Reviews For The Puppies!
Reviewer: WeasleyisMYKing12
Date: 02/09/08 16:28
Chapter: Christmas Presents

I loved the fic, but you know what? In nearly every fic where remus has a pet, it's always named romulus, even in my own fics. It's still amazing. I love your writing. 'specially Remus/Sirius's.
lots of love,
~Weasles

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 09/26/07 14:43
Chapter: Christmas Presents

AWWWWWW!!! That was so cute!

Author's Response:
*pets you*

Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: ssslytherin
Date: 08/05/07 15:18
Chapter: Christmas Presents

Sssooooo cute

Author's Response: Thanks sooooo much!

Reviewer: lupins_girl2006
Date: 12/15/06 14:51
Chapter: Christmas Presents

I. Loved. It.

Author's Response: Thank. You. Much.

Reviewer: mon_ami_runa
Date: 07/03/06 15:15
Chapter: Christmas Presents

aaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww that is soo beautiful thanks so much
hugs
mon_ami_runa

Author's Response: You're welcome and thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Alexys_Nicole
Date: 06/19/06 1:18
Chapter: Christmas Presents

How funny you mentioned SOCKS... I love this it is sweet. The puppy was SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Cute.Wait did you describe the puppy? I ask the hard hitting questions don't I?

Author's Response: I mention socks EVERYWHERE. It started in 'No One Can Save You From Yourself' and is probably mentioned at least once in every fic. Sirius just doesnt' like for his feet the be cold. And I don't think that I discussed the puppy much...Yes. A budding Katie Couric, but I'm not sure that means anything to you...

Reviewer: Alexys_Nicole
Date: 06/19/06 1:12
Chapter: Christmas Presents

She's lovin' it... just like McDonald's.

Author's Response: Good, then. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: aintcrazy4you
Date: 05/26/06 23:09
Chapter: Christmas Presents

AHHHHH!!!!!!! This story is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUUUUUUUUUUTTTTTTTEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm LOVIN' it!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Aschere
Date: 04/17/06 13:39
Chapter: Christmas Presents

I loved it! Naming the puppy Romulus was so perfect! I love the Wolfstar ship, and you do it so well. Keep it up! You're on my favourites ^^.

Author's Response: Well, what else was I going to name him? Cerebrus is much too big a name for a puppy. Glad you got the reference though. Hee. There's much more of my work over at Legion of LSPM's 'Much Ado About Puppies' for which I'm writing all the Hogwarts years. Eleven chapters and another twenty five to go before they graduate....You should check it out.

Reviewer: CreeveySister
Date: 02/04/06 21:46
Chapter: Christmas Presents

That was utterly adorable. 'Nuff said! <3

Author's Response: Oh my god, you're alive! Did you read chapter three of the crack!fic? I think I've been delegated all the Hogwarts years. I just have to write the actual finding out of second year and then I've got four chapters that take us from third year to middle of fifth and the first kiss!

Reviewer: nitouken
Date: 01/22/06 16:54
Chapter: Christmas Presents

Hmm. I enjoyed it, despite the fact that I do not really ship Wolfstar. The image of Remus pretending not to have a present was wonderful, and I do like your choice of name for a puppy. I am, however, forced to agree with VV on your use of commas, i.e., there should be more. In general, though, pretty good.

Author's Response: Ha! You did review! I'm so proud! I thought the puppy's name was a stroke of inspiration, actually. So ha! on your own complications. Lol. There will be no commas. You know why? Because people don't talk or think like that in real life. That's why. So. You have no become one of many in a long line of reviewers that I have stuck my tongue out at. *somt!* Don't worry. It's a good thing!

Reviewer: songbook99
Date: 01/09/06 13:25
Chapter: Christmas Presents

Yet another fantastic short-fic from you. This is a great one-shot that you use quite well to capture a great Christmas moment. I love the way that you tie this in so well with your other fic "No One Can Save You From Yourself." I won't mention anything about commas, though, because I don't want to have to endure your tongue being stuck out at me again. **wink** However, I think you are missing a word, which I added in bold, in this sentence: 'Remus was back to sleep long before Sirius, a soft smile on his face, making him beautiful even [b]in[/b] his sleep.' I just couldn't read this sentence without adding that word, and even when I went back and tried to make sense of it without it, it just didn't work. Also, I'm pretty sure there is a typo, which I have bolded, in this sentence: ' “You know,” he added after a moment, “James [b]if[/b] going to have a ball with this.” ' I think the word 'if' should be 'is' instead. Okay, aside from my two little bits of nit-picking, I absolutely loved this one-shot. It gave me a little warm fuzzy feeling that I associate with Christmas. Very well done, as always!

Author's Response: I have no idea of why I didn't get an e-mail about this review; so sorry to keep you waiting! I'm glad you loved it and I hope you'll love all the one-shots I have waiting for posting. Thanks!

Reviewer: songbook99
Date: 01/09/06 13:19
Chapter: Christmas Presents

Yet another fantastic short-fic from you. This is a great one-shot that you use quite well to capture a great Christmas moment. I love the way that you tie this in so well with your other fic "No One Can Save You From Yourself." I won't mention anything about commas, though, because I don't want to have to endure your tongue being stuck out at me again. **wink** However, I think you are missing a word, which I added in bold, in this sentence: 'Remus was back to sleep long before Sirius, a soft smile on his face, making him beautiful even [b]in[/b] his sleep.' I just couldn't read this sentence without adding that word, and even when I went back and tried to make sense of it without it, it just didn't work. Also, I'm pretty sure there is a typo, which I have bolded, in this sentence: ' “You know,” he added after a moment, “James [b]if[/b] going to have a ball with this.” ' I think the word 'if' should be 'is' instead. Okay, aside from my two little bits of nit-picking, I absolutely loved this one-shot. It gave me a little warm fuzzy feeling that I associate with Christmas. Very well done, as always!

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you! I shall even forgive the double-posting (again) Heh. Lovely for upping my count and what not. This didn't really start out this way; in the original version they both got puppies. But I had written that before the challenge and figured only the one-way would work best. Maybe, one day, I shall post the other version as well. And I am trying very hard to keep everything consistant, balancing things I wrote with the joint fic and all the Wolfstar list fics. *groans* Why do I do this to myself? Why? *wail* Thanks for reading! *sticking out my tongue at you for old time's sake: ;P)

Reviewer: Siriuslylupin
Date: 12/24/05 14:20
Chapter: Christmas Presents

Hehe... kvetch.... *ahem* Sorry. I am not a WolfStar shipper, but an admittedly obsessed fan of both characters. One needs only to look at my username... Anyway, it was a really wonderful fic. Best of luck with the challenge!

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks!

Reviewer: Vindictus Viridian
Date: 12/21/05 13:40
Chapter: Christmas Presents

Hah! I'm here first! Not that I haven't already said a great deal about this little story. I'll squee a bit, though, even if I'm not a WolfStar shipper, because I like puppies. And I love the fact that Sirius just never will get around to growing up if he can possibly avoid it. My only kvetch -- commas! *gives Slian a not-unaffectionate noogying* Always needed to set off the moments when someone is being addressed. "I think, Ann, you've left a window open somewhere." Nag, nag; pester, pester.

Author's Response: *stick out tongue* busy busy; ignore, ignore. You are too letting me get to you: kvetch? Come now, V V.... SIRIUS WILL NEVER GROW UP! It is a physical imposibility. A puppy will remain a puppy forever! There is nothing you can do to make them grow! (Well, the good Lord only knows what Hagrid did to Fang--nudge, nudge; private laugh, private laugh-- but otherwise....)

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