this is great! i loved this. I'm usually hesitant to read thing with the whole Hr/R/L stuff cuz Hermione is my favorite, and the whole things depressing really, but this was awesome.
I burst out into hysterical laughter at 'Cormac Krum' best. thing. ever.
Cheers.
Awww that was cute! Though in my opinion it shouldn't have been "well I smelled uh you." I think it should have been a smell of something that reminded them of the person. Thats just mine though. So like ron would have smelled parchment, just because that's what Hermione smells like. It's not a smell he would naturally love but since it comes with Hermione he loves it. Does that make sense?
-Windy
nice, cute, but cormac krum lol, three cheers for my fave couple
it was okay it was short and sweet i guess
loooveeddd it!
Author's Response: yay =]
it was a sweet story. i would give it 3 and a half stars. good job!
Author's Response: haha awesome! thanks =]
it was a sweet story. i would give it 3 and a half stars. good job!
Author's Response: cool thnaks you =]
:D it was great :D
it was a change from them kissing for the first time and suddenly it was a deep kiss and then, then then....many stories have the two already doing things simply with the first kiss. This was a soft, simple, quick kiss, which is the best for a new found relationship between ron and hermione. amazing, truly amazing
eskimo
Author's Response: =D thank you
:D it was great :D
it was a change from them kissing for the first time and suddenly it was a deep kiss and then, then then....many stories have the two already doing things simply with the first kiss. This was a soft, simple, quick kiss, which is the best for a new found relationship between ron and hermione. amazing, truly amazing
eskimo
Author's Response: haha, hey thank you very much.
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dude, this is goign to sound crazy, but I love your stuff! Honest! Writting style works, how you protray the charecters is amazing! Great fic!
Author's Response: gee, thanks, i didnt know i was so great
i LOVED it but maybe you cut it a little to hort on the love kissy kissy scene-y'know they have just discovered their true love, duh?but i still LOVE it why couldnt jkr mak it this simple?
Author's Response: i know its that simple! WHY??!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wonderful 100/10
Author's Response: thankies
p.p.s. i thought ur disclaimer was funny
Author's Response: Lol, thanks
pretty decent story. better than i could of written. so kudos to you
p.s. i think ur right about r/hrm
Author's Response: Ron/Hermione all the way!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i t was good but it dousn't seem like it would ever really fit in the book. it was really sweet though.
Author's Response: Like i said