Reviewer: qqquill_rita
Date: 11/27/07 7:23
Chapter: Not Such a Bad Christmas After All

i loved this. ron and lavender DEFINITELY did not work out. however i liked lavender and i am glad something good happened to her!

Reviewer: magic_mayhem2
Date: 12/19/05 16:57
Chapter: Not Such a Bad Christmas After All

Really sweet & all, but too short! It was nice and cute & sweet, but a little short on the words! Sodding cra*...sry I'm late. Why did u write it short?

Author's Response: I guess it was time constraints really...I do think I could have put a bit more in. What do you think: Was it too rushed? How could I have made it longer? Did it finish in a bad place? Since you thought it was too short, I would be interested to know your thoughts. Anyway, thanks for your comments :-)

Reviewer: MasterAuror
Date: 12/19/05 10:37
Chapter: Not Such a Bad Christmas After All

Excelent Story :) I always enjoy when a talented writer fleshes out the worl of harry potter, showing us all that there's more to it than "The boy who lived". There are peple, real people, and real emotions. That's what fac fiction is all about. It's not about folowing the trio, it's good if you stick to cannon though, and this story does a VERY good job in both of those areas. Nice work!! I expect the same in your future writings :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

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