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I like the open end! The reader doesn't know if Harry will wake up or not, because that's not really the point, is it? I like Percy and Ginny's interactions, they seem very natural. I do think Percy is a bit too stubborn to accept the Burrow just like that, though.
I've been meaning to review this story for awhile now. Darn me and my precrastination. Anyway that's off the point. I really like this story. It's not really a story that I thought that I would be into, but appearently I am. LOL. Thanks for the intertainment!
Author's Response: You are welcome! And thanks for the review!
This fic is lovely! Percy was no longer a git, but he was still in character. Another thing I liked about it was the Cho/Charlie pairing, which I think blended in really nicely.
The ending made me smile :-)
Author's Response: Thank you very much, Dawn! I really appreciate that you took your time to review this little fic of mine.
Fantastic! I really enjoyed it. Good Job and keep going
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, houseelf!
Fantastic little one-shot, full of feeling. I liked the pairing, and your style of writing. Good luck!
Author's Response: Thanks, rita. It was so hard to write this, that I actually wanted to give up, but the idea wouldn't want to go away. ;-) Your review makes it worth.
Cool your first review.*jumps around for joy* I liked it for the most part but (there are always but's) I think that the deaths were a little close together. But over all nice story.
Author's Response: Thanks. I appreciate your review, especially because it's coming from a Ginny Weasley ;-) As for the but: Well, that's war. People are dying in wars and terrible as it may seem, whole families can perish during wars. That's why I truly despise wars and the clash of ideologies, because mothers lost their sons and sisters lost their brothers.