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Reviews For My Amortentia

Name: Jane Bilus (Signed) · Date: 05/05/06 13:07 · For: My Amortentia
well i've now only got one more of your stories to read and i'm loving them all so far! 10/10 for each they're all brialliant and please add some more soon!

Author's Response: don't worry, wokring on more!

Name: Roach76 (Signed) · Date: 04/24/06 22:40 · For: My Amortentia
That was very cute. I've always wondered what was Hermione's third smell. I'm hoping we find out what Ron's smells are, I like your idea though.

Author's Response: One hasta be food, though. HASTA BE FOOD!

Name: animagusRR (Signed) · Date: 04/24/06 8:24 · For: My Amortentia
It's a very interesting approach and your plot is good. Well done. I liked it

Author's Response: Thankies, very much. I love reviews. Gives me something to do.

Name: fanficfan (Signed) · Date: 04/18/06 12:19 · For: My Amortentia
aww, that was cute :-)

Author's Response: Hee Hee, thankies :0

Name: notabanana (Signed) · Date: 04/11/06 17:34 · For: My Amortentia
I don't have much to say about the story, it was pretty good. That meaning it was fluffy and made me smile. But I think you shoud rewrite your summary. It seems a little amature (I hope that is spelled right or I'll sound so hypocritical).

Author's Response: Um, ok, I'll take a look....hmm....I didn't think it was ametuer...

Name: TotalLunacy81 (Signed) · Date: 04/10/06 0:57 · For: My Amortentia
When I read the part of Cormac Krum, it seemed a bit confusing at first, but it was only Ron's nightmare. I wouldn't say dream because he obviously loves Hermione. All-in-all, I loved your story. When I read the part about Amortentia in HBP, I figured Hermione's last smell was Ron. That part in your story made me smile because at least some one else agrees that it's Ron. Oh and I loved Ron's smells. They fit his character in the book so well. Great story overall. It's sad that it's only a one-shot.

Author's Response: I love writing one-shots, cuz you don't have to keep worrying about updating them...

Name: WannaBeMrsRonWeasly (Signed) · Date: 03/15/06 21:24 · For: My Amortentia
All I can say is "Awww". That was a very sweet story, I loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot. P.S. Still love your name.

Name: Adelfore Flamell (Signed) · Date: 03/06/06 11:30 · For: My Amortentia
very cute. It reminds me of one of those dreams that all boys have at this age. The one where the girl they want comes to them and professes their undying love for them. Boy Ron is one lucky guy. Well done.

Author's Response: SQUEE!!!!!!!!!!

Name: Harry and Hermonie (Signed) · Date: 03/04/06 11:32 · For: My Amortentia
1 friend and 0 boyfriends at the moment....said boyfriend is gay! But who knows, maybe I'll find somemore friends in sports..two at the moment!I am so sore it isnt' funny: I had two 'Draft Days' today, soccer and softball.

Author's Response: CXool, cool. Been a little busy playing RuneScape.

Name: Harry and Hermonie (Signed) · Date: 02/25/06 11:24 · For: My Amortentia
Ok, you are right; blaming you was no excuse, and I'm sorry for the way I've been acting; it's sorta hard on you when your son-of-a-bitch step-father absues you, your mother doesn't believe you, and your live is falling apart. once again, sorry.

Author's Response: Hey, at least you got a boyfriend and friends to help you. My 'friends' talk about me behind my back, and I've never had a boyfriend. But what idiot boy would date me? Seriously, the only feiend I have lives in Florida and is my cousin. I did make a few true friends this year, but the last 12 years of my life have been shit.

Name: maschan (Signed) · Date: 02/25/06 10:02 · For: My Amortentia
hey Amanda, i read her revews, got mad at hes 4 blaming u on her boyfriend, but agreed with her on 1 thing, and that is; HARRY/HERMONE ALL THE WAY! however, thats nothing 2 break r friendship over. TTFN, MATT

Author's Response: Yeah, you believe in H/Hr (even though JKR said its R/Hr) and I believe in R/Hr, but we ain't fighting. So, Harry and Hermione, why don't you just shut the fuck up and leave me the hell alone.

Name: Harry and Hermonie (Signed) · Date: 02/24/06 18:32 · For: My Amortentia
This crap is just pissing me off big time....I am so fucking [yeah, I'll say it if I want] pissed off with you, I just went and blew off my boyfriend, so because of you, tomorrow I'll be single. 0!!

Author's Response: Okay, I tried to keep my temper, but blaming me is no fucking excuse. I am so sick of you, you little... mother- fucking slutty bastard!!!!!!! I hate you, and I don't care what you do to this story, because I know that it's still the greatest fucking story I wrote. So piss off, and you will rue the day that you started taslking to me!!

Name: Harry and Hermonie (Signed) · Date: 02/24/06 15:54 · For: My Amortentia
OK,ya know what..I am so freakin sick of putting up with people all day, that for right now I am just going to forget the whole damn shipping crap. I've had a hell of a day, and can't put up with much more.

Author's Response: Yo, I've been sick all f*cking day, but you don't see me bitchin'.

Name: Harry and Hermonie (Signed) · Date: 02/24/06 15:54 · For: My Amortentia
OK,ya know what..I am so freakin sick of putting up with people all day, that for right now I am just going to forget the whole damn shipping crap. I've had a hell of a day, and can't put up with much more.

Author's Response: Yo, I've been sick all f*cking day, but you don't see me bitchin'.

Name: Harry and Hermonie (Signed) · Date: 02/24/06 15:54 · For: My Amortentia
OK,ya know what..I am so freakin sick of putting up with people all day, that for right now I am just going to forget the whole damn shipping crap. I've had a hell of a day, and can't put up with much more.

Author's Response: Yo, I've been sick all f*cking day, but you don't see me bitchin'.

Name: Harry and Hermonie (Signed) · Date: 02/23/06 6:19 · For: My Amortentia
'After finishing book 6, and reading tons of editorials telling H/Hr shippers how delusional they are, I decided that I needed to finally put in a word for the H/Hr shippers. Lately, many people have been trying to get into the heads of H/Hr shippers, and figure out what made us tick the way we did, and the best way I know how to give you guys a glimpse is to tell you how I got thrown into the huge shipping world. My Journey It was shortly after the release of OotP (about six months) that I was looking around my favorite HP sites, when all of a sudden my mouse hit a link, one I had never seen before entitled...Fan fiction. I pulled up the first story my mouse clicked on and was instantly hooked. Now this may be surprising, but the first story I fell in love with was one that involved the children of Harry/Luna and Ron/Hermione. Unfortunately for me I was hastily swept away from the computer, and thus did not emotionally connect with the ships I was first introduced to. Now you see I, like many HP fans, have always had a great connection with Hermione. More books than friends, and a great quest for knowledge. So, it was no surprise that when I read my first H/Hr piece of fan fiction, I was instantly enthralled. It was like reading a fairytale, with the princess being so much like me! And so, despite my better judgment, I fell head first into the shipping world. But as soon as I fell in, I fell out, and gave up completely on fan fiction and most HP in general for almost a year, after finally realizing something. I was emotionally investing in something that most evidence pointed against. After some hard consideration I slowly began scanning editorials again, but fan fiction was out of my life completely. You see, I saw all the signs pointing towards an R/Hr relationship -- it’s kind of hard not to -- but as I grew in my understanding of literature I started to see small evidence towards an H/Hr relationship as well. So it was, two months before HBP was released, I found myself discussing romantic possibilities in the CoS forums. I loved H/Hr more than any other ship in the HP world, but even I saw that there was evidence for other ships as well. Maybe it was me not trying to be disappointed, or maybe I knew it wasn’t going to happen, but I started, again, detaching myself from the shipping world, and merely hoping that I would get my fairytale. Then came the moment of truth. I picked up my new book as soon as Barnes and Noble opened on Saturday morning and read for eight hours straight. And now I am to the point of the editorial, an H/Hr shippers view on Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince. Storyline I don’t think it is possible to say that J.K. Rowling lacked imagination in this book. It was thrilling, and gave us tons of answers to the questions we eagerly discussed. After reading the first two chapters I thought for sure this would be my favorite book. And to a degree it is, but I have to admit I was disappointed, not because my ship was sunk, but because I wasn’t as emotionally invested. The whole, “let’s put things off” discussion with Ginny at the end of the book, and the fact that Harry’s not planning to return to Hogwarts, just gave me that Spiderman/Lord of the Rings/Star Wars feel to it. It fit, but it’s been overdone recently in the Hollywood media. Many H/Hr shippers hated this book. After reading some forums I realized how much people had gone overboard with someone else’s creation. Many were planning on taking the book back, never reading it again and some never planned on buying the seventh. Many people have called it, “The Fan fiction version of Half-Blood Prince” implying that it was too clichéd and predictable in their eyes. And in a sense I agree, there were clichéd moments, but that wasn’t what the whole book was about. Characters This was where I felt the most disappointment. You won’t hear me ever call canon Hermione/Ron/Harry/Giant Squid out of character, but I will admit that it seemed that some things didn’t seem to fit with who I thought they had grown up to be... Harry: I didn’t feel that Harry drastically changed in this book. We didn’t get “inside his head” as much as other books, but it wasn’t that big of a change. Ron: As many of my fellow shippers would agree, he didn’t change at all. He grew up, and we had some solid laughs with him. “Harry, I think I love her.” Hermione: And this is where it gets dicey. Jealousy was never something I truly thought of as a Hermione trait. Sure, she had her moments in GoF, but it never was to the point of disaster. Attacking a crush with a bunch of birds doesn’t exactly say "Brightest Witch in School" to me. Ginny: I have to say I have never gotten to know Ginny. Even while she and Harry were dating, you never saw them have much page time with a real live conversation except in the last chapter. To me, that was disappointing. I probably would have liked her relationship with Harry if I had gotten to know her a little better. The Interview Delusional. Emerson’s word of the day, and one of the biggest insults that could be given to any shipper. I don’t blame Emerson for what he said; if it was me instead of him I’d have probably done the same thing. But I think, had that not have been said, H/Hr shippers may have been more eager to just go lick their wounds. But to kick so many while they were already down did offend a great number of us. Because of that, many went over the edge in their hurt by being completely uncivilized. Most of us invested in the H/Hr ship based it on what we would like to happen. We didn’t like the idea of R/H, H/L, or H/G so we placed our hero/heroine with who we thought they were best suited in our own eyes. Just because we saw the signs pointing against us didn’t mean we wanted it to happen. Just because we saw that Sirius went through the veil didn’t mean that we wanted him to really be dead. Many wanted him to (and believe he will) rise from the dead. Even though all the evidence points against it, many don’t want to accept that fact. To us H/Hr shippers, it was similar. We saw the evidence, and because we didn’t like the outcome we dug for different evidence to see if we could change the ending. Delusional. Maybe. But no more delusional than any other theorist who has been brought down by an installment of our favorite series. I won’t condone anyone for saying what some have said about Emerson/Melissa/J.K. Rowling/Hermione or anything else related to the whole shipping debate. Our ship has been sunk and it’s a hard blow to take for some, especially after what has been said about us since then. The more dignified of us will go now and lick our wounds in peace, but I ask all of you who are reading to let us do so and not continuously bring up what is an obviously sore subject among us.Delusional maybe, but leave us in peace.' Have you read this?I think that I dida very good job, don't you?Anywaay,I have read that interview, and sure, I agree with it, but I still think that they shouldn't be together.

Author's Response: Okay, you have your opinion, and i have mine. I still don't know (and I don't think I want to) know how this H/Hr thing started. i mean, there were clues since PoA, for God sake. Interesting. We both fell into the fanfiction world almost the exact same way: by accident. I was bored one day, so I typed in "Harry Potter' on Google, and a buncha MuggleNet stuff came up. I checked it out, and have never left. Okay, i respect the fact that you support H/Hr, and you respect the fact I support R/Hr. One of us will be right, and if I win, then you put up a good fight. I promise not to gloat, if you promise not to if H/Hr wins. I think Emerson was wrong to called you all delusional, especially when you were proved wrong anyway. So, thanks for reviewing.

Name: Narwen3 (Signed) · Date: 02/21/06 17:45 · For: My Amortentia
My goodness, but some people need to have a little more respect for the authors around here. I mean, I'll read a Draco/Hermione even though everyone knows that's not going to happen(no seriously guys, it's been shot down so often). It's not like any of this is real anyways. Sorry, rant over. I really enjoyed this! It was a lot of fun and really sweet, especially with Harry knowing everything that goes on. Great job!

Author's Response: No, no, I respect the dude who reviewed and was mean. I asked for a review, good or bad, and he/she did. I can't complain. I love to rant, don't be ashamed. Thankies. See ya!

Name: ronandharryluver (Signed) · Date: 02/12/06 16:19 · For: My Amortentia
That harry and hermonie person is really mean! I for one luved it! It was so nice and fluffy and sweet i really liked it and i addded it to my favorites with all your other ones! Keep writing! this story is a 10/10!

Author's Response: Thanks! I deserved that critism, I ruined someone else's reviews, she just stood up for him/her. Thanks for the 10/10! My next story's in queue! It's called "Worth Everything I Had''! It should be out soon! YAY!

Name: Harry and Hermonie (Signed) · Date: 02/04/06 9:46 · For: My Amortentia
Okay, you asked for a review so you got it: I only read this, because I wanted to compare it with king's H/Hr fic[you know?the one where you reviewed 'IN YOUR F*CKING FACE?] But, anyway, I think that this sucks!!I was a H/Hr until I read OotP, and after that I sorta became a H/G shipper, but I always HATED the R/Hr ship!You asked for a review, so I reviewed, and you shouldn't get so riled up.

Author's Response: Okay, okay, I won't get riled, I admit I deserved that for screwing up her reviews, too. I have never been a H/Hr person, and I'm very sorry to say that you will be very disappointed. When the 7th book comes out. Now, I diddn't get riled, like you asked me, so please, not to be mean, but can you not, like, review me again? I'm not trying to be mean, I just... donj't want to start something. After I said that to the king dude, I got banned from MuggleNet for four days, so I'm just trying to help you, okay? Cool?

Author's Response: THIS IS AN ACTUAL JKR INTERVIEW WITH MUGGLENET AND THE LEAKY DUDES. ES: We thought it was clearer than ever that Harry and Ginny are an item and Ron and Hermione — although we think you made it painfully obvious in the first five books — JKR: [points to herself and whispers] So do I! ES: What was that? JKR: [More loudly] Well so do I! So do I! [All laugh; Melissa doubles over, hysterical, and may have died.] ES: Harry/Hermione shippers - delusional! JKR: Well no, I'm not going to - Emerson, I am not going to say they're delusional! They are still valued members of my readership! I am not going to use the word delusional. I am however, going to say — now I am trusting both of you to do the spoiler thing when you write this up — [More laughter.] JKR: I will say, that yes, I personally feel - well it's going to be clear once people have read book six. I mean, that’s it. It’s done, isn’t it? We know. Yes, we do now know that it's Ron and Hermione. I do feel that I have dropped heavy - [All crack up] JKR: - hints. ANVIL-sized, actually, hints, prior to this point. I certainly think even if subtle clues hadn't been picked up by the end of “Azkaban,” that by the time we hit Krum in Goblet... But Ron — I had a lot of fun with that in this book. I really enjoyed writing the Ron/Lavender business, and the reason that was enjoyable was Ron up to this point has been quite immature compared to the other two and he kind of needed to make himself worthy of Hermione. Now, that didn't mean necessarily physical experience but he had to grow up emotionally and now he's taken a big step up. Because he's had the meaningless physical experience - let’s face it, his emotions were never deeply engaged with Lavender - [Much laughter in which Melissa emits a "Won-Won"] JKR: - and he's realized that that is ultimately not what he wants, which takes him a huge emotional step forward. ES: So he's got a little bit more than a teaspoon, now there’s a tablespoon? JKR: Yeah, I think. [Laughter] MA: Watching all this, were you surprised when you first logged on and found this intense devotion to this thing that you knew was not going to happen? JKR: Yes. Well, you see, I'm a relative newcomer to the world of shipping, because for a long time, I didn't go on the net and look up Harry Potter. A long time. Occasionally I had to, because there were weird news stories or something that I would have to go and check, because I was supposed to have said something I hadn’t said. I had never gone and looked at fan sites, and then one day I did and oh - my - god. Five hours later or something, I get up from the computer shaking slightly [all laugh]. ‘What is going on?’ And it was during that first mammoth session that I met the shippers, and it was a most extraordinary thing. I had no idea there was this huge underworld seething beneath me. ES: She’s putting it into a positive light! JKR: Well I am, I am, but you know. I want to make it clear that delusional is your word and not mine! [Much laughter.] MA: You're making our lives a lot easier by laying it on the table - JKR: Well I think anyone who is still shipping Harry/Hermione after this book - ES: [whispered] Delusional! JKR: Uh - no! But they need to go back and reread, I think. ES: Thank you. JKR: Yeah.

Author's Response: If you want to see this the way it's suppossed to look, check out my profile!

Name: KoolGirl (Signed) · Date: 02/01/06 20:48 · For: My Amortentia
aw sweet. continue writing!

Author's Response: I will, don't worry. I have a new story in queue called "Worth Everything I Had". I submitted it before, but I made too many spelling mistakes. i checked and doubley-checked, so it SHOULD be out soon!

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