Very well written overall, and I think you captured the characters well too. Very sweet, and I recognized the Love Actually quote! And yes, it is the best Christmas movie ever.
i luv it write more, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really liked your story. Love Actually is the most awesomest movie ever (if that's even a word, lol). I liked your idea of this story, I think you could possibly add a little more to it or maybe a sequel, perhaps the after defeat LV. How Harry reading about his mum and Ginny's love helped him or something. Just my 2 knuts :-) Excellent story!
I really liked the relationship you showed between Harry and Ginny. It wasn't like "I love you." "I love you too." "Let's kiss." "Okay," smoochy smoochy. You know what I mean? The subtle little kiss on the cheek was perfect. Nicely written, too. Good one.
Author's Response: yeah, i thought it was good cus it wasnt like this "omg i have to have you now" kiss, it was just like a "see you around" kiss, you know what i mean?
I really like this fic, it ended really well, I agree with AstroFire...the letter was really relastic...if you write another fic, I will definetly read it...10/10, au revoir.~*~
Author's Response: lol, i cant even believe ppl like my story!! oh this is so good! ciao! (well i couldn't use french, you already did)
It was nice :) It was short but still very good. I liked how you handled the H&G conversation, and that letter of Sirius was so realistic. Very well written. Congrats. PS:Btw, did you know we have a fic with the same title? I came across with yours because of that. Just thought to let you know ^^
Author's Response: thanks! i was so worried, this is my very first fic ::GRIN:: im very, very glad that you liked it!!!