Reviews For Day of the Spoons
Reviewer: Lilypudding
Date: 12/22/05 19:29
Chapter: Chapter one

First, let me establish that this is absolutely hilarious, but it needs some work. The summary... you really need to do something about it. Also, when Ron and Harry exchanged the "Don't ask" looks I think you put a puntuation mark you didn't need, I know something there didn't look right. Other than that, I really liked the whole plot! The "We're with da forks" part seriously made me laugh out loud! The emotional range of a teaspoon line is literally my favorite Potterism ever, being a devout Ron/Hermione shipper, and I loved seeing it be used in this content. Clean it up a little, and you have an absolutely brilliant story! Fabulous!

Author's Response: Nah, I like the end how it is :)

Author's Response: puntuation? The story needs some puns?

Reviewer: HermyRox12
Date: 12/21/05 17:09
Chapter: Chapter one

Hahaha. It feels good to laugh. Yeah, Fred and George should definatly wait a year before telling Hermione. HAHAHA! 10/10

Author's Response: Somehow I don't think they will ever actually get around to telling her :)

Reviewer: SiriuslyInLuvWithSirius
Date: 12/21/05 2:20
Chapter: Chapter one

That was halarious!!!! I loved the note from the latrines that made her change her mind, and her little speech about cutlery and appliances at Hogwarts. The twist with Fred and George was quite funny, too. You need to write more! This totally deserved five stars, and ... I'm not as creative as everyone else who reviewed, but 11/10! There was one tiny thing I saw that you could change: “That’s what I though, at first,” she said. You need a 't' on the end of that, I think. Anways, you should totally write more. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.

Author's Response: Good catch. Fixed now. Thanks.

Reviewer: Musicmary93
Date: 12/20/05 13:00
Chapter: Chapter one

I loved it i think you should do many more chapters for this full of Fred and Georges little pranks! I bet it would be sooooo funny!!!

Author's Response: I prefer to make each story a one shot (stand alone) fic.

Reviewer: Cedrics Lover
Date: 12/20/05 10:42
Chapter: Chapter one

hehehe

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: amazingpikachu
Date: 12/20/05 8:20
Chapter: Chapter one

omg that was so funny i just got yelled at in study hall!!!! you're not supposed to make any sounds but i just had to laugh (and fall to the floor gripping by sides, trying to supress my giddyness!) that was AWESOME! i'm SOOOO adding this to my favorites!!!!! *goes to select review* What?! THERE'S NO 11?!?!? write more stuff like this cuz methinks you're HILARIOUS!!!

Author's Response: Although I am sorry it got you busted, I am happy you liked it that much :)

Reviewer: ligiligirl
Date: 12/20/05 8:09
Chapter: Chapter one

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHABABABABABABAOOPSHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA THAT WAS BLOODY BRILLIANT! It's a pity though, I hoped it was my fic that just got posted. However, on a scale of one to 10, I give you 11

Author's Response: I know that feeling. This got deleted after a few weeks of waiting in the queue the first time I tried to post it.

Reviewer: angelina weasley
Date: 12/20/05 7:46
Chapter: Chapter one

*laughs insainly* That was really good! five stars outta five! I really thought the Fred and George twist was really funny. Unless this was a one - shot plz write more.

Author's Response: Sorry, it is a one-shot.

Reviewer: angelina weasley
Date: 12/20/05 7:45
Chapter: Chapter one

*laughs insainly* That was really good! five stars outta five! I really thought the Fred and George twist was really funny. Unless this was a one - shot plz write more.

Author's Response: I seem to have this twice?

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