That was....Interesting...I liked it.
Yay! Cedric is my favorite character and not just because I'm in love with him, so I really enjoyed just this prologue. I love the way you write his thoughts, and I actually almost cried when he said, "Hold on, Harry!" Really great start! I can't wait to read the rest.
I'm enjoying this I've bee scouring the net for decently written (spell-checked and showing a grasp of English grammar), as well as fun Cedric stories. You have a nice sense of his voice. Very easy to read. Thank you!
Upon a 17th read (approximately) I thought the opening with Mr. Diggory got a little repetitive. I do suppose though that it's understandable, since it was 2 am. I like the way you're building the relationships between the characters. Since everyone basically knows the storyline, this story could get boring very easily, but I think you're safe from that so far with what you've done. You make me want to know the characters more. It's especially interesting to see how the relationship between Cedric and Cho will develop.
Aww the way Cedric cared for the little girl was adorable and seemed very in character. I'm looking forward to seeing how he interacts with all of his friends back at school. And he seems to have quite the cute budding relationship with Cho!
aww, I like the little girl. I was laughing so hard at that scene- I rarely do that. Very well written, and Cedric is an interesting character. You are doing a good job.
Wow. You've got such a great grasp of Amos and Mrs Diggory. Amos especially. He's exactly the way I imagined him to be. Great job. The Cedric/Cho scenarios were cute. The way Amos told him about Krum being the Seeker, was nice. Hope you have the next chapter up soon. Until then, bye.
After a long wait for a good fic about Cedric, I think I've finally discovered it. :)
Anyway, onto the fic: Wow, it was awesome. I like the way you described the confusion going on inside Cedric's mind. And how he slowly realised that Harry was Harry. This story had so much potential, I love to see how it's developed. Great job so far, keep it up, and "Remember Cedric Diggory" is going into my faves.
One small thing was the summary. Like Lilypudding said, it sounds a bit conceited, and misleading. You could consider revising it. Apart form that, the prologue was great.
P.S. I found this by the link you had put in the Cedric thread on the Forums.
Author's Response: Oh, yay! I'm glad you liked it. I hope it stays good, though, I must agree that the next chapter is much better. :) I'm honored that it's already in your favorites--I hope it stays there as the story goes on! Sounds like I'll be changing the summary... :) I guess I'll give the people what they want... just let me leave it there until I discover the perfect way to introduce it. I haven't found it yet--Cedric hasn't given me any hints either! ;) But thanks so much for the review!
Great job! This is a great idea for a story, especially because Cedric's death is so overlooked after the deaths in OotP and HBP. It was very good and had potential to be extremely moving. I didn't like what you put in the summary about JKR though, that was a bit off-putting and almost concieted. Other than that, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I do think Cedric has a very interesting story--especially the more I write and the more I discover about him. I'm sorry you didn't like the summary... one of those dry humor moments. Perhaps I'll change it... when I come up with something good and not lame. Any suggestions? :) For now I'm working on the rest of the story... thanks for reading!
Remember that one time when you wrote this chapter in like...an hour? I remember that time. You came up with the story and had to hurry and write it before you left your connection to the internet. Yeah. That was awesome. I can't wait for the coming chapters. I think the next one is already like 15 times better than this one...but don't worry, I still like this one. It captures the raw confusion that I can imagine Cedric going through at this point.
Author's Response: Remember that one time when you were a freaking awesome roommate? Oh wait... that's a lot. Anyways, thank you, thank you, I appreciate the love and support and countless editing sessions!!! I hope it's worth it. :) You're awesome. Thanks again for all the help.
Great idea for a story. Perfect name for it. And probably the best place to start. It's sad that it will have to end in the same place it started.... Poor Cedric. :( I'm looking forward to the rest.
Author's Response: Why thank you, my dear! :) It is sad that it will have to end back here... I hope the journey is enjoyable! Let me know what you think--I do value your opinion.