I really enjoy marauder fics and this one has started out very well. As there've been no updates for a considerable time I'll assume there aren't going to be, but this chapter could stand alone as a 'thoughts before 7th year' fic. Well written.
It's really good, but seeing as i'm a Lily fan more that a James fan, i think it would have been better with more Lily than James. But still, like I said, it was really good anyways
i liked this story but you havent updated since like LAST YEAR!Please please update soon
Loving the story, every bit of it. It's really nice. Keep it up. Update soon!!!
I really liked this story. I thought that it had a good beginning, and it wasn't slow moving, like other first chapters. Good job!