This is wonderful. I've added it to my faves. It looks like a great begining to what must be a great story! I can't wait til you update! 10/10!
This was good. It's the first Draco/Ginny fic I've read, and you've given me a good impression of this ship. I just wanted to point out that Floo Powder is capitalised; you did forget it in several places. But not to worry. The characters all acted quite IC, but I would suggest that you don't call hermione "granger." Only Malfoy calls her that, and the story isn't from his POV. IT's from an omniscient POV, so I think that "Hermione" would suffice. Overall, though, nicely written! Now I'm going to go read some more draco/Ginny fics! You've inspired me ! Good job!
I t was good. A bit confusing with the flash backs .And great plot .keep up the good work
ooo, i love it. strong plot, good opening chapter please oh please update soon!
Good chapter, and I don't think it is too long. About the rest of the story, I prefer A or B, otherwise the story doesn't seem to be complete.
I loved this. It does seem like it has a strong plot and I'm interested in watching it unravel. Everything is very well written and I'm looking forward to more! -erin
Looks like you went over the word limit. Might want to change that. Anyway, this was a pretty good story. Kind of long, though. At first I was kind of confused by the way you went back and forth but it doesn't really take away from the story. Update please!