, very nice!

Author's Response: thanks!! And i apreciate the critisism. I may have identified a little too much with Tonks. I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: ladyofthebookworms
Date: 03/31/06 9:23
Chapter: One-shot

You use a lot of !!!!! in your replies. This was really a really good one-shot, I'm going to check if you have anymore, and if you don't you should!

Author's Response: Thanks! I haven't written anything else, yet, school is keeping me busy. I will try as soon as I can.

Reviewer: lilluthor
Date: 02/08/06 15:55
Chapter: One-shot

AWWWWWWWW!!! So cute! I love Lupin/Tonks stories! Yours is brilliant! I know this is a lame review, but that note at the bottom about the hundred something people who didn't review guilted me into it. GREAT JOB!

Author's Response: It's not lame!!! Thanks!!!! And I was kind of hoping that would be the effect of the note *guilty look* I'm really glad you liked it so much.

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